Undying Love
Part 3
Hi, I got a whole a lot of reviews and only about two people didn't like it. Don't worry it
will get better,
and I don't think it will be a lemon
though there will be yaoi in it. I hate details!
Disclaimers: *sob* there not mine!!
"Jim wake up." Someone was calling him. Jim couldn't see who though. "Jim, please.
I'm so sorry." The voice sounded
familiar and sad." Please Jim. I need you. Please open your eyes." Jim realized that the
voice was Gene's. That was his last
though before Jim fell into darkness again.
Gene looked at the sleeping Jim. Suszka had known what to do so they didn't need to take
Jim to the hospital. Now Jim was in
a comma and it was all his fault. Gene could not wash away the guilt that plagued his heart
so he stayed by Jim's side not
getting up for almost anything. It was starting
to get to him and he found him getting sleepy. He had started to go to sleep when he woke
himself up. Baka, he told himself.
You have to stay up. This is all your fault, the least you could do is stay by Jim's side.
Unfortunately, Gene found himself dozing off and before he knew it he was fast asleep.
Jim opened his eyes to find it dark where he was. Then he realized that something was holding
his hand. Jim tried to focus his eyes and noticed that Gene was the one holding his hand.
Jim gave a groan when he moved his head. It hurt so much. His movement caused Gene to wake up.
Gene looked up and gave a shout of joy, and before Jim knew it he was engulfed in two very
strong arms. " Jim I'm so glad your okay!" It took Jim a moment to realize that Gene was
crying. "Gene, I need to breathe." " OOPS!" Jim took deep breaths before Suszka, Aisha, and
Melfina appeared. " Jim!" screamed Aisha as she pounced on Jim. Suszka immediately grabbed her
back." Don't. You'll just make his injuries worse." "Oh. Sorry." Aisha still grabbed Jim and gave him a big hug. "Nice to see you to Aisha," Jim said. "Jim, we've been so worried about you," Melfina said. "Can you guys leave Jim and I to talk." Aisha, Melfina, and Suszka all gave Gene a look but left the room. "Jim, I know what I did was wrong. I am truly sorry for everything that happened to you." JIm looked at Gene and said," Gene I don't really know if I can forgive you. What those men did to me will stay in my mind forever." After Jim replied he ducked under the covers and turned away from Gene. Gene felt the tears start to fall. He got up and was about to exit the room. "Jim, I know it really doesn't matter now, but I love you." After Gene left Jim got up and looked out the window. "Even if you love me Gene, I don't know if I can't forget." Only the darkness could see Jim cry.
End part3
Ha there will be more coming soon and I decided to change the story line a bit. Sorry for taking so long on this part.^_^
Part 3
Hi, I got a whole a lot of reviews and only about two people didn't like it. Don't worry it
will get better,
and I don't think it will be a lemon
though there will be yaoi in it. I hate details!
Disclaimers: *sob* there not mine!!
"Jim wake up." Someone was calling him. Jim couldn't see who though. "Jim, please.
I'm so sorry." The voice sounded
familiar and sad." Please Jim. I need you. Please open your eyes." Jim realized that the
voice was Gene's. That was his last
though before Jim fell into darkness again.
Gene looked at the sleeping Jim. Suszka had known what to do so they didn't need to take
Jim to the hospital. Now Jim was in
a comma and it was all his fault. Gene could not wash away the guilt that plagued his heart
so he stayed by Jim's side not
getting up for almost anything. It was starting
to get to him and he found him getting sleepy. He had started to go to sleep when he woke
himself up. Baka, he told himself.
You have to stay up. This is all your fault, the least you could do is stay by Jim's side.
Unfortunately, Gene found himself dozing off and before he knew it he was fast asleep.
Jim opened his eyes to find it dark where he was. Then he realized that something was holding
his hand. Jim tried to focus his eyes and noticed that Gene was the one holding his hand.
Jim gave a groan when he moved his head. It hurt so much. His movement caused Gene to wake up.
Gene looked up and gave a shout of joy, and before Jim knew it he was engulfed in two very
strong arms. " Jim I'm so glad your okay!" It took Jim a moment to realize that Gene was
crying. "Gene, I need to breathe." " OOPS!" Jim took deep breaths before Suszka, Aisha, and
Melfina appeared. " Jim!" screamed Aisha as she pounced on Jim. Suszka immediately grabbed her
back." Don't. You'll just make his injuries worse." "Oh. Sorry." Aisha still grabbed Jim and gave him a big hug. "Nice to see you to Aisha," Jim said. "Jim, we've been so worried about you," Melfina said. "Can you guys leave Jim and I to talk." Aisha, Melfina, and Suszka all gave Gene a look but left the room. "Jim, I know what I did was wrong. I am truly sorry for everything that happened to you." JIm looked at Gene and said," Gene I don't really know if I can forgive you. What those men did to me will stay in my mind forever." After Jim replied he ducked under the covers and turned away from Gene. Gene felt the tears start to fall. He got up and was about to exit the room. "Jim, I know it really doesn't matter now, but I love you." After Gene left Jim got up and looked out the window. "Even if you love me Gene, I don't know if I can't forget." Only the darkness could see Jim cry.
End part3
Ha there will be more coming soon and I decided to change the story line a bit. Sorry for taking so long on this part.^_^