Guess what? I didn't get 5 reviews. Like I care! Besides, someone begged me to write more. Plus, I got a comment from two people who are V/H fans, one begging for me to make this story V/H, and so far this story isn't V/H. Well, since I don't want to scare of the V/H fans *SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT!* this fic ends in V/H (I had that planned from the beginnning), mostly because I am a major V/H fan! So there. :P Oh yeah, I changed that rating because of some of the language in this chapter.


Forgive Me Father, For I Have Sinned
Chapter 2: Allen's Intuition.

Van, who was sitting on the edge of a fountain in the Garden behind the Asturian castle, was practically seething. How could everyone trust Folken? It seemed obvious to him that staying in Asturia was part of Folken's plot.

However, his thoughts were interrupted by a female voice calling his name.

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"I can't believe it," Allen muttered to himself. "I can't believe I confessed like that to Hitomi!" He sighed loudly and kicked a rock. "This is just great! She's probably throwing herself into Van's arms...."

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Hitomi threw herself into Van's arms. "Oh Van!" she cried. "It was awful!"

Van was a little shocked at what Hitomi was doing, but wrapped his arms around her anyway. "What was awful? You can tell me."

"I went to the church to talk to a priest about Allen, but then Allen came in and thought that I was the priest!" Hitomi sniffed, then continued. "I wasn't sure if it was him or not at first, so I pretended to be the priest. Then he confessed to cheating on me!"

Van held Hitomi closer. "With who?" he asked.

"Princess Eries."

"Princess Eries? She has far too much class to do something like that!" Hitomi cried harder.

"I thought he loved me Van! I thought he loved me more than anyone!"

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The blonde haired knight sighed heavily. "Now he's probably holding her close and telling her that everything will be ok...."

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Hitomi buried her head into Van's chest, which made his heart melt. "Don't worry Hitomi, everything will be ok." he said, forcing out the words. This was his only chance to take Hitomi from Allen. It was time to show Hitomi his sweet, romantic side. "Wait...." he thought. "Do I have a romantic side?"

"Van, are you ok?" Hitomi questioned, looking at him worriedly. Van smiled. "You know Hitomi, I've never felt like this before." Hitomi's expression became puzzled.

"Like what Van?" Van separated himself from Hitomi and looked into her eyes.

"Hitomi, you're such a wonderful person. If only I could be like you." he said, stuttering slightly. Van began to caress Hitomi's cheek, which surprised her because she had never expected him to be so forward.

"The other day, in the barn, when I said I wanted you...."

"Yes?" Hitomi said, urging him to continue.

"I meant it. I..I..I was afraid of what you would say, so I made up the rest of it to mask what I was really saying." Van turned away, afraid of how Hitomi would react. However, a gasp escaped his lips as Hitomi pulled his face back towards her.

"Oh Van...."

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Not too far from Hitomi and Van, Allen was walking through the garden, mumbling things to himself. "The second I walk up to fountain, Van and Hitomi will be there, kissing."

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Van and Hitomi looked at each other, confused with their feelings. Slowly, their faces inched closer until their lips were connected in a confused but sweet kiss. And as Allen had predicted, he walked past them just in time to see the kiss grow more passionate. Van and Hitomi immediately broke the kiss and turned away from each other, blushing furiously.

"Um....hi Allen," Hitomi said sheepishly.

"Wow, I was right," Allen muttered.

"What did you say?" Hitomi asked.

"How could you Hitomi? How could you kiss Van?" Allen growled in response. Hitomi walked right up to Allen and yelled in his face.

"How could you cheat on me with Eries?"

"That's different!"

"Why? Because you had sex with her?"

"I never said that!"

"But you also never said you didn't,"

"Damn."

Suddenly, out of know where, Eries appeared, and she looked very angry.

"Allen! How could you?" she screamed, slapping him.

"How could I what?"

"I heard about you and Hitomi! You player! I can't believe I actually lost my virginity to you!" Eries whacked Allen in the head with a wooden board, and stormed out of the garden, scaring several birds along the way.

"Good move, dumb ass!" Van laughed.

"Great! Now I don't have a girlfriend anymore! Poor beautiful me."

"I'll be your girlfriend Allen!" a cheerful female voice called.

"Who said that?"

"Me, of course!" A young girl stepped out of the trees. Allen practically drooled at the sight.

"Hey gorgeous! What's your name?"

The girl giggled. "Mia Angel."

"Wow! What a pretty name! Would you like to go on a date with me, Mia?"

Mia giggled even more. "I would love that!" So Allen and Mia Angel walked off into the sunset, hand in hand, leaving Van and Hitomi to continue their moment.

"Now this is more like it!" Hitomi thought happily as Van broke the kiss and started to kiss Hitomi's neck. After a few seconds, he stopped, but for some strange reason, he didn't move.

"Van, what's wrong?" Hitomi asked, confused.

"Um..Hitomi..my hair is caught on the chain of your pendant," Van confessed, his cheeks burning in embarrassment. Hitomi carefully took off her pendant and the two began trying to remove it from Van's hair.

"Ow! You're hurting me!" Van whined.

"Stop being such a baby!" she retorted.

They ended up spending the next half hour attempting to remove the pendant, but where unsuccessful.

"Looks like I'll have to cut your hair Van," Hitomi sighed.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!"




Ok, so this chapter kind of sucked. And it wasn't even that funny. That's why it's General/Humor. Oh, and a special note to Mia Angel. I actually didn't put you in the story because you asked me to (which you didn't) but the comment you wrote in the review gave me the idea of putting you with Allen. It's just too bad that I couldn't see your reaction! Well, I hope that atleast some of you enjoyed it! I'm planning on writing one more chapter in which we see what happens to Allen, and Van's hair/ ^_^