Author's Notes: This is my first Harry Potter fanfic, but I've been writing along time. Please review, and tell me what you think. Don't say that the chapters are too short, I make them as long as they need to be.
Okay, and before another person tells me I spelt Sirus wrong, I know. Sorry, but when I type I go so fast I miss the second i. So please don't tell me again. I have read the books, I know how it's supposed to be spelt, but this is the way I do. And if you don't like it, then don't read the story.
To read more of my stories, and be one of the firsts to read the new chapters of my stories, visit my website at http://cassidyrai.tripod.com/stories.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Harry Potter characters. I do own however, the families of the Marauders, some of the teachers, and Kimball Zenobia (who comes in later) Also, my fellow RPGer Morgan owns Xanthe Shannon, and is allowing me to use her in this story (and up-coming ones of this series)
This story is based on an RPG called Before the Downfall (http://clubs.yahoo.com/clubs/beforethedownfall)
Last, thanks to my editors Morgan, and Ramika!
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Chapter 1 - 2 More Days
Sirus stumbled down the stairs, barely awake. He hadn't gotten much sleep last night, to pre-occupied with what he would ask his father this morning. He walked into the kitchen. "Morning." He said to his family.
His mom beamed at him. "Morning Sirus honey." she said cheerfully. Camellia Black was an extremely cheerful person, unlike her husband Talon. Talon Black was a bitter man, despite his loving family. He despised Sirus, who was his eldest son. But Sirus's sister, Astrid was another matter. Talon adored Astrid, and gave her whatever she wanted.
Sirus forced a smile. "What's for breakfast?" he asked sinking into a chair. Talon looked up from his paper and glared at Sirus. Sirus averted his eyes.
"You should show more respect to your mother." He commented.
"Sorry, sir. Will you be serving breakfast this morning mother?" Sirus said, trying to keep his temper. Things were not starting well this morning.
Camellia smiled at her son. "Will be having pancakes as soon as I can find my wand. Where did I put that thing?" she shuffled around the cupboards.
Sirus spotted it onto of the fridge. He retrieved it for his mom. "Here you go mom." Sirus handed her the wand.
Sirus Black was no normal 15 year old. He came for a very prestigious family of wizards. Wizard folk are all over the world. One of the most dominate countries was England, home of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Sirus was a 5th year student at Hogwarts school.
"Thanks Sirus." Camellia flicked her wand. 4 plates of pancakes appeared on the table. Sirus sat back down and began eating his.
Astrid walked into the kitchen yawning. "Oh, pancakes?" She whined. "Morning daddy." she plopped down into the chair next to Sirus. Talon smiled at his daughter, not mentioning her rudemess.
Sirus quickly finished his pancakes in silence. He politely declined more pancakes offered by his mother. Clearing his throat, he begun. "Father, I received some letter's yesterday."
"From who?" Talon didn't bother looking up from his paper.
"Well, I got my Hogwarts letter." Sirus began. "And a letter from James."
"James Potter?" Camellia questioned. Sirus nodded. James Potter was his best friend in the whole world, but Talon was envious of his father, Kendrik Potter, who was very rich. Kendrik and Talon used to be best friends, when they attended Hogwarts, but an argument ended that.
Talon didn't say anything. "Well, he wants me to stay the rest of the summer at his house." Sirus explained, hoping his dad was in a good mood. "His parents will take me to Diagon Alley, and make sure I get to King's Crossing to catch the Hogwarts Express." he awaited Talon's answer.
Talon thought about it. 'Well, he's going to go visit you're worst enemy. On the other hand, it gets him out of your hair for a month.' Talon thought so long Sirus was sure the answer was no. "Fine, but how are you planning to buy your school supplies?" Talon hadn't paid for Sirus's school supplies for 3 years.
"I have some savings in Gringott's left from what Grandma's left me." Sirus said smoothly. His grandma had died 4 year's prior, leaving most of her money to Sirus, her favorite grandson.
Talon scowled. "When do you leave?" he said sharply.
"Tomorrow at 4 pm." Sirus answered. He excused himself from the table, and headed to his small room to pack, and write a reply to James.
Dear Prongs,
Dad said I could come. Thank God! I don't
think I could stand being with Princess
Astrid a moment longer. See you tomorrow
at 4. You're traveling via Floo Powder right?
Don't bring your dad though, remember what
happened last time. Well, bye bye! I'm
sending Sabre with Darius, so we don't have
to worry about transporting him. Oh, and is
Remus coming too? Hope so, need to plan
what we will do next year. So, bye!
Padfoot
Sirus tied the letter onto the tawny owl standing in front of him on the window sill. He opened the cage and let his own eagle owl out. Together they flew off into the still darkened sky.
'Only 1 more day, well 2 more.' Sirus thought. '2 more days until I'm out of this house for another year.'
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So, what'dya think? PLEASE Review! I'd like it alot alot alot! If no one reviews, I'll stop posting my stories here, since it takes me extra time to, since all my stories are on my website first.
Also, I realize that Sirus seems meek in this chapter, but that will change. I'm aiming towards the fact that he is afraid of his father, who is bitter towards him.
CassidyRai
cassidyrai@hotmail.com
http://cassidyrai.tripod.com/stories
Okay, and before another person tells me I spelt Sirus wrong, I know. Sorry, but when I type I go so fast I miss the second i. So please don't tell me again. I have read the books, I know how it's supposed to be spelt, but this is the way I do. And if you don't like it, then don't read the story.
To read more of my stories, and be one of the firsts to read the new chapters of my stories, visit my website at http://cassidyrai.tripod.com/stories.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Harry Potter characters. I do own however, the families of the Marauders, some of the teachers, and Kimball Zenobia (who comes in later) Also, my fellow RPGer Morgan owns Xanthe Shannon, and is allowing me to use her in this story (and up-coming ones of this series)
This story is based on an RPG called Before the Downfall (http://clubs.yahoo.com/clubs/beforethedownfall)
Last, thanks to my editors Morgan, and Ramika!
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Chapter 1 - 2 More Days
Sirus stumbled down the stairs, barely awake. He hadn't gotten much sleep last night, to pre-occupied with what he would ask his father this morning. He walked into the kitchen. "Morning." He said to his family.
His mom beamed at him. "Morning Sirus honey." she said cheerfully. Camellia Black was an extremely cheerful person, unlike her husband Talon. Talon Black was a bitter man, despite his loving family. He despised Sirus, who was his eldest son. But Sirus's sister, Astrid was another matter. Talon adored Astrid, and gave her whatever she wanted.
Sirus forced a smile. "What's for breakfast?" he asked sinking into a chair. Talon looked up from his paper and glared at Sirus. Sirus averted his eyes.
"You should show more respect to your mother." He commented.
"Sorry, sir. Will you be serving breakfast this morning mother?" Sirus said, trying to keep his temper. Things were not starting well this morning.
Camellia smiled at her son. "Will be having pancakes as soon as I can find my wand. Where did I put that thing?" she shuffled around the cupboards.
Sirus spotted it onto of the fridge. He retrieved it for his mom. "Here you go mom." Sirus handed her the wand.
Sirus Black was no normal 15 year old. He came for a very prestigious family of wizards. Wizard folk are all over the world. One of the most dominate countries was England, home of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Sirus was a 5th year student at Hogwarts school.
"Thanks Sirus." Camellia flicked her wand. 4 plates of pancakes appeared on the table. Sirus sat back down and began eating his.
Astrid walked into the kitchen yawning. "Oh, pancakes?" She whined. "Morning daddy." she plopped down into the chair next to Sirus. Talon smiled at his daughter, not mentioning her rudemess.
Sirus quickly finished his pancakes in silence. He politely declined more pancakes offered by his mother. Clearing his throat, he begun. "Father, I received some letter's yesterday."
"From who?" Talon didn't bother looking up from his paper.
"Well, I got my Hogwarts letter." Sirus began. "And a letter from James."
"James Potter?" Camellia questioned. Sirus nodded. James Potter was his best friend in the whole world, but Talon was envious of his father, Kendrik Potter, who was very rich. Kendrik and Talon used to be best friends, when they attended Hogwarts, but an argument ended that.
Talon didn't say anything. "Well, he wants me to stay the rest of the summer at his house." Sirus explained, hoping his dad was in a good mood. "His parents will take me to Diagon Alley, and make sure I get to King's Crossing to catch the Hogwarts Express." he awaited Talon's answer.
Talon thought about it. 'Well, he's going to go visit you're worst enemy. On the other hand, it gets him out of your hair for a month.' Talon thought so long Sirus was sure the answer was no. "Fine, but how are you planning to buy your school supplies?" Talon hadn't paid for Sirus's school supplies for 3 years.
"I have some savings in Gringott's left from what Grandma's left me." Sirus said smoothly. His grandma had died 4 year's prior, leaving most of her money to Sirus, her favorite grandson.
Talon scowled. "When do you leave?" he said sharply.
"Tomorrow at 4 pm." Sirus answered. He excused himself from the table, and headed to his small room to pack, and write a reply to James.
Dear Prongs,
Dad said I could come. Thank God! I don't
think I could stand being with Princess
Astrid a moment longer. See you tomorrow
at 4. You're traveling via Floo Powder right?
Don't bring your dad though, remember what
happened last time. Well, bye bye! I'm
sending Sabre with Darius, so we don't have
to worry about transporting him. Oh, and is
Remus coming too? Hope so, need to plan
what we will do next year. So, bye!
Padfoot
Sirus tied the letter onto the tawny owl standing in front of him on the window sill. He opened the cage and let his own eagle owl out. Together they flew off into the still darkened sky.
'Only 1 more day, well 2 more.' Sirus thought. '2 more days until I'm out of this house for another year.'
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So, what'dya think? PLEASE Review! I'd like it alot alot alot! If no one reviews, I'll stop posting my stories here, since it takes me extra time to, since all my stories are on my website first.
Also, I realize that Sirus seems meek in this chapter, but that will change. I'm aiming towards the fact that he is afraid of his father, who is bitter towards him.
CassidyRai
cassidyrai@hotmail.com
http://cassidyrai.tripod.com/stories