Becci 'D': Ok this my first attempt of a poem

Becci 'D': Ok this my first attempt of a poem. Its in Tai's POV about Sora's love for Matt. Please review? Thanks ^__~

If only tears could bring you back

I stand on the highest point I can find

The wind blows in my hair as I look behind

I close my eyes and think of the past

At something's I wish could of last

Like my love of my life

I want to take that knife!

To see there love makes me cry

That wants to make me die

Because it has caused me so much pain

It drives me so insane!

She has broken my heart

Now that were apart

But I can not do the deed

Because of the grief she will receive

The love she is with

I envy underneath

As I silently cry

I look up to the sky

I think of the good times we had together

Which I know I will always treasure

We should belong together!

But now I've lost her forever