Hey guys the story is back! It took me a while to get this one up cause my life has been so busy lately, so thanx for all of your feedback I love it I need to know how I'm doing. Good or bad (but if its bad please be constructive about it) I also changed the form of writing the story to (hopefully) keep any confusion out . here we go::
its one month after eveything has happened Krissi's knee is better, but Fiona has yet to give up on finding out what happened which makes more trouble.
1:30 AM
come on! (Fi muttered to herself) there has to be something I can remember, anything! C'mon Fiona think!
(Sleepily) Fi? Why are you awake so late at night?
Oh sorry Krissi I didnt mean to wake you up I was just thinking
ok goodnight
Think Fiona think there has to be something, oh well maybe if I sleep on it. (Fiona goes to sleep)
The Next Morning
come on all you sleepy heads! Molly shouts. " everyone get up we have a big day ahead of us!
(Slowly one by one everyone starts to come in)
" mornin Molly" Carey says "Good morning Carey, good morning guys hurry up and get done there is a lot you kids can do in this town and you might as well get to like it here we are going to be here a while"
"How come mom" jack asks "well I am doing 3 concerts here plus Irene wants to see an old friend so we will stay with them too for a few days.
"Sounds good to me" Krissi says coming in "Whats for breakfast?"
Molly replies "well we have nothing but there is a bagel shop around the corner you all can go to"
"Sounds great" Jack and Kristin say together
(carey rolling his eyes) " you two make me sick you're TOO perfect for each other.
"Fi come on we're leaving NOW" Jack screams out to his sister
"Don't worry about me jack im just gonna stay here and do some research on my labtop"
"are you sure FI? " Krissi asks
"positive guys just bring me back something"
before they leave Krissi says " hold up guys im gonna go get a jacket it's kinda cold out"
" hey FI u sure you dont want to come"
without looking up fro the computer " no – (whispering to herself) hey I think I found some—
"OW oh my –"
"krissi whats wrong?"
" no- nothing im ok my uh kn—uh never mind I'll see you later"
" ok Krissi bye"
(Krissi runs out)
" c'mon jack,carey lets go"
Later on at the bagel shop
" hey are you ok Krissi?"
"Sure carey why?"
"I dont know you've been kinda queit"
jack leans over and rubs her knee " does your knee hurt today?"
softly she replies " yea kinda, but only a little"
Back at the bus
Fi talking to herself " this is it wow ……. "
FI finds Kristin's journal under a locked file breaks in and starts to read about everything that has happened.
" now all of this makes sense , I get it so she let herself get hurt to help herself out….i should apolgize to Bricriu he didn't do anything wrong…..hey whats this?
At the bottom she finds another locked file, but it seems a little different from the rest and it is labled Fiala and clicks to open it
" hmmmm this one doesnt have the same password, I wonder whats in it…. Lets see maybe its jack no wait that's the other one hmmmm maybe philips … no thats not it oh I know J-K-4-E-V-E-R hey thats it!
Hey whats going on….
(there is a loud screeching sound as a bright light fills the room Fi covers her ears and eyes until it is over just before it is gone she looks up and see a light that looks like Bricriu's leave the bus only it is a strange reddish color
all of a sudden Bricriu appears and says
"Little Duck what have ye done?"
she replies " I dont know all I did was open up this file and then—"
" thats it little one there is no telling what could happen now you set her free none of us are safe , she is angry with us all "
Fi says now scared " what are you talking about I dont understand I was just trying to help Krissi"
"just trying to help her? you may as well as killed her now there's no telling what could happen now , that she's free"
" what are you talking about – killed who ? what happened? And who is free?"
he replies solemnly: "Fiala"
ok guys I'm stopping here I want to kinda leave a little suspense, I know it started off a little weak but I hope this will build up to a good next few chapters but this is my new thing for the next chapter I have an idea of what will happen but I want you all to comment or email me (italianangel1438@hotmail.com) and tell me endings you would want like who gets hurt, who doesn't or anything else like that thanx!
its one month after eveything has happened Krissi's knee is better, but Fiona has yet to give up on finding out what happened which makes more trouble.
1:30 AM
come on! (Fi muttered to herself) there has to be something I can remember, anything! C'mon Fiona think!
(Sleepily) Fi? Why are you awake so late at night?
Oh sorry Krissi I didnt mean to wake you up I was just thinking
ok goodnight
Think Fiona think there has to be something, oh well maybe if I sleep on it. (Fiona goes to sleep)
The Next Morning
come on all you sleepy heads! Molly shouts. " everyone get up we have a big day ahead of us!
(Slowly one by one everyone starts to come in)
" mornin Molly" Carey says "Good morning Carey, good morning guys hurry up and get done there is a lot you kids can do in this town and you might as well get to like it here we are going to be here a while"
"How come mom" jack asks "well I am doing 3 concerts here plus Irene wants to see an old friend so we will stay with them too for a few days.
"Sounds good to me" Krissi says coming in "Whats for breakfast?"
Molly replies "well we have nothing but there is a bagel shop around the corner you all can go to"
"Sounds great" Jack and Kristin say together
(carey rolling his eyes) " you two make me sick you're TOO perfect for each other.
"Fi come on we're leaving NOW" Jack screams out to his sister
"Don't worry about me jack im just gonna stay here and do some research on my labtop"
"are you sure FI? " Krissi asks
"positive guys just bring me back something"
before they leave Krissi says " hold up guys im gonna go get a jacket it's kinda cold out"
" hey FI u sure you dont want to come"
without looking up fro the computer " no – (whispering to herself) hey I think I found some—
"OW oh my –"
"krissi whats wrong?"
" no- nothing im ok my uh kn—uh never mind I'll see you later"
" ok Krissi bye"
(Krissi runs out)
" c'mon jack,carey lets go"
Later on at the bagel shop
" hey are you ok Krissi?"
"Sure carey why?"
"I dont know you've been kinda queit"
jack leans over and rubs her knee " does your knee hurt today?"
softly she replies " yea kinda, but only a little"
Back at the bus
Fi talking to herself " this is it wow ……. "
FI finds Kristin's journal under a locked file breaks in and starts to read about everything that has happened.
" now all of this makes sense , I get it so she let herself get hurt to help herself out….i should apolgize to Bricriu he didn't do anything wrong…..hey whats this?
At the bottom she finds another locked file, but it seems a little different from the rest and it is labled Fiala and clicks to open it
" hmmmm this one doesnt have the same password, I wonder whats in it…. Lets see maybe its jack no wait that's the other one hmmmm maybe philips … no thats not it oh I know J-K-4-E-V-E-R hey thats it!
Hey whats going on….
(there is a loud screeching sound as a bright light fills the room Fi covers her ears and eyes until it is over just before it is gone she looks up and see a light that looks like Bricriu's leave the bus only it is a strange reddish color
all of a sudden Bricriu appears and says
"Little Duck what have ye done?"
she replies " I dont know all I did was open up this file and then—"
" thats it little one there is no telling what could happen now you set her free none of us are safe , she is angry with us all "
Fi says now scared " what are you talking about I dont understand I was just trying to help Krissi"
"just trying to help her? you may as well as killed her now there's no telling what could happen now , that she's free"
" what are you talking about – killed who ? what happened? And who is free?"
he replies solemnly: "Fiala"
ok guys I'm stopping here I want to kinda leave a little suspense, I know it started off a little weak but I hope this will build up to a good next few chapters but this is my new thing for the next chapter I have an idea of what will happen but I want you all to comment or email me (italianangel1438@hotmail.com) and tell me endings you would want like who gets hurt, who doesn't or anything else like that thanx!
