the revied pt2
(1 note: I decided to call Kamicolo piccolo [lol, Kei])
"huh? the power of Frieza had suddenly dissapered from the Earth!" Vegeta said. The team split up and went to thier homes.
Meanwhile.......
Freiza got a huge amount of satisfaction from killing the almighty Goku. Frieza gathered up minions from different parts of the universe. He had conquered many planets and destroyed thier moons because they reminded him of the Saiyan Race. Frieza's most rewarding victory was conquering the planet of Kalak. It was bigger than the sun of Earth.Frieza sat at his throne and enjoyed the entertainment of Kalakians killing each other in battle domes.At the end though, Frieza ended up killing them both because it would get boring. Freiza somehow became stronger,even if he was the most powerful of all. He started to train Kalakians and soon all Kalakians became loyal to their master Frieza and obeyed him completely and became a very powerful empire.
In earth,
Since his father's death, Gohan had been training intensely and his power level rose. He also now had the power to turn SSJ 4. Goten also had this power. The brothers had to find and slay Frieza for their father's death. One day, Goten remembered the Dragonballs. He gathered them up and summoned the Dragon. He wished for Frieza to be the weakest creature alive.
The dragon replied, "I cannot do that....Frieza had wished to be the most powerful creature, so he is more powerful than I!"
"...Then I wish for my father Goku to be revived!" Goten said.
" I cannot do that, Goku's remains are separated so I cannot bring them together!"
"....Then I wish to know the location of Frieza!" Goten replied.
"He is in the planet of Kalak!" Goten suddenly knew where it was because the dragon had planted the location in his memory.
Goten then wished for the power of Instant Transmission and to have the tecniques of every known fighter in the universe. Of course Goten still did not have the power to defeat Frieza.
OK. Tell me in ur reviews ppl, if you want long chapters updated slowly (maybe 2-5 days), or short chapters(like the one you just read) updated quickly.
(1 note: I decided to call Kamicolo piccolo [lol, Kei])
"huh? the power of Frieza had suddenly dissapered from the Earth!" Vegeta said. The team split up and went to thier homes.
Meanwhile.......
Freiza got a huge amount of satisfaction from killing the almighty Goku. Frieza gathered up minions from different parts of the universe. He had conquered many planets and destroyed thier moons because they reminded him of the Saiyan Race. Frieza's most rewarding victory was conquering the planet of Kalak. It was bigger than the sun of Earth.Frieza sat at his throne and enjoyed the entertainment of Kalakians killing each other in battle domes.At the end though, Frieza ended up killing them both because it would get boring. Freiza somehow became stronger,even if he was the most powerful of all. He started to train Kalakians and soon all Kalakians became loyal to their master Frieza and obeyed him completely and became a very powerful empire.
In earth,
Since his father's death, Gohan had been training intensely and his power level rose. He also now had the power to turn SSJ 4. Goten also had this power. The brothers had to find and slay Frieza for their father's death. One day, Goten remembered the Dragonballs. He gathered them up and summoned the Dragon. He wished for Frieza to be the weakest creature alive.
The dragon replied, "I cannot do that....Frieza had wished to be the most powerful creature, so he is more powerful than I!"
"...Then I wish for my father Goku to be revived!" Goten said.
" I cannot do that, Goku's remains are separated so I cannot bring them together!"
"....Then I wish to know the location of Frieza!" Goten replied.
"He is in the planet of Kalak!" Goten suddenly knew where it was because the dragon had planted the location in his memory.
Goten then wished for the power of Instant Transmission and to have the tecniques of every known fighter in the universe. Of course Goten still did not have the power to defeat Frieza.
OK. Tell me in ur reviews ppl, if you want long chapters updated slowly (maybe 2-5 days), or short chapters(like the one you just read) updated quickly.