Please review my story. Sorry for the small errors on the first chapter. Like How I spelled Ilse's name ops.
AT SCHOOL
"Ok class dismissed," said Mr. Francis Carpenter as he released his class for the day.
He had had a good first day and believed the students did also. "See you all tomorrow on time please." The Students exited rather quickly.
As they exited Isle saw Perry and ran over to meet up with him.
"Hello Perry Miller and how are you this fine afternoon?" Asked Ilse.
"I am fine and thank you for asking. Where are Teddy and Emily?"
As he said that they both turned around to see Emily and Teddy coming out arm'n'arm.
"Hello Perry shall we get going." Said Emily and they all nodded.
Ilse and Perry walked together as Emily and Teddy walked closely behind talking also.
"So Emily do you think Ilse is glad that Perry is back?" Asked Teddy.
"Well yes I do and they seem to be enjoying each others company."
"I just finished painting a picture of what I think the disappointed house would look like if it was so disappointed. Do you like it?"
"Oh Teddy it is so beautiful!"
"You may have it if you wish."
"I would love it. Thank you very much Teddy." As she said that she gave him a peck on the check in thanks.
Teddy blushed and so did Emily but were both glad that Perry and Ilse did not see them for they knew they would make fun of them.
As they were walking Teddy heard a noise in the forest like whispering so Teddy asked Emily, "Did you hear that whispering Emily?"
"Well now that I think of it I did. Lets see if we can find out what it is."
" All right Emily." So they walked into the forest a little ways when they hear Ilse scream.
They ran and found Perry being attacked by some men in uniform and another man holding on to Ilse and keeping her from screaming.
"Hey you let go of her!" Teddy screamed as he ran up to the man that was holding Ilse only to be knocked down.
"Get away boy!" Screamed the man that was holding Ilse.
Emily came running to help only to also be grabbed by yet another man.
Emily began to scream and scream for help then found her mouth being covered by a strange smell then all went black.
Teddy saw Perry (who was rather brusied) pass out in one of the mans arms and saw is mouth being covered by a handkerchief.
Teddy turned his head to find Emily only to see Ilse also passed out and being carried away.
Then he spotted Emily being carried away.
Teddy got up and ran to Emily screaming "You let go of her."
As Teddy neared Emily a man in a dark gray uniform pulled out a gun and all of a sudden Teddy heard a *BANG* he fell then all went black.
"I said boy stay away. We might as well take him with us the more ransom the better." Ordered the man in gray.
The group of about twelve Soldiers picked up the other three and took them to there hide out. ___________
AT THE MURRAY FARM
"Hey Jimmy did you hear that bang it sounded like a gun." Asked Anut Laura.
"Yes I did. I think it was a gun shot but probley it was just a hunter."
"Well you tell me when Emily gets home from school."
"Sure at Laura."
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Next Chapter What Happened to the Fab Four is Teddy and Perry and the others for that matter ok?
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