New Continueations 5
Author's note: *name has been changed for their protection.
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We were heading back to earth, it had been three years since I mated. I had yet to give Corniss a child, which he did not mind much to my surprise. We needed to look at some runes anything that would tell us something. Perhaps because they would tell us something about why the daughter's that Lex, Kim, and Tom had where full blooded Sayains. The King had reluctently given us extra time to go to our old home towns. Thanks to Lex's marvelous methods of persuasion, the king could never deny her anything. Which was good for her allies, but bad for her enimies. She managed to talk him into letting Bardock live after he pounded one of the guards into the ground.
But anyways my friends were excited but I on the other hand was not really looking forward to it. It was just us adults since we had left they had left the kids at the palace, again thanks to Lex. Their children seemed to get along quite well. Which was actually kinda good,
Which brings us to a conversation two days before we landed on earth.
"Where are we goin first?" asked Kim.
"We should probably wait till we land then head to the closest thing there," I suggested.
I remember my agitation, those last few days. I hoped we would land no where near my home town.
"You seem upset about something," observed Lex.
"Do I?'
"Yeah ya do Nichol."
"Its nothing."
"You don't want to go back to your home town do you?" asked Lex.
"Not really, but I do have some family that I need to see."
"Are you sure?"
"Of course."
Suddenly there was an explusion and we left to see what had happened. Toma had pressed a wrong button. So we worked on fixing it, that was probably the most interesting thing that happened on the ship. Well that I am going to tell you about. Anyways when we arrived on earth we landed right in my home town. Great just great.
We walked out of the spaceship and immedatly got shot at.
"Damnit!" I muttered. "Greg* put the damn gun down."
"Nichol!" he said.
"No kiddin."
"What the hell is she doin back here!" shouted a new voice.
Damn its her the one person, that I did not need to see.
"Christain*," I said darkly.
"What is she doin here Greg?"
"Relax Christain we haven't seen her in years."
"So."
"I'm sure her brother wants to see her again. Come on Nichol this way I will take ya to where his new house is."
"I don't think we have the time right now," I said flatly.
"Good you really aren't welcome here anyways."
I rolled my eyes at her, I really did not like this girl.
"Nichol we can stay for awhile," said Kim.
Sometimes I think she is totally clueless.
"No," I said, turning around. "We have some runes to find."
"Nichol!"
I looked up and saw my brother walking up to us.
"Hi Ty*. Sorry I can't stay much longer but we have buisness to take care of."
"Ya know what I think she just doesn't want us to find out that she is the whore of one of them and that she can't get pregnant."
"Christain," I said coldly. "Shut up."
Just then Hal* came up to us.
"Nichol," she said.
"Hal."
"Um what are you guys doing here?"
"We crashed here," I said waving in the direction of the ship.
"Thats not what I meant."
"Where lookin for runes."
"There should be some under the old library."
"Really?"
"Yeah."
"Okay then."
I started heading off in the direction of my old school.
"Um Nichol."
"Yeah?"
"There something I should warn you about."
"What?"
"Um we seem to be having a problem with bloodless corpses. See they show up and after we bury them they kinda come back and do the same thing to other people."
"You're talking about vampires?"
"It seems that way don't it?"
"This is bad."
"It gets worse......."
"How does it get worse."
"Well they've taken shelter in the old runes under the library."
"So the only to get to the runes is to kill them all?"
"Well not neccassrily..."
"Oh?"
"Yeah some of us went into the runes when they were sleeping. They said that if you kill the one who started it. Then it will stop infections from spreading and anyone who was beaten will be cured."
"This should be fun."
"So in the mean time you can stay in the shelter we've built."
I looked at the others and we shurgged so we followed my friends and this bitch. To the shelter.
"You do know that this will never stand up to a real attack right?" asked Corniss.
"Yeah but its the best we can do for now."
"Oh why's that."
"Well the door's made of wood, so that should help."
"Why?"
"Wood is one of the only known things that can kill vampires. Sunlight can has well," I said. "Some legends even say holy relics help to fend off vampires."
"We tried those they don't work," spoke up Ty.
"Well then so much for that myth," smirked Corniss.
"Oh hush," I said.
I saw the other guys on the team exchange a look. Kim, Lex, Celpia, and Cellia just smirked. Evidently the girls knew I was mated to Corniss but the guys didn't. Oh well.
"Wait!" Greg exclaimed. "Nichol is beginning civil to a guy! There is something wrong here!"
"Oh will you shut up!" I snapped.
"Never mind."
I rolled my eyes while everyone else laughed. Well almost everyone.
"Nichol you should be more nice to Greg," nagged Christain.
"Shut up Christain," I said.
"No not until you be more nice to Greg. You do not treat people like that."
"Well at least I don't go around nagging people with whatever I think is wrong with them. Just to make myself feel better."
"How dare you."
"Watch me."
Christain fumed for several minutes until she realised that we had left her behind. Then she hurried to catch up with us.
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"Nichol you had better be careful."
"Why's that Hal?"
"She's on the prowl."
"Why are you telling me this?"
"Because I know that you and that Corniss guy are together. She's on the prowl for him."
I tensed I really hate other females sometimes.
"I'll take your word for it."
"You do that."
Hal then left and Corniss came in. Hey wrapped his arms arounf me and kiseed my neck.
"So someone means to fight you for me?"
"Thats what Hal says."
"I think it would be a waste of your time."
"I really don't think she's interested in you."
"Oh what does that mean?"
"She's just one of those people that goes after whatever is already attached and if she gets them she drops them."
"I will not stray from you woman."
"You had better not."
Then we kissed and slept while waiting for nightfall.
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Author's note: Recently I posted a fic called 'Sayain Romance.' Where some person named Chaotic Serenity (). Said this, 'Okay, no. I refuse to even look at this as a proper romance fic. First off, where is the character and relationship development; I admit that my fic isn't the best, but at least I'm developing the relationship. Secondly, when did Celipa let men walk into her apartment and screw her? What Toma does to Celipa in that fic is nearly nonconsensual sex, in other words, rape. Third, Toma and Celipa are way out of charater overall. Fourth, the dialogue is horrible; nobody would say that in a situation like that. Fifth, be a little more original. The old blaster-in-the-pocket-isn't-really-a-blaster joke is as old as they get. Sixth, grammar and spelling are your friends; employ them. Seventh, detail is another friend of yours; use it as well. Eighth, don't write lemons. Period. Some people can write lemons, some can't. You're not one of them. Sorry to be harsh, but you need a serious reality check when it comes to writing. Give me something at a level relative to yo! ur age and then we'll talk nice.' So what do the rest of you reviewers think? Do you think I should continue to write the way I do? Or do you want me to stop writting the lemons, that some of you seem to enjoy. Well review and tell me what your oppionion is.