This is my second chapter of my first fic

This is my second chapter of my first fic. This is T/M so T/P fans don't flame me and I better warn u that if u can't stand T/M fics I apologize. ~MarronFlowerJm~

Marron twirled around in front of the mirror as Pan and Bra admired her. Bra was wearing a black tank top and a short red skirt and Pan was wearing a pair of black leather pant and green shirt. Marron's dress was very tight and it showed every curve of her body. She looked very sexy and beautiful .Bra said "Any guy would fall for you especially TRUNKS !!"

That night Marron was waiting for Trunks outside at her house .He was going to pick her up at 7:00 p.m. Then a car came in sight. Then the car came to her front porch door opened; it was the cute guy of her dreams with purple hair. He wore a black Tux.Then she sat in the car and gave him a peck on his cheek and both of them blushed *pink* then they drove to the school dance.The car was driving very smooth without any bumps.While driving Marron examined him.And Trunks looked at her and scanned her curves and thought that she was totally beautiful and sexy.He had never seen her look like this ever before.Both of them were silent. Soon they reached the school where the dance was held. Almost half of the school was there.They had decorated the huge gym into a gigantic disco.It had a big shining disco ball in the center of the ceiling. There also was the audio system. The person who attended the audio system was playing a jazz and saxophone (on tape, of course). Trunks then asked Marron "May I have this dance ?". Marron replied "Yes !" both of them danced and danced so gracefully that every one formed a circle around them and looked at them .Their yes were so locked I each others they barely noticed people around them . Then the tape was over and they stopped dancing, and everyone clapped. Both of them bowed and then sat down and had some punch. Trunks asked Marron "do you have any idea why were they looking at us and clapping at us?Did something happen?!?!" "Well,I don't have a clue.My guess is that they were clapping because we were dancing nicely !" replied Marron "Anyway Marron ,you dance very gracefully."said Trunks in a polite tone and he blushed but Marron blushed very furiously. "Thanks Trunks" replied Marron .

Well, any suggestions, Questions, Remarks, flames? Any way how was my second chapter.My third chapter will only be out if you guys (*clear throat*) review my story .Please read and review

my story . Bye for now !See ya later!!!!!(*cough*)