Title: Kiza
Author: Keyla Kenobi - delilah_br@hotmail.com
Rating: definately PG
Feedback: Yes! Please!
Archive: Sure, just e-mail me!
Disclaimer: The boys belong to George Lucas, I don't make money with this, I just use them for the MUSH!
Warning: There is a loving and parental relationship between Obi and Qui, there is no slash so if you don't like that, don't read any further.
Summary: A dark enemy is back and his next victim is Obi-Wan. Will Qui-Gon be back in time to save him?
Beta-Read by Aida (The best Beta-reader!!!! Thanx!!)
/ personal thoughts / // metal link //
Authors note: this one is what follows to that lil fic called Fear that I write some time ago. It's my first attemp at suspense (yes Aida, you're right! :) ) so please be nice! :D BTW, you should read Fear first, just get an idea. 'Kiza' means (I think) 'darkness' in Swahili.
Check out also my other fic if you want:
Grumpy Tummy, A very Important Prescene In My Life, A Rainy Day, Fear, Teaching and Learning, I Found You and Together (sequeal to I Found You).
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Kiza
Part 1
"I'll be back in a week, Obi-Wan," Master Qui-Gon Jinn repeated, turning to look at his worried Padawan.
The young man looked up at his Master with his well-known puppy dog eyes, "But do you have to go alone?" he whined.
"You're not going to convince me with that look, Padawan, so you might as well stop. I'm immune to it by now," Qui-Gon smiled and chuckled as he drew the boy into a warm and affectionate hug.
Obi-Wan returned the hug with all his strength, holding on as if to keep his Master from leaving. He had a very bad feeling about all this.
"Wow!" Qui-Gon laughed, "Be careful with my back, Padawan. I'm not made out of iron."
Obi-wan smiled and laughed too. They held the embrace for several minutes until Qui-Gon was the first to pull back. "You will be staying with Master Skyla until I get back. Okay?"
Obi-Wan nodded obediently, but inside him a war was being waged. All his senses screamed at him, telling him not to let Master Qui-Gon go on the mission; that something horrible was going to happen.
But he shrugged and pushed all the anxious thoughts out of his head and, instead, gave his Master a beaming smile. After all, his Master was the one who was always telling him not to center on his anxieties.
Qui-Gon glanced behind him and saw that his transport was being boarded. "All right, Obi-Wan, time to go. Be a good boy, okay? And try not to give Master Skyla too many headaches," he added good naturedly as he playfully ruffled his Padawan's hair. Still chuckling, he picked up his bag and headed towards the transport.
"Master!" Obi-Wan had attempted to sound offended. But the smile on his lips completely ruined the attempt.
Long after Qui-Gon had boarded the ship, and the ship had disappeared from sight, Obi-Wan continued to remain in the hangar. He looked past the clouds and at the small black dot that finally disappeared from view. He had a strange feeling this was going to be a long week.
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Master Skyla Lo'Tren smiled pleasantly as she began making arrangements for her new companion. She was glad to be spending time with Obi-Wan. She hadn't seen much of him since he had been accepted as Qui-Gon's Padawan. There. Everything was set. Now all she had to do was to wait for Obi-Wan's arrival.
Skyla was heading in the direction of the kitchen when she heard a soft knock at her door. Frowning, she walked towards it and called out, "Obi-Wan?"
No answer. The young Master opened the door using her access code. But after the door opened, she realized that no one was there. /How strange,/ she thought, /I could have sworn that I heard knocking./
Shrugging, Skyla slowly began closing the door. A sudden warning from the Force made her turn quickly, just in time to see a pair of yellow menacing eyes glaring back at her. Stunned and taken completely by surprise, Skyla never had a chance to cry out or escape from the sudden and enfolding darkness that engulfed her.
*****
Author: Keyla Kenobi - delilah_br@hotmail.com
Rating: definately PG
Feedback: Yes! Please!
Archive: Sure, just e-mail me!
Disclaimer: The boys belong to George Lucas, I don't make money with this, I just use them for the MUSH!
Warning: There is a loving and parental relationship between Obi and Qui, there is no slash so if you don't like that, don't read any further.
Summary: A dark enemy is back and his next victim is Obi-Wan. Will Qui-Gon be back in time to save him?
Beta-Read by Aida (The best Beta-reader!!!! Thanx!!)
/ personal thoughts / // metal link //
Authors note: this one is what follows to that lil fic called Fear that I write some time ago. It's my first attemp at suspense (yes Aida, you're right! :) ) so please be nice! :D BTW, you should read Fear first, just get an idea. 'Kiza' means (I think) 'darkness' in Swahili.
Check out also my other fic if you want:
Grumpy Tummy, A very Important Prescene In My Life, A Rainy Day, Fear, Teaching and Learning, I Found You and Together (sequeal to I Found You).
*******
Kiza
Part 1
"I'll be back in a week, Obi-Wan," Master Qui-Gon Jinn repeated, turning to look at his worried Padawan.
The young man looked up at his Master with his well-known puppy dog eyes, "But do you have to go alone?" he whined.
"You're not going to convince me with that look, Padawan, so you might as well stop. I'm immune to it by now," Qui-Gon smiled and chuckled as he drew the boy into a warm and affectionate hug.
Obi-Wan returned the hug with all his strength, holding on as if to keep his Master from leaving. He had a very bad feeling about all this.
"Wow!" Qui-Gon laughed, "Be careful with my back, Padawan. I'm not made out of iron."
Obi-wan smiled and laughed too. They held the embrace for several minutes until Qui-Gon was the first to pull back. "You will be staying with Master Skyla until I get back. Okay?"
Obi-Wan nodded obediently, but inside him a war was being waged. All his senses screamed at him, telling him not to let Master Qui-Gon go on the mission; that something horrible was going to happen.
But he shrugged and pushed all the anxious thoughts out of his head and, instead, gave his Master a beaming smile. After all, his Master was the one who was always telling him not to center on his anxieties.
Qui-Gon glanced behind him and saw that his transport was being boarded. "All right, Obi-Wan, time to go. Be a good boy, okay? And try not to give Master Skyla too many headaches," he added good naturedly as he playfully ruffled his Padawan's hair. Still chuckling, he picked up his bag and headed towards the transport.
"Master!" Obi-Wan had attempted to sound offended. But the smile on his lips completely ruined the attempt.
Long after Qui-Gon had boarded the ship, and the ship had disappeared from sight, Obi-Wan continued to remain in the hangar. He looked past the clouds and at the small black dot that finally disappeared from view. He had a strange feeling this was going to be a long week.
*****
Master Skyla Lo'Tren smiled pleasantly as she began making arrangements for her new companion. She was glad to be spending time with Obi-Wan. She hadn't seen much of him since he had been accepted as Qui-Gon's Padawan. There. Everything was set. Now all she had to do was to wait for Obi-Wan's arrival.
Skyla was heading in the direction of the kitchen when she heard a soft knock at her door. Frowning, she walked towards it and called out, "Obi-Wan?"
No answer. The young Master opened the door using her access code. But after the door opened, she realized that no one was there. /How strange,/ she thought, /I could have sworn that I heard knocking./
Shrugging, Skyla slowly began closing the door. A sudden warning from the Force made her turn quickly, just in time to see a pair of yellow menacing eyes glaring back at her. Stunned and taken completely by surprise, Skyla never had a chance to cry out or escape from the sudden and enfolding darkness that engulfed her.
*****