Authors Note: ok first of all I would like to say this to Shampoo ul copt, I have read the Harry Potter books loads of times and never in them does it say Tom is way older then Lily Potter, and even if it does this is my story and I wont change it for you. Second of all Rita might not have always been a brat. Have you ever heard the saying growing old makes you meaner? She could have been quit pretty when she was at school. Or even nice you never know. So if you going to criticize my piece of writing don't even write a review I don't like criticism. Unless it is creative criticism I don't want to hear it! That goes for everyone! Sorry I hate people who criticize my stories or me it's not cool or nice. All right people who say that Tom was at school in 1950 I would like to know what page it says that. And I would also like to know why all you people seem this book takes place in 2001. For all we know it could be in the 1900's. NO CRITICISM in my reviews. I hope you enjoy chapter 2.
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The week before Christmas was a lone week. So far no one found out that a Slytherin was going to the dance with a Gryffindor but that wouldn't last long. James and Rita didn't make it passed a week together. The first thing James did was ask Lily to the dance. She wanted to say yes, she was about to say yes but then she remembered that she said she would go with Tom. Lily had to say I'll get back to you on that one.
Lily ran to find Tom she had to break this date thing she loved James she wanted to spend the rest of her live with him.
"Tom? Tom where are you?" Lily yells into the dungeons.
"Lily? Lily is that you?" Lily hears someone's voice.
"Yeah it's me who are you?"
"It's me Tom."
"Tom I need to ask you something."
"Yes?"
"Tom I need to break this thing. I can't go to the dance with you."
"What! Why?"
"James and Rita aren't seeing each other and James was wondering if I would go to the dance with him and I love him so much I would never have asked you this unless I really thought I felt something for him. I'm sorry Tom."
"Sorry? Your sorry I should have known! Once someone better comes alone you dump the substitute. I should have never even tried. No not with a person like you."
"Tom, I'm sorry. You didn't really think we could have something together did you? I mean come on you're the last living relative of the great Slytherin. If you didn't already know this I'm Muggle born you would never love some like me. You would never be happy with a person like me. All you love about me is my looks trust me. That's all anyone sees in me. Everyone but James, James is my missing half he makes me whole. You have to understand that."
"Fine Lily Evans if that is what you really want go for it. But get this you could have been powerful you could have had something no one else would have. You would have had the love of lord Voldemort. Your life would be speared when I role the wizard world. Everyone will fear my name everyone will be scared of me. But no one would be able to stop me. No one at all." With that Tom turned and ran down to the Slytherin common room. Leaving Lily cold and scared at what she just heard she knew when ever Tom says something like that he usually follows though with it.
The End (for now)
Another short Chapter but hey what can I do about it. Review my story but only if you are nice about it.
Don't worry people Lily and James are getting back together. (Yessssssssss) hehe ah well tell me what you think so far I could use ideas. I'm starting to get a writer's block
