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Molly Philips and the rest of the gang are all waiting at the train station Molly's friends daughter is going to come on tour with them for the remainder of the year. Krissi is going to stay with them b/c her parents travel a lot and she got into a motocross accident where someone drove her off course she had to have knee surgery.

FI: mom is the train here yet? I cant wait to see her again its been so long we have so much catching up to do and I cant wait finally we have another girl on the tour well at least me age I get to share a room and……(fi keeps rambling on then the train pulls up)
there it is come on guys lets go find her she said she's wearing a gray adidas sweatshirt and she will have a bag and a labtop come on hurry up

(molly and irene smile at each other about fi's excitement)

Molly: ok sweetie come on lets go BOYS come on we should go find her now besides she shouldn't be walking much she only had surgery about 3 weeks ago.

(fi spots Krissi)

FI: Krissi hey Krissi over here guys come on I see her
Jack: where ? I cant see anything with that crowd of people over there
FI: thats cause she is In the center of the crowd
Carey: why?
FI: cause she is famous remember she does professional motocross
Krissi (spots them) guys hey! Omg fi wow I cant believe Im here this is sooooo cool oh hey molly how are you? Hi jack, carey irene ned how are all you guys?

(that night on the bus)

Krissi: thats it I win again
Carey: no way you had to of cheated
Krissi: no I just got the skills
Jack: admit it carey she has both of us whipped
Carey: no I can beat her c'mon one more game
Krissi: all right
FI: hey you know krissi I was reading up about your accident its really weird you know….
Jack: oh brother here it comes…
FI: (ignoring him) no really I mean one second your all racing and that guy luke was like 10 feet behind you then all of a sudden he was caught up to you and he drove you off I mean I dont know much about motocross but that just doesnt seem normal
Krissi: yea well the guy had luck
FI: no I dont think it is that I mean I think its really weird and you know what else? when I was looking at newspaper articles from the race I saw this little white light thing kinda off to the side by that guy luke at first I though it was Biricu but then I realized that it wasnt cause the light was smaller and I little bit of a different color…
Krissi: listen! There isnt anything weird about this it was just a freak accident (to carey)
listen can I take a raincheck im really tired
Carey: sure
(she leaves)
Jack: good going Fi

(in FI and Krissi's room)

Biriciu: ahh you should of told her little one
Krissi: like she would believe that your sister made a guy run me off course I wouldnt even believe it if I wasnt there it doesnt make sense Jaila is supposed to protect me like you are supposed to protect Fi so why did I get ran down
Biriciu: I dont know little one but she is mad I dont know why but I do know that she did not want ye here
(Fi walks in and sees Biriciu as he leaves)
Fi: whats going on? Who were you talking too?
Krissi: no one
Biriciu: (in krissi's ear) tell her little one
Krissi: NO!
Fi: what?
Krissi: huh oh nothing I was just thinking anyway im going to go to bed now
FI: ok…listen im sorry about before I shouldn't of….
Krissi: dont worry about it
FI: ok goodnight (she leaves)

Jack: so did you fix what you did?
FI: yea but its weird but when I walked in I saw Biriciu leaving I think she knows about him or something
Jack: let me guess you have to find out

(the next day)
Biriciu: good morning tis a beautiful morning eh?
Krissi: what do you want?
Biriciu: I want you to talk to Fiona about this she may be able to find something out for ye
Krissi:no I dont want to I want to get better and get back out there
Biriciu: wont be that simple
Krissi: sure it is
Biriciu: denial tis a dangerous thing little one I still need to find why Jaila wants you off motocross ….where were you traveling after the race
Krissi: well I was going to go on tour with the philips I just came earlier instead
Biriciu: ahhhhh
Krissi: what?
Biriciu: well I dont know exactly but it must have something to do with the philips Faila must not want ye to be with them the jack one in paticular
Krissi: your –
(fi walks in)
Fi: oh your up! How are you? Listen I have to talk to you I mean I know I was always like your kid sister more then a friend when we were little b/c your jacks age and all but we're both older now and I know a lot of stuff and I think I can help you but I need you to keep and open mind?
Krissi: ok
FI: I think I saw you talking to a wil'o'wisp well his name is biriciu and he is supposed to protect my family but he really hasn't helped much and I think he may have something to do with your accident I know its far fetched but---
Krissi: fi! Stop listen I know there is some weird things about my accident but I can take care of it by myself ok? No offense I just dont need any help
FI: but
Krissi: I cant tell you anything right now though
(just then jack calls for them to hurry up b/c they are going out)
Krissi: listen later ok?
FI: ok
(she leaves)
Biriciu: ye should of told her little one
Krissi: it wasnt time
Biriciu: aye ye dont know that
Krissi: I know but I have an idea…..

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