Hiya everyone soz that I haven't written for soooooo long!!! I really couldn't be bothered, I know that sounds awful but it is the truth...anyways this chapter is MUCH longer, so that makes up for the long wait u have had...kinda....
Anyways, on wiv da story!!!
"Hey Charlie, can u tell Mrs. Quinnel that I am really sorry but I couldn't be there for the lesson?" Lily pleaded with her, while stuffing her mouth with grilled tomatoes.
"Where are u going'?" Charlie asked while eyeing Lily's breakfast with obvious envy, Charlie thought she was fat and had basically stopped eating.
"I've got an orthodontist appointment" Lily explained, while she ate her hash brown's rather hurriedly.
"What's that? Is it a muggle thing?" Charlie said eyes a-gleam. Her favourite subject was muggle studies, and anything to do with muggles intrigued her. In fact, in their first year, Charlie had gone through Lily's trunk (with Lily's permission) and had marvelled at all the muggle things Lily had, like Lily's hairdryer, Charlie would take it apart, then fiddle with it, then put it back together again and after finding out that it now wouldn't work, she would use magic to make it work again.
"They check your teeth and decide whether you should have braces, or in my case, if I should have them off, like a dentist!"
"Oh wow Lily, that's great news, I could never imagine u without braces....
"Thanks!"
"Umm...Lily, what's a dentist?"
"aaaaaarrrrrrrggggggghhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"ha ha ha u...got...ha ha ha ha dum...ha ha ha"
"Shut up, Sirius. Man, ur meant to be supportive!" James said, giving his friend a cold stare.
"Whoa, what's up with u two today?" Remus Lupin asked as he made his way over to the Gryffindor table. Sirius suddenly put on a serious face, and placed his arm around James' shoulder, then looked Remus in the eye.
"Our dear Prongs here, has just been dumped!" Sirius said, before bursting into peals of laughter.
Remus, the more sensitive of the 3 (A/N: I cut peter out, I have put him in Slytherin, and he has not friends to anyone who is interested) looked at James' hurt and annoyed face and said
"U okay James'?"
"Yeah, I am alright at least SOME" (he gave a backward glance at Sirius) " of my friends understand!"
"U have just never been dumped before, for the 5 years I have known u, James Harry Potter u have never been dumped!" Sirius said, after falling of his chair laughter.
"Who was the gal?" Remus asked.
"Charlie Matthews"
Sirius spluttered, and was about to have another laughing fit when Remus glared at him.
"Sorry" he mumbled to Remus, but not without a grin, he then turned to James and said
"Seems like your losing your touch, Prongs m'dear!"
"Yeah right, I could have any girl I wanted, even outside the school!" (A/N: wow! bigheaded or what!)
"How about we make a little wager on that? U in, Mooney?"
"course I'm in!" Mooney replied.
"Tell me more about this little wager..." James said, warily.
"Okay, Remus and I make a list of 28 girls, and we put them in pairs, and u have to decide which one to pull!" Sirius explained. But Remus, seeing James' confused face, grabbed a napkin and pulled a pen out of his robe pocket.
"James, like this" Mooney said...
(A/N: this is the napkin, in case u wondered...)
Charlie Matthews/Minny Mcgonagall
Danielle Prioress (a Ravenclaw girl)/Alex Peters (a Slytherin)
"...and then u would decide which one to umm...as Sirius so kindly put it...pull!"
"okay, I'll do It.."
Later that evening in the boys dormitory...
"Ok Remus, who shall we give him?" Sirius asked, eyes a-gleam.
"umm... I don't know about u, but I think our friend needs bringing down a peg or two, if u get what I mean!"
"right, so lets be nasty..."
So what d'ya think??? I think it is ok...ish!!
Anyone got any ideas as to how the story is gonna be like...I do now!!! I'll give u a clue if u cant guess already...it is an idea kinda from a movie...in fact maybe I should re-name this to "Lily's all that" get it??
Anyways, I will only continue if I get 25 reviews (so far I have 14!!) sob sob!!
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