Disclaimer:
All characters, plots, settings, and locations are copyrighted to their respective companies and trademarks.
Ravenous To Write:
A Note From The Author:
When I first set out to write Ravenous For Revenge I set out with a goal of fifteen to twenty pages about a group called X-6 that just was sent to kill the X-5's. Nothing more or less. However, as I began to add depth to characters like Jacen I realized that a driving force behind someone like him would never be just an order. Hence, the betrayed escape was born. After time we got to see all of the complexities to the other characters and I tried to show that they were three dimensional and not just flat with one goal in mind.
I am very proud of this story even though I know it could have been better. In the end everything is always better in my head but I still love how it came out.
People to thank:
The cast and crew of Dark Angel come first and foremost. The show is just amazing and of course the main inspiration.
AJQuest for always being there to review.
Marilyn for putting up with my incessant ramblings that I would always procrastinate on those final three chapters.
Karen, Limona, Black Wolf, Cat, and all the other great fanfic writers out there that not only inspired me but encouraged me and supported me. Thank you all. This next one is for you.
Preview of Project X:
Now people will definitely point out that Ravenous for Revenge is open for a sequel and my response has always been that one day a sequel will come and that I was working on a fanfic with the codename Project X. Who said Project X wasn't a sequel to RR? I know I made sure I kept it quiet. Just to let it out now, here is a small taste of what is to come in the next couple months:
We never knew what we were,
Until the night you showed us,
Max dove behind the desk and found herself crawling as fast as she could behind another as Wren leapt over the side and chased after her. Wren caught up to her and with a strong kick to the stomach caused Max to flip over and clutch her ribs in pain. A wicked smile played on Wren's lips as she spoke, "Now we'll see who the stronger one is."
You said we were weak,
Now you're the one running,
Max wrapped her arms around Logan and he almost fell backwards. He still was getting used to walking without the exoskeleton and with Max always jumping into him it made it much worse but Logan wasn't going to complain. He looked deep into her eyes and smiled, "I have something to tell you. I've been meaning to say this to you but it's never the right time."
She smiled up into his eyes and licked her lips in anticipation, "Yes?"
Logan almost laughed from embarrassment as he blushed deeper, "Max, I......."
So pure in the moment,
Clouded in frailty,
Jacen smiled at Todd, "You see, everyone has fear. It's how you deal with fear that determines your worth." Jacen stepped up onto the ledge and walked along it with his ice cold eyes staring right into Todd's, "You find that fear in you and you cut it away until no more fear exists. It's at this moment that you are everything that you can be." With this Jacen stepped off the side and Todd watched in shock as he willingly fell off the side of the building.
Jared stepped into Todd's view and smiled, "In this moment you can be everything. Or you can be nothing. What do you choose?"
Try and run,
Try and hide,
Jacen ran towards the car as if playing chicken as the two men left fired upon him. The Camaro sped up considerably as did Jacen as his genetic engineered muscles started pumping his legs like pistons. He ran towards the Camaro and now he could hear the two men running after him, afraid to fire in fear of killing the driver. Just a split second before impact Jacen leapt into the air, placing his arms up to cover his face with his guns still in his hands, and then everything went dark..................
Something has been building,
Behind these apathetic eyes,
The laser sighting flashed across the crates and Seth hoped that the soldiers didn't notice it as he hid it. Now he slowly moved it onto a soldier that was firing behind some crates. He pulled the trigger and the soldier fell backwards with surprising force. He watched as his two fellow snipers broke away across the field with a soldier firing from behind. Seth looked through his scope at them just as he saw Lydecker and two guards run behind some red containers on the opposite side of the field. He paused for a moment not sure to shoot the soldier and save his friends or to shoot the target and succeed in the mission.
Howling to the black sky,
Hunting in the dead of night,
Zack could feel his blood draining as the rain swept more and more away as it gathered around his cuts. His side had a puncture wound and he suspected a rib had broken the surface of his skin. His right hand no longer had that many splinters for when he hit the asphalt most of the skin was torn away from his hand pulling the splinters with it. Zack laid sprawled out and gently rolled himself over letting out an anguished moan. He laid there unable to see the car but only the night sky and the soft light the constellations above gave off.
Surfacing to feed,
Content to wait and bleed,
"You ever get the feeling you're being watched?" Seth remarked to Max just before the wall above them exploded in fragments as bullets rained down on them.
Almost forgotten about us,
Almost let us slip into your past,
Max's mouth dropped to the ground as she stared at the man in front of her. "I'm back," Jacen coolly replied.
Through pain and time you'll know,
Your mistake.
All characters, plots, settings, and locations are copyrighted to their respective companies and trademarks.
Ravenous To Write:
A Note From The Author:
When I first set out to write Ravenous For Revenge I set out with a goal of fifteen to twenty pages about a group called X-6 that just was sent to kill the X-5's. Nothing more or less. However, as I began to add depth to characters like Jacen I realized that a driving force behind someone like him would never be just an order. Hence, the betrayed escape was born. After time we got to see all of the complexities to the other characters and I tried to show that they were three dimensional and not just flat with one goal in mind.
I am very proud of this story even though I know it could have been better. In the end everything is always better in my head but I still love how it came out.
People to thank:
The cast and crew of Dark Angel come first and foremost. The show is just amazing and of course the main inspiration.
AJQuest for always being there to review.
Marilyn for putting up with my incessant ramblings that I would always procrastinate on those final three chapters.
Karen, Limona, Black Wolf, Cat, and all the other great fanfic writers out there that not only inspired me but encouraged me and supported me. Thank you all. This next one is for you.
Preview of Project X:
Now people will definitely point out that Ravenous for Revenge is open for a sequel and my response has always been that one day a sequel will come and that I was working on a fanfic with the codename Project X. Who said Project X wasn't a sequel to RR? I know I made sure I kept it quiet. Just to let it out now, here is a small taste of what is to come in the next couple months:
We never knew what we were,
Until the night you showed us,
Max dove behind the desk and found herself crawling as fast as she could behind another as Wren leapt over the side and chased after her. Wren caught up to her and with a strong kick to the stomach caused Max to flip over and clutch her ribs in pain. A wicked smile played on Wren's lips as she spoke, "Now we'll see who the stronger one is."
You said we were weak,
Now you're the one running,
Max wrapped her arms around Logan and he almost fell backwards. He still was getting used to walking without the exoskeleton and with Max always jumping into him it made it much worse but Logan wasn't going to complain. He looked deep into her eyes and smiled, "I have something to tell you. I've been meaning to say this to you but it's never the right time."
She smiled up into his eyes and licked her lips in anticipation, "Yes?"
Logan almost laughed from embarrassment as he blushed deeper, "Max, I......."
So pure in the moment,
Clouded in frailty,
Jacen smiled at Todd, "You see, everyone has fear. It's how you deal with fear that determines your worth." Jacen stepped up onto the ledge and walked along it with his ice cold eyes staring right into Todd's, "You find that fear in you and you cut it away until no more fear exists. It's at this moment that you are everything that you can be." With this Jacen stepped off the side and Todd watched in shock as he willingly fell off the side of the building.
Jared stepped into Todd's view and smiled, "In this moment you can be everything. Or you can be nothing. What do you choose?"
Try and run,
Try and hide,
Jacen ran towards the car as if playing chicken as the two men left fired upon him. The Camaro sped up considerably as did Jacen as his genetic engineered muscles started pumping his legs like pistons. He ran towards the Camaro and now he could hear the two men running after him, afraid to fire in fear of killing the driver. Just a split second before impact Jacen leapt into the air, placing his arms up to cover his face with his guns still in his hands, and then everything went dark..................
Something has been building,
Behind these apathetic eyes,
The laser sighting flashed across the crates and Seth hoped that the soldiers didn't notice it as he hid it. Now he slowly moved it onto a soldier that was firing behind some crates. He pulled the trigger and the soldier fell backwards with surprising force. He watched as his two fellow snipers broke away across the field with a soldier firing from behind. Seth looked through his scope at them just as he saw Lydecker and two guards run behind some red containers on the opposite side of the field. He paused for a moment not sure to shoot the soldier and save his friends or to shoot the target and succeed in the mission.
Howling to the black sky,
Hunting in the dead of night,
Zack could feel his blood draining as the rain swept more and more away as it gathered around his cuts. His side had a puncture wound and he suspected a rib had broken the surface of his skin. His right hand no longer had that many splinters for when he hit the asphalt most of the skin was torn away from his hand pulling the splinters with it. Zack laid sprawled out and gently rolled himself over letting out an anguished moan. He laid there unable to see the car but only the night sky and the soft light the constellations above gave off.
Surfacing to feed,
Content to wait and bleed,
"You ever get the feeling you're being watched?" Seth remarked to Max just before the wall above them exploded in fragments as bullets rained down on them.
Almost forgotten about us,
Almost let us slip into your past,
Max's mouth dropped to the ground as she stared at the man in front of her. "I'm back," Jacen coolly replied.
Through pain and time you'll know,
Your mistake.
