Hey, Moon Shards here!~^_^~This is my first fanfic, and so far, I'm not too sure about it.
I've tried writing before, but really did not like my fics. So I never sent them in and never
found out if they where any good. So, I guess that's for you to tell me. Enjoy!
Oh yeah, all characters in this story are mine, and though I allow you to use their names,
etc., please do not copy my characters.
P.S. (~*~*~)=new scene ("")= words said by people ^_^
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Eternal Destiny
::Chapter One::
"The Forest"
Unmei of the Stars was fighting for her life. The Forest she was in had no name, for no one
dared mention it much
incase one of its evil monsters where to show up. Unmei had obviously underestimated her
opponents, again. She
was fighting three monsters resembling small wolves standing on their hind legs. She turned
and kicked one in the
stomach before they could harm her. Unmei was a seventeen-year-old mystic. Their used to be
many mystics, as
common as humans, but at the beginning of the world their was a great battle between Mystics
and an evil King
Norshin from the land of Waskiin.
In the battle, the king was killed, but after he had killed all but a couple dozen mystics.
So only about fifty where
left now. This tale, however, unknown by humans because it was told only in the tongue of
mystics, mysin, and
humans greatly hated mystics now days because of their powers, never learned the tale. Mystics
had great magic,
and lived till about a thousand or two years. One of the most interesting things about all
mystics where their eyes.
They where a bright green, and they changed color to show their feelings.
Green was just common, grey for fear, dark blue for anger, light blue for amusement, and so on.
Right now Unmei's
eyes where glowing a dark grey. Fear.
Fear was etched in Unmei's mind as she just quickly punched one aside from clawing her neck.
She jumped away
from them and began chanting a spell. "Novas ke hom…" she started, but one of the monsters
jumped at her before
she could finish. "Stay…away…for one…minuet…so I…can cast…a stupid…SPELL!" She yelled as
she elbowed
on monster rather hard.
Finally learning she wouldn't be casting a spell soon, she grabbed a green dagger from the
side of her waist and with
faster reflexes than humans, slit one of the monsters throats. "Yeah! Finally!" Unmei cheered.
Unmei kicked one from
the side, but before she could turn, the other one slashed at her back, obviously angered by
the death of the third.
"Ahh! Damn you!" She gasped as she felt blood ooze down her back. Finally she got enough room
to cast a spell.
"Novas ke homley!" She yelled pointing to fingers at one and a fireball flew out at it,
incinerating the monster. "One
more…just stay still!" Unmei begged, when all the sudden he did.
Unmei was confused and watched as he gave a loud mournful cry. Unmei new she should attack now,
but the monster
was alone now, so it would be easy to kill. Unmei began to chant again when she heard a rustle
to the side. "Huh?"
She said.
Her eyes that had turned light blur for happiness when she had beat the two monsters turned
back to a dark
grey of fear. "Who's there!?" Unmei cried when four monsters jumped out of the trees.
"Ahhh!" She screeched grabbing on to the closest branch and pulled herself up in the tree, and
quickly jumped from
tree to tree like a squirrel. Unmei finally pulled her self in a tree and saw no others within
ten feet to jump to. She
looked down and saw that the strange monsters where their, and it looked like two more had
joined. Unmei climbed
higher and higher into the tree till she was at the top, but unfortunately, the monsters could
climb trees, and where
coming after her.
"Vasen vu kumosen!" she quickly whispered and a light blasted away from her body, killing only
the two climbing
the tree leaving five left. Still too many. "Help!" She cried desperately hoping someone could
save her. Finally one
reached her and grabbed her throat and began to squeeze as she tried to breath. She kicked him
in the stomach but
another had come up and had cut her legs and skirt, and was now helping suffocate her. 'Help…'
she cried mentally
as her vision faded.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Unmei woke to find her self on a cot outside The Forest, and many scratches on her legs, back,
and painful bruises
on her neck. "Ouch…" She murmured sitting up, curiously wondering where the hell she was. She
noted as a cold
wind blew some of her "Its about time you woke, I thought I might have been to late." Said an
amused voice. Unmei
quickly sat up and noticed she was still wearing her short brown skirt, white top, but her
dagger and sheath, and her
pack were gone.
Unmei looked over and saw a man about twenty-two or so with black hair and light blue eyes.
She had always
wanted hair as black as his, like night, her favorite time of day, when the stars shown at
night, when her magic was
at its strongest, but her hair was a light pink. Most mystics had an unusual hair color.
"Who are you!?" She yelled,
flipping out of the cot and getting in her fighting position. "Someone who just saved your
life." He chuckled. "What's
your name?" Unmei demanded, still worried. "None of your concern, and don't worry, if I wanted
you dead, you
would be." He retorted.
Unmei calmed down and asked, "Where are we?" "Outside The Forest, and outside the Hills." The
Hills was where
Unmei lived. The leader, Oaken, and elderly man in humans, near old enough to join the spirits
of Earth, had raised her.
When Unmei was four, her mother, also a mystic, had left her with a fisher in the village of
old. Pretty soon he noticed
weird things, my eyes, my hair, and things would all the sudden burst into flames around her,
and she was very strong
for her age. So on a trip to The Hills, he had left Unmei with a woman name Eve, and her
husband, Kenji. They too,
noticed the strange things about Unmei, and brought her to the leader, Oaken.
He quickly learnt that Unmei was a mystic, and when Eve and Kenji found out, would not keep
her because most
humans fear mystics, not knowing much
about them because they where so few numbered. So Oaken kept her and raised her, and let her
cast all the spells
she wanted, and train how ever she felt. Unmei still resented her mother, wherever she was.
"It is near moonrise, you may rest here tonight, and tomorrow you may leave for home." His
eyes had changed from
a light blue to a bright green. "You're a mystic." Unmei said more than asked. "Your eyes are
quicker than most.
That will help you later in your life. Yes, I am a mystic, just like you." He informed. "There
a very few left. It can't
be coincidental that you are here." She declared.
"Very quick is your brain too. For that, I will tell you why I come to this village. I am Kiro
of the Night. I have come
here for the cause of everyone on this Earth, and me. You have heard of the evil of Norshin
right? Well there is a new
king, on even stronger than the last, and now there are hardly any mystics left. I have come
to get training by The
Forest. Than I will have to go find the three stones of the Mountain Kings, Sakasu, Sukai,
and Sikieno. With the
three, the King of Norshin can be stopped."
Unmei new what he was talking about. Even in the most peaceful of places monsters from unknown
places had shown
up, and in places already filled with evil was once horror, was now a nightmare beyond
imaginable. The word from
towns was traveling quickly of all queer happenings.
"Yes, I knew something was wrong. Monsters have shown up from nowhere almost everywhere. So
you have come
to end it all, huh?" Unmei said, slightly disbelieving him. She had met many people who
believed they would become
great heroes; many came through The Hills hoping to find adventure. When they did, they
usually never came back.
Oaken supposedly had a map to find these stones, and many had come to get it to fight this
evil.
Oaken would not give it unless they got through challenge. To her knowledge, for she was never
aloud to watch
them, no one had passed as of yet.
"So, another one has come. You seek Oaken then, my guardian. Many have tried for the map but
none have made
it yet. Even though you are a mystic, Oakes's test are tough. Here is some advice. Don't
underestimate him, or else
you shall loose." She warned.
"Don't worry. I don't underestimate people, unlike you." He replied, his eyes turning light
blue in amusement, while
Unmei's turned a dark blue in anger.
"I am the strongest in The Hills!" She retorted with a huff.
"A village of humans."
"With many strong warriors!"
"For humans. Mystics are stronger, and the monsters inhabiting these lands now are stronger
yet."
"Yet you think you can hold them off AND their master, Norshin?" Unmei asked incredulously.
"I do not think I am so strong, though I know I might be if I get these stones." Kiro answered.
"But-" Unmei was cut off as Kiro said, "It's late. You can have some bread and cheese, all I
have left from my
long journey. In the morning, we shall go to The Hills to see your guardian Oaken.
Unmei ate some cheese, and nibbled at the piece of bread, stomach queasy, probably from a
healing spell Kiro had
preformed. She was angered at having to take refuge from this stranger, especially one so
arrogant, even if he was a
mystic. God knew how much she had always wanted to meet another mystic, but God also knew
how much she hated
having to rely on someone, feeling week, and obliged to them.
Unmei sipped some clear water from a flask she had been given. Another thing about mystics
where the only things
they would drink where water, or wine. They repulsed anything else. Once finished, Unmei got
up and went to the
cot where she was tolled to sleep. She had argued for a while with Kiro, saying she would
rather sleep on the grass
than take any more of his charity. But after him threatening to make the grass burn to her
touch, a tricky spell young
mystics have very much trouble at, she agreed grumbling, and silently fell asleep on the cot.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
When Unmei awoke, she noted that it was very early, the sun noy even up yet. She got up and
looked at The Forest
she heard something russle. She knew they where very close to The Forest, bt yet again, she
knew, not even in the
middle of night would the monsters come out. Slowly she turned at begin towards her cot, when
something small, and
furry jumped on her back and grabbed her neck.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love? Hate? Somewhere in-between you're not sure what to call it?
Please tell me what you think!! I'm still not sure about this, so if you enjoyed it so far,
and would like more, please
review and tell me what you think. Even if you don't like, I might write it any ways for my
pleasure of knowing "I" wrote something! *yeah!*
I've tried writing before, but really did not like my fics. So I never sent them in and never
found out if they where any good. So, I guess that's for you to tell me. Enjoy!
Oh yeah, all characters in this story are mine, and though I allow you to use their names,
etc., please do not copy my characters.
P.S. (~*~*~)=new scene ("")= words said by people ^_^
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Eternal Destiny
::Chapter One::
"The Forest"
Unmei of the Stars was fighting for her life. The Forest she was in had no name, for no one
dared mention it much
incase one of its evil monsters where to show up. Unmei had obviously underestimated her
opponents, again. She
was fighting three monsters resembling small wolves standing on their hind legs. She turned
and kicked one in the
stomach before they could harm her. Unmei was a seventeen-year-old mystic. Their used to be
many mystics, as
common as humans, but at the beginning of the world their was a great battle between Mystics
and an evil King
Norshin from the land of Waskiin.
In the battle, the king was killed, but after he had killed all but a couple dozen mystics.
So only about fifty where
left now. This tale, however, unknown by humans because it was told only in the tongue of
mystics, mysin, and
humans greatly hated mystics now days because of their powers, never learned the tale. Mystics
had great magic,
and lived till about a thousand or two years. One of the most interesting things about all
mystics where their eyes.
They where a bright green, and they changed color to show their feelings.
Green was just common, grey for fear, dark blue for anger, light blue for amusement, and so on.
Right now Unmei's
eyes where glowing a dark grey. Fear.
Fear was etched in Unmei's mind as she just quickly punched one aside from clawing her neck.
She jumped away
from them and began chanting a spell. "Novas ke hom…" she started, but one of the monsters
jumped at her before
she could finish. "Stay…away…for one…minuet…so I…can cast…a stupid…SPELL!" She yelled as
she elbowed
on monster rather hard.
Finally learning she wouldn't be casting a spell soon, she grabbed a green dagger from the
side of her waist and with
faster reflexes than humans, slit one of the monsters throats. "Yeah! Finally!" Unmei cheered.
Unmei kicked one from
the side, but before she could turn, the other one slashed at her back, obviously angered by
the death of the third.
"Ahh! Damn you!" She gasped as she felt blood ooze down her back. Finally she got enough room
to cast a spell.
"Novas ke homley!" She yelled pointing to fingers at one and a fireball flew out at it,
incinerating the monster. "One
more…just stay still!" Unmei begged, when all the sudden he did.
Unmei was confused and watched as he gave a loud mournful cry. Unmei new she should attack now,
but the monster
was alone now, so it would be easy to kill. Unmei began to chant again when she heard a rustle
to the side. "Huh?"
She said.
Her eyes that had turned light blur for happiness when she had beat the two monsters turned
back to a dark
grey of fear. "Who's there!?" Unmei cried when four monsters jumped out of the trees.
"Ahhh!" She screeched grabbing on to the closest branch and pulled herself up in the tree, and
quickly jumped from
tree to tree like a squirrel. Unmei finally pulled her self in a tree and saw no others within
ten feet to jump to. She
looked down and saw that the strange monsters where their, and it looked like two more had
joined. Unmei climbed
higher and higher into the tree till she was at the top, but unfortunately, the monsters could
climb trees, and where
coming after her.
"Vasen vu kumosen!" she quickly whispered and a light blasted away from her body, killing only
the two climbing
the tree leaving five left. Still too many. "Help!" She cried desperately hoping someone could
save her. Finally one
reached her and grabbed her throat and began to squeeze as she tried to breath. She kicked him
in the stomach but
another had come up and had cut her legs and skirt, and was now helping suffocate her. 'Help…'
she cried mentally
as her vision faded.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Unmei woke to find her self on a cot outside The Forest, and many scratches on her legs, back,
and painful bruises
on her neck. "Ouch…" She murmured sitting up, curiously wondering where the hell she was. She
noted as a cold
wind blew some of her "Its about time you woke, I thought I might have been to late." Said an
amused voice. Unmei
quickly sat up and noticed she was still wearing her short brown skirt, white top, but her
dagger and sheath, and her
pack were gone.
Unmei looked over and saw a man about twenty-two or so with black hair and light blue eyes.
She had always
wanted hair as black as his, like night, her favorite time of day, when the stars shown at
night, when her magic was
at its strongest, but her hair was a light pink. Most mystics had an unusual hair color.
"Who are you!?" She yelled,
flipping out of the cot and getting in her fighting position. "Someone who just saved your
life." He chuckled. "What's
your name?" Unmei demanded, still worried. "None of your concern, and don't worry, if I wanted
you dead, you
would be." He retorted.
Unmei calmed down and asked, "Where are we?" "Outside The Forest, and outside the Hills." The
Hills was where
Unmei lived. The leader, Oaken, and elderly man in humans, near old enough to join the spirits
of Earth, had raised her.
When Unmei was four, her mother, also a mystic, had left her with a fisher in the village of
old. Pretty soon he noticed
weird things, my eyes, my hair, and things would all the sudden burst into flames around her,
and she was very strong
for her age. So on a trip to The Hills, he had left Unmei with a woman name Eve, and her
husband, Kenji. They too,
noticed the strange things about Unmei, and brought her to the leader, Oaken.
He quickly learnt that Unmei was a mystic, and when Eve and Kenji found out, would not keep
her because most
humans fear mystics, not knowing much
about them because they where so few numbered. So Oaken kept her and raised her, and let her
cast all the spells
she wanted, and train how ever she felt. Unmei still resented her mother, wherever she was.
"It is near moonrise, you may rest here tonight, and tomorrow you may leave for home." His
eyes had changed from
a light blue to a bright green. "You're a mystic." Unmei said more than asked. "Your eyes are
quicker than most.
That will help you later in your life. Yes, I am a mystic, just like you." He informed. "There
a very few left. It can't
be coincidental that you are here." She declared.
"Very quick is your brain too. For that, I will tell you why I come to this village. I am Kiro
of the Night. I have come
here for the cause of everyone on this Earth, and me. You have heard of the evil of Norshin
right? Well there is a new
king, on even stronger than the last, and now there are hardly any mystics left. I have come
to get training by The
Forest. Than I will have to go find the three stones of the Mountain Kings, Sakasu, Sukai,
and Sikieno. With the
three, the King of Norshin can be stopped."
Unmei new what he was talking about. Even in the most peaceful of places monsters from unknown
places had shown
up, and in places already filled with evil was once horror, was now a nightmare beyond
imaginable. The word from
towns was traveling quickly of all queer happenings.
"Yes, I knew something was wrong. Monsters have shown up from nowhere almost everywhere. So
you have come
to end it all, huh?" Unmei said, slightly disbelieving him. She had met many people who
believed they would become
great heroes; many came through The Hills hoping to find adventure. When they did, they
usually never came back.
Oaken supposedly had a map to find these stones, and many had come to get it to fight this
evil.
Oaken would not give it unless they got through challenge. To her knowledge, for she was never
aloud to watch
them, no one had passed as of yet.
"So, another one has come. You seek Oaken then, my guardian. Many have tried for the map but
none have made
it yet. Even though you are a mystic, Oakes's test are tough. Here is some advice. Don't
underestimate him, or else
you shall loose." She warned.
"Don't worry. I don't underestimate people, unlike you." He replied, his eyes turning light
blue in amusement, while
Unmei's turned a dark blue in anger.
"I am the strongest in The Hills!" She retorted with a huff.
"A village of humans."
"With many strong warriors!"
"For humans. Mystics are stronger, and the monsters inhabiting these lands now are stronger
yet."
"Yet you think you can hold them off AND their master, Norshin?" Unmei asked incredulously.
"I do not think I am so strong, though I know I might be if I get these stones." Kiro answered.
"But-" Unmei was cut off as Kiro said, "It's late. You can have some bread and cheese, all I
have left from my
long journey. In the morning, we shall go to The Hills to see your guardian Oaken.
Unmei ate some cheese, and nibbled at the piece of bread, stomach queasy, probably from a
healing spell Kiro had
preformed. She was angered at having to take refuge from this stranger, especially one so
arrogant, even if he was a
mystic. God knew how much she had always wanted to meet another mystic, but God also knew
how much she hated
having to rely on someone, feeling week, and obliged to them.
Unmei sipped some clear water from a flask she had been given. Another thing about mystics
where the only things
they would drink where water, or wine. They repulsed anything else. Once finished, Unmei got
up and went to the
cot where she was tolled to sleep. She had argued for a while with Kiro, saying she would
rather sleep on the grass
than take any more of his charity. But after him threatening to make the grass burn to her
touch, a tricky spell young
mystics have very much trouble at, she agreed grumbling, and silently fell asleep on the cot.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
When Unmei awoke, she noted that it was very early, the sun noy even up yet. She got up and
looked at The Forest
she heard something russle. She knew they where very close to The Forest, bt yet again, she
knew, not even in the
middle of night would the monsters come out. Slowly she turned at begin towards her cot, when
something small, and
furry jumped on her back and grabbed her neck.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love? Hate? Somewhere in-between you're not sure what to call it?
Please tell me what you think!! I'm still not sure about this, so if you enjoyed it so far,
and would like more, please
review and tell me what you think. Even if you don't like, I might write it any ways for my
pleasure of knowing "I" wrote something! *yeah!*
