If you thought the first chapter was familiar, it is one of my first attempts of a fan fiction. I have changed it a bit and changed the name of it because the title is a little better, not by mush though.
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"You know how Mum kicked Dad out because of-" Lily started.
"Yeah, how he hit you and your sister and Mum while all your brothers were gone? Interrupted James. He said that because he knew Lily would have either been too upset or angry to spit it out.
"Yep. That. Well he came back about a week ago, saying that he must have been under a spell. Last night Mum told us this. He half convinced Mum, so she let him in the house. She told us kids to go call the friends' parents that Petunia had over to come and collect them. And for us to stay out the front. Last night Ma told Petunia and me that she got some truth potion, what ever that is, and used it on him. It was true what he said. That he was under a spell. Mum thinks she knows whom by, but she won't tell. Lily stopped speaking to let that sink in. And so she could wipe away some tears that were flowing freely down her cheeks.
"What happened after your Mum gave him the Truth Potion? Please tell me." James spoke in a concerned voice.
"Anyway, Ma kicked him out again because the damage had already been done, she also told him to never to come back." Lily's eyes were filling up with tears again but she kept going. "While my brothers were here, Daddy kept on saying that us kids kept him alive. Well, I guess that was true." Lily now had tears streaming down her cheeks. "He died. Two days ago. People couldn't figure out how though. I think it's from a broken heart." Lily was now crying so hard that she couldn't continue even if she wanted to.
James bundled Lily up into a hug again. At that same moment, the three kids that James had made go; came back with Lily's mum and James's mum in tow. Mrs. Evens ran to Lily as soon as she saw her. She took her away from where James could see.
Mrs. Potter introduced the boys. James then knew that the short chubby kid was Peter Pettigrew, the one Peter was chatting to was Remues Lupin and the guy that James tripped was Serius Black.
Lily and Mrs. Evens came back when Lily had calmed down. And by the looks of it, Mrs. Evens, had shed a tear or six hundred too.
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Yes, I know I said that this one would be a big part, but I wanted to let this all sink in a bit first. So I'm up loading the next bit tomorrow. If possible that is. Once again. I want 7 or more reviews before I put the next part up.
Luvin Lily
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"You know how Mum kicked Dad out because of-" Lily started.
"Yeah, how he hit you and your sister and Mum while all your brothers were gone? Interrupted James. He said that because he knew Lily would have either been too upset or angry to spit it out.
"Yep. That. Well he came back about a week ago, saying that he must have been under a spell. Last night Mum told us this. He half convinced Mum, so she let him in the house. She told us kids to go call the friends' parents that Petunia had over to come and collect them. And for us to stay out the front. Last night Ma told Petunia and me that she got some truth potion, what ever that is, and used it on him. It was true what he said. That he was under a spell. Mum thinks she knows whom by, but she won't tell. Lily stopped speaking to let that sink in. And so she could wipe away some tears that were flowing freely down her cheeks.
"What happened after your Mum gave him the Truth Potion? Please tell me." James spoke in a concerned voice.
"Anyway, Ma kicked him out again because the damage had already been done, she also told him to never to come back." Lily's eyes were filling up with tears again but she kept going. "While my brothers were here, Daddy kept on saying that us kids kept him alive. Well, I guess that was true." Lily now had tears streaming down her cheeks. "He died. Two days ago. People couldn't figure out how though. I think it's from a broken heart." Lily was now crying so hard that she couldn't continue even if she wanted to.
James bundled Lily up into a hug again. At that same moment, the three kids that James had made go; came back with Lily's mum and James's mum in tow. Mrs. Evens ran to Lily as soon as she saw her. She took her away from where James could see.
Mrs. Potter introduced the boys. James then knew that the short chubby kid was Peter Pettigrew, the one Peter was chatting to was Remues Lupin and the guy that James tripped was Serius Black.
Lily and Mrs. Evens came back when Lily had calmed down. And by the looks of it, Mrs. Evens, had shed a tear or six hundred too.
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Yes, I know I said that this one would be a big part, but I wanted to let this all sink in a bit first. So I'm up loading the next bit tomorrow. If possible that is. Once again. I want 7 or more reviews before I put the next part up.
Luvin Lily