Something I began a while ago that I intended to fit in with my Vampire, Her Death & Perfect series. Set a long while after the movie.
I've had this in my hard drive for a while, so any suggestions, comments, criticisms would really be appreciated.
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The darkness surrounded her as the pain hit, dull at first, but with each savage thrust it tore through her tired flesh. Desperate, she tried to move, to gain back her senses. She didn't know where she was... her vision was blurred, a feeling.. pain. What was happening?
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He had her. Finally. He had waited so long, for her, for this. She was so beautiful, just as she had been. He didn't see the bruises, the scars and cuts. Nor did he see the woman, greyed and aged with experience rather than years. A girl, so beautiful. His hands roamed her 'youthful' body. He smiled as she writhed underneath him. She wanted him, he had always known. He had waited so long.
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Her senses failed her; a smell, so familiar. Memories, blurred visions. She had to...run. Her son...they had to escape. Another pain, sharper, hit her now. The memories faded.
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She should learn by now...she couldn't escape him. He planted a hard kiss on her bruised lips; she tasted so sweet...so innocent..
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I've had this in my hard drive for a while, so any suggestions, comments, criticisms would really be appreciated.
***
The darkness surrounded her as the pain hit, dull at first, but with each savage thrust it tore through her tired flesh. Desperate, she tried to move, to gain back her senses. She didn't know where she was... her vision was blurred, a feeling.. pain. What was happening?
~~~~~
He had her. Finally. He had waited so long, for her, for this. She was so beautiful, just as she had been. He didn't see the bruises, the scars and cuts. Nor did he see the woman, greyed and aged with experience rather than years. A girl, so beautiful. His hands roamed her 'youthful' body. He smiled as she writhed underneath him. She wanted him, he had always known. He had waited so long.
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Her senses failed her; a smell, so familiar. Memories, blurred visions. She had to...run. Her son...they had to escape. Another pain, sharper, hit her now. The memories faded.
~~~~
She should learn by now...she couldn't escape him. He planted a hard kiss on her bruised lips; she tasted so sweet...so innocent..
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