My second poem posted! Nobody's named, but you can figure out how it's about. The point of view though is all up to you, so yaoi and non-yaoi lovers -- please read and review!
Here's my second poem ever posted. This one was for
my English class (and I got an A on it too! ;(). It's a sonnet in Shakespearean
form (the ABAB CDCD EFEF GG one). The point of view is really open to your own
interpretation, although it should be obvious ho it's about... enjoy and
review!
Unrequited Love
The ice blue eyes could set any heart
on fire.
Flaxen hair shone like gold in the
sunshine.
He fulfilled what every dreamers
desire,
And there was no way he could be
mine.
Past events brought forth his cold
exterior,
The pain from it all locked deeply
away.
Detachment staying in his
demeanor,
But still, my feelings would not go
astray.
The fear of forever living
alone,
Without the comfort, care, or love
from him
Now I know why I have become a
drone
Happy outside, an inside very
grim.
I dream of the day his heart I have
won,
And forever we'd live in
unison.
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