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Best of Everything
By Nybor Nella
Tap....Tap....Tap....Tap....
The girl inside woke up with a start. She could have sworn she heard someone tapping on her window. Nah, it was just her imagination. Wait! There it was again!
Tap....Tap....Tap....
It wasn't her imagination! Or was it.
Tapping on her window was the largest owl she had ever seen(not that she'd seen many). It was a barn owl, magnificent with musky feathers and large golden eyes. It stuck out its foreleg and she saw it had a letter attached to it. She hesitated, not knowing whether to take it or not. The owl clicked its beak impatiently so she decided to take it.
As soon as she untied the letter, the owl flew off. The envelope was heavy, made of an almost parchment like paper. And scrawled on the front in emerald green ink was:
Miss L. Evans.
113 Portley Drive
Dover
She opened the envelope wondering what in the world it could be. The letter inside was one of the queerest she had ever read.
HOGWARTS SCHOOL
of WITHCRAFT and WIZARDRY
Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore
(Order of Merlin, First Class, Grand Sorc., Chf. Warlock,
Supreme Mugwump, International Confed. Of Wizards)
Dear Miss Evans,
We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted
at Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardry. Please
find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.
Term begins September1. We await your owl by no
later than July 31.
Yours sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
Minerva Mcgonagall
Deputy Headmistress
She laid the letter down on her desk, thinking to tell her parents about it in the morning. She fell asleep dreaming of people flying around the countryside on broomsticks.
Lily Evans woke up from her bed to the sound of her sister screaming.
"LILY! Wake up, you lazy lump!"
Lily groaned as she got out of bed. Small and pixie-like, Lily usually got up before here horse of a sister yelled her out. With long, thick auburn hair and deep emerald eyes, Lily usually got the part of the pixie in the school plays.
"LILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Alright Petty. I'm coming!"
As she walked into the kitchen with the letter in her hand she asked her mom, "Hey Mom, do you know what this is supposed to be?"
Her mother took the letter and read it, then said, "I don't know, honey. I guess Saturday I can take you up to London to check it out."
"OK, Mom. On Saturday then."
Best of Everything
By Nybor Nella
Tap....Tap....Tap....Tap....
The girl inside woke up with a start. She could have sworn she heard someone tapping on her window. Nah, it was just her imagination. Wait! There it was again!
Tap....Tap....Tap....
It wasn't her imagination! Or was it.
Tapping on her window was the largest owl she had ever seen(not that she'd seen many). It was a barn owl, magnificent with musky feathers and large golden eyes. It stuck out its foreleg and she saw it had a letter attached to it. She hesitated, not knowing whether to take it or not. The owl clicked its beak impatiently so she decided to take it.
As soon as she untied the letter, the owl flew off. The envelope was heavy, made of an almost parchment like paper. And scrawled on the front in emerald green ink was:
Miss L. Evans.
113 Portley Drive
Dover
She opened the envelope wondering what in the world it could be. The letter inside was one of the queerest she had ever read.
HOGWARTS SCHOOL
of WITHCRAFT and WIZARDRY
Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore
(Order of Merlin, First Class, Grand Sorc., Chf. Warlock,
Supreme Mugwump, International Confed. Of Wizards)
Dear Miss Evans,
We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted
at Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardry. Please
find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.
Term begins September1. We await your owl by no
later than July 31.
Yours sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
Minerva Mcgonagall
Deputy Headmistress
She laid the letter down on her desk, thinking to tell her parents about it in the morning. She fell asleep dreaming of people flying around the countryside on broomsticks.
Lily Evans woke up from her bed to the sound of her sister screaming.
"LILY! Wake up, you lazy lump!"
Lily groaned as she got out of bed. Small and pixie-like, Lily usually got up before here horse of a sister yelled her out. With long, thick auburn hair and deep emerald eyes, Lily usually got the part of the pixie in the school plays.
"LILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Alright Petty. I'm coming!"
As she walked into the kitchen with the letter in her hand she asked her mom, "Hey Mom, do you know what this is supposed to be?"
Her mother took the letter and read it, then said, "I don't know, honey. I guess Saturday I can take you up to London to check it out."
"OK, Mom. On Saturday then."