I've never been much for poems, but I got extraordinarily bored this weekend and felt the need to write about Harry Potter

I've never been much for poems, but I got extraordinarily bored this weekend and felt the need to write about Harry Potter.  Since I'm ten times worse with stories, I wrote this (besides, it's the topic of discussion in com. arts right now).  Please do give me some pointer and tips!  As you can see, I'm in desperate need!

Disclaimer:  I obviously don't own Harry Potter or anything of JKR's, so remember that.  The poem is mine, though!  Remember that, too.

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The Rise of The Fall

A flash of green light

The loss of two lives

The loss of a fight

Another green flash

A child's pained cries

A child's teared eyes

Death's curse rebounded

A mother's love protects

A mother's love reflects

Enemy struck down

His curse betrayed him

His curse destroyed him

A scarred bolt of light

Remnant of the loss

Remnant of the fight.

- Alexis