Written By Kimmie87
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Chapter 5: Unexpected Visitor
Max and Logan slowy walked to the door. Leaning in slightly
Max opened the door. It was if time had stood still. If Max and Logan
hadn't been there themselves and it had happened to someone else it
would've been funny but right now it wasn't because Logan's Uncle Jonas
and Aunt Margo were standing in the doorway.
"Uncle Jonas, Aunt Margo" Logan choked out, his eyes bulging in
suprise. "What are you doing here?" Max didn't say anything but stepped
back to watch, hoping she wouldn't be noticed.
"Well we were just coming through you know. We just got back from
at trip to Paris." Logan's Aunt bragged, "Look at the beautiful diamond
Jonas got for me." she said, thrusting a diamond the size of a pearl under
Max's nose.
"We had hoped to board up here for the night with you," Uncle Jonas
drawled "Considering this is my cabin." he said shooting Logan a look.
"Sure!" Logan said with phony cheerfulness. "Why don't we just
ah, go have breakfast. Max and I will cool while you sit and wait in the
living room. I'm sure you're quite tired." he added
"Well, yes, it has been a long journey." said Aunt Margo. "Lets
do sit down."
Max and Logan headed into the kitchen.
"Oh God." Logan said.
"You know this is the one thing I really didn't need today." Max
moaned. "Logan, what are we supposed to do about these people?"
"We can't do anything Max, this is my Uncles cabin." Logan said,
"I guess all we can do is pack our bags and head home."
"What!" Exclaimed Max, "You're just going to let them walk all
over you again? No Way! Not a Chance! I came here for a vacation and I'm
getting one even if I have to put up with those snobs. Come on!"
With that said Max turned towards the refirgetator and began
to pull out ingredients to make breakfast with. Logan could only shrug
helplessly.
Soon ham, eggs,oats and toast were on the tabel as Max and Logan sat
down rather uncomfoterably next to Aunt Margo and Uncle Jonas.
"You know darling you really need to do some traveling" Margo said
to Logan "Just last month I was in Japan, they had some wonderful silk
clothes and absoutley stunning furniture. You really should get some things
from there, last time I saw your place it was scandelous, the bright paintings
and all those computers!" Logan figited uncomforterbly.
"You know Logan," Aunt Margo continued, "Ever sence the wedding
I haven't been able to find that beautiful locket of mine."
"Actually," Logan said, his temper flaring as he remembered how
Aunt Margo has stolen his mothers locket "I believe that locket was my
mother's"
"Well," Uncel Jonas said, now umcomforterble "Your mother always
was such a dear."
"And your mother blows goats." Max snapped angrily at these snobby
people that wouldn't leave Logan alone.
"What did you say?" gasped Aunt Margo
"I said would you like some toast and oats?" Max said sweetly
with a phony grin. "There really quite nice."
"No dear, I'll pass," Aunt Margo said.
"So," Jonas said, trying to change the subject, "Still writing
eh Logan?"
"Yes" Logan said shortly
"And to think you put all that work in for nothing! You know
you should get a real job Logan! Not sitting up in a crummy little
penthouse writing little articles that will never make a diffrence, why-"
But Uncle Jonas was cut short, because that was the precise moment
Max "accidently" knocked the hot oats into Uncle Jonas' lap, she also
"accidently" kicked him in the shins, giving him a large purple brusie
to go along with the burns on his lap that the oatmeal had caused. Logan
shot Max a look that was somewhere between anger and gratitude.
After Uncle Jonas had been cleaned up he and Aunt Margo decided
it best to leave. As Max watched their luxury car drive away she did a back
flip and landed right next to Logan.
"UM, yah, Logan, about your,ah, realtives, I just got a little,
ah, carried away." Max said.
"Max," Logan began sternly, "I only have one thing to say: Thank
God they're gone!"
At this Max laughed and so did Logan. "I wouldn't have been able to
take spending the night with them. If you hadn't done that I would've
eventually." Logan said
"Oh it was my pleasure." Max said. "And guess what you're Aunt
Margo 'dropped' on her way out."
Max pulled out of her pocket a large diamond ring.
"This is my kind of vacation." Max said with a grin. Logan could
only smile.
Okay! I need an opinion! Should I end it here or keep going? I can do either,
I have plenty of ideas for what should happen before their vacation is over!
Please Review
Chapter 5: Unexpected Visitor
Max and Logan slowy walked to the door. Leaning in slightly
Max opened the door. It was if time had stood still. If Max and Logan
hadn't been there themselves and it had happened to someone else it
would've been funny but right now it wasn't because Logan's Uncle Jonas
and Aunt Margo were standing in the doorway.
"Uncle Jonas, Aunt Margo" Logan choked out, his eyes bulging in
suprise. "What are you doing here?" Max didn't say anything but stepped
back to watch, hoping she wouldn't be noticed.
"Well we were just coming through you know. We just got back from
at trip to Paris." Logan's Aunt bragged, "Look at the beautiful diamond
Jonas got for me." she said, thrusting a diamond the size of a pearl under
Max's nose.
"We had hoped to board up here for the night with you," Uncle Jonas
drawled "Considering this is my cabin." he said shooting Logan a look.
"Sure!" Logan said with phony cheerfulness. "Why don't we just
ah, go have breakfast. Max and I will cool while you sit and wait in the
living room. I'm sure you're quite tired." he added
"Well, yes, it has been a long journey." said Aunt Margo. "Lets
do sit down."
Max and Logan headed into the kitchen.
"Oh God." Logan said.
"You know this is the one thing I really didn't need today." Max
moaned. "Logan, what are we supposed to do about these people?"
"We can't do anything Max, this is my Uncles cabin." Logan said,
"I guess all we can do is pack our bags and head home."
"What!" Exclaimed Max, "You're just going to let them walk all
over you again? No Way! Not a Chance! I came here for a vacation and I'm
getting one even if I have to put up with those snobs. Come on!"
With that said Max turned towards the refirgetator and began
to pull out ingredients to make breakfast with. Logan could only shrug
helplessly.
Soon ham, eggs,oats and toast were on the tabel as Max and Logan sat
down rather uncomfoterably next to Aunt Margo and Uncle Jonas.
"You know darling you really need to do some traveling" Margo said
to Logan "Just last month I was in Japan, they had some wonderful silk
clothes and absoutley stunning furniture. You really should get some things
from there, last time I saw your place it was scandelous, the bright paintings
and all those computers!" Logan figited uncomforterbly.
"You know Logan," Aunt Margo continued, "Ever sence the wedding
I haven't been able to find that beautiful locket of mine."
"Actually," Logan said, his temper flaring as he remembered how
Aunt Margo has stolen his mothers locket "I believe that locket was my
mother's"
"Well," Uncel Jonas said, now umcomforterble "Your mother always
was such a dear."
"And your mother blows goats." Max snapped angrily at these snobby
people that wouldn't leave Logan alone.
"What did you say?" gasped Aunt Margo
"I said would you like some toast and oats?" Max said sweetly
with a phony grin. "There really quite nice."
"No dear, I'll pass," Aunt Margo said.
"So," Jonas said, trying to change the subject, "Still writing
eh Logan?"
"Yes" Logan said shortly
"And to think you put all that work in for nothing! You know
you should get a real job Logan! Not sitting up in a crummy little
penthouse writing little articles that will never make a diffrence, why-"
But Uncle Jonas was cut short, because that was the precise moment
Max "accidently" knocked the hot oats into Uncle Jonas' lap, she also
"accidently" kicked him in the shins, giving him a large purple brusie
to go along with the burns on his lap that the oatmeal had caused. Logan
shot Max a look that was somewhere between anger and gratitude.
After Uncle Jonas had been cleaned up he and Aunt Margo decided
it best to leave. As Max watched their luxury car drive away she did a back
flip and landed right next to Logan.
"UM, yah, Logan, about your,ah, realtives, I just got a little,
ah, carried away." Max said.
"Max," Logan began sternly, "I only have one thing to say: Thank
God they're gone!"
At this Max laughed and so did Logan. "I wouldn't have been able to
take spending the night with them. If you hadn't done that I would've
eventually." Logan said
"Oh it was my pleasure." Max said. "And guess what you're Aunt
Margo 'dropped' on her way out."
Max pulled out of her pocket a large diamond ring.
"This is my kind of vacation." Max said with a grin. Logan could
only smile.
Okay! I need an opinion! Should I end it here or keep going? I can do either,
I have plenty of ideas for what should happen before their vacation is over!