Ok, this is chapter two!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so pleased! Thankies to everyone who reviewed it, because I want to know what you think of my writing!
……" Are you sure you're the General?" Faye asked for the second time. "Yes! For the last time, I am the damned General! And if you aren't of importance to the Stratego Folken, I will personally cut off your head!!"
Dilandau shouted, very loudly. " awright, awright! I get it! Damn! Loud enough?" Faye said, annoyed.
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they walk*
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"Dilandau? Did you hear that?" Faye asked quietly. "yeah, stay close, it might be an animal." Dilandau hissed thru clenched teeth.
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Dilandau and Faye sat in silence, staring at each other, wondering if they should speak. " damnitt, I can't take it any more!" Dilandau hissed. "pleasem tell me who you are, and why you are here!" "it isn't so simple!" Faye whimpered, tears starting to flow down her face. " I'm afraid that, if I tell, he'll kill me too." "who has hurt you so badly? Who has struck such fear into your heart? If it is any consolation, I will kill him for you." Dilandau said quietly, putting his arms around Faye's shaking shoulders.
" He killed my mother and father, and my little brother, Malcolm. He was my best friend, and they all loved him like family. He killed them, slowly and painfully, and left me to bleed for it. I…..I……I don't understand how, or why he did it, but he did. He killed all my relatives, he destroyed my life." Faye said in a shaky voice, not daring to meet dilandau's eyes. Lest he see her pain. "What is his name?" dilandau hissed, silently vowing to tear the man apart with his bare hands. "Van Fanel, King of Fanelia….that bastard."
