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Thanks for that
kind review, well, the chapters are short I admit, but I'm
generally putting up about 3 chapters a day! And it was easier to
write smaller chapters and put them up often, then have 1 big one
once a week. But thanks! It's encouraging to see that someone
likes me writing. Read and Review as usual.
"Well, if
it isn't the crack rescue squad come to rescue the commander."
said the NOD Commander, "Isn't that sweet?"
The Commander clicked off the intercom, and turned to face the
GDI Commander.
"Well, if it isn't my nemisis, the man who has beaten me for
so long, ah, but our false messages from 'General Solomon' fooled
did it not Commander? Well, Commander Brady, time for you to
watch your rescue squad die when your computer explodes. Oh, I
forgot, you'll be here too, welcome to the Karma Hotel Commander."
The GDI
Commander sat, cold as ice, not even looking at anything in
particular, he'd already checked for any possible escape route
and had found that there were none. Although he knew this
already, he'd designed the building 5 years ago.
No, he, he, he
thought he'd remembered something, but it had gone, the gag
around his mouth was interfering with his mind, the pain there
was preventing him from thinking clearly. He heard EVA continue
her demise, without EVA's supervision, the subsystems were
spiralling into error after error,even as he watched. The systems
tried to reroute through circuitry that had been destroyed, the
circuitry could not cope with all of the electricity trying to be
routed via it and so it gave up, and so system after system
exploded, or just went offline, causing other systems to repeat
the deadly performance.
"Oh, Brady,
I thought I'd leave you with some TV for your demise, you can
watch as your precious base explodes in front of your eyes,"
EVA -
REBOOT REQUIRED
Battle Control -
offline
Communications - offline, attempting to
reconnect via different location - all locations failed -
retrying
Radar Control - offline
Climate Control - offline
Sprinkler System - offline - fires:132
Auto-Repair - offline
Harvester Control - offline
Defense System:
Main Gate - offline
East wall - offline
West wall - offline
North wall - offline
Building
Damage Report:
Command Centre - offline, severe damage - estimated time
remaining - 5 minutes, 32 seconds
Barracks - not responding
War Factory - offline, severe damage - estimated time
remaining - 1 minute, 17 seconds
Service Depot - offline, severe damage - estimated time
remaining - 7 minutes, 1 second
Technology Centre - online - light damage
Power Supply - online - cosmetic damage
Uplink Centre - not responding
EVA -
REBOOT REQUIRED
ESTIMATED
TIME REMAINING UNTIL SYSTEM OVERLOAD: 5 MINUTES, 32 SECONDS
Well, he
thought, I've had a good innings.
(Authors Note:
Just thought I'd say that I have absolutely no idea were this
story is going, it's just rolling off my fingertips as I type.
Oh, sorry I killed off Lewis, but he was getting difficult to
write about, I decided to concentrate on Charlie instead).