Gohan heard the scream as he flew even faster, towards where it came from. His hands were in fist...he would not lose his little brother. He did not care how big or who this guy was. He would kick his ass. As he approached the area, he turned down his 'Ki' even though he stayed the same Super Sayine 2 mode. He wanted to surprise this asshole. He saw in the distance the guy holding Goten by the neck as he punched him once again in the back. He went quicker.
Vegeta had not quite caught up to Gohan, but he heard the scream from Goten. It was louder then before. He saw Trunks tense.
"I shouldn't have left him..." Vegeta looked back at his kid. He was not going to comfort him or tell him he did the right thing. He would have to figure it out on his own. He took him by the hand though and charged himself up as high as he could, which was lower then Gohan still, but followed close behind. He then turned down his "ki" so they would not feel him coming either.
He had turned himself back to normal Goten. He felt another punch come towards his back. He could not take much more. His vision started to fade as he felt him punch him again in the back. He could not scream any more, as he had lost almost all the energy. He was tossed again as he landed against the wall. The blood came dripping out of his mouth as his vision started to fade. He could not hold on for much longer. He felt his body give as he blinked to keep himself awake. Even though he could not feel his body, he got himself back onto his feet.
"Don't you ever give up!"? Goten just looked at him for a long moment, he was not seeing much of anything.
"I was never taught to give up." The man slammed him hard in the face with his foot. It sent him fast towards another cliff. He knew he should of felt himself hit the hard wall once again. Instead, he felt himself be quickly caught by a pair of strong but gentle arms. He could not really tell who it was; he just knew it was not that guy. He glanced up as the person who held him landed himself gently onto the ground.
"Goten, it is me, Gohan." Goten felt the fear leave his body as he realized his brother was there. He clutched onto his brother tight. He was crying into his brother's arms. He held him for a long moment and looked up at Brolly Jr. Goten felt the strong power his brother possessed. He did not want to be left alone, even if it was to fight the guy. He knew if he was left alone, he might lose consciousness. He was so weak.
"Gohan..." He felt him look up in the sky for something then back at him. Goten heard the guy laugh evilly.
"So you are the famous brother that is suppose to kick my ass."
Gohan looked down at his little brother. He did not have much left in his family life. All he had was his brother and his mother. He already lost his father because he could not do the job right. He learned hard from his mistake. His brother's "Ki" was so weak, he was afraid of leaving him unattended. He just clutched to Gohan, as if afraid to lose consciousness. He knew he did not have much time, as the guy just stood there with his arms crossed. He glanced down at his little brother who was so frail, weak, and beaten to all hell.
"Why the fuck did you do this to my brother, you asshole." He saw a grin spread onto his face.
"Revenge against your father, Kakkorot. Seems somewhat appropriate to kill his kids, since he killed my dad. Its only fair." Gohan has raised his eyebrow. He tried to rank his memory for what this guy looked like to him.
"You don't know who I am, do you?" The guy just laughed as he pointed a finger at him.
"I am Brolly Jr." Gohan's eyes narrowed ever so slightly as that name left his lips. He glanced down at his brother who clung tight against his body. He felt his pain, as there seemed to be no "ki" left inside. He needed to fight this guy as the rage ran through his veins. He was very protective over his little brother.
Vegeta flew up just in time to have seen Goten being tossed like a doll and Gohan quickly caught him before he hit the wall. Gohan saw him touch down to the floor as Goten held tightly onto him. He knew both brothers were extremely close. Vegeta held tightly onto Trunks arm, as he seemed to want to go quickly to him.
"Wait." He moved around Brolly Jr. He got around him as he started to touch down. He noticed Gohan glance up at Brolly Jr. for a second then back at Goten. Vegeta noticed the kid clung onto his brother but was barely conscious. His hand went into a fist. He saw Trunk's hand shake as he looked up at him.
"Dad he can't fight and watch Goten at the same time." Vegeta knew that. He nodded his head. Gohan had not noticed he was there yet. He saw him look at the sky for a moment as if hoping someone would show up...most likely Kryilin with the sensu beans.
Gohan held his brother to his body as he held him in his arms. He could not let him go. The guy laughed at him as he held up a hand to him.
"I think you have a problem, don't you. I would not worry about that little brat; he will not last long anyway. I give him a few hours in that condition...I am surprised he lasted this long." Gohan's hand went into a fist.
"What you are proud you beat up a small kid? You are a real smart aren't you?" Gohan heard the voice from behind him. It was Vegeta. He looked behind him as he walked up with Trunks by his side. The guy looked at Vegeta for a moment. Gohan thought he would be pissed.
"Actually I am smart...." He was not even pissed at the comment Vegeta made. He saw a little bit of be wilderness cross his face. Gohan turned to Vegeta all of a sudden, as he tried to contain his anger.
"Goten..." He looked down at him. His eyes stayed closed as he clung onto him. He opened his eyes slowly as they looked at him. He was so weak.
"Gohan..." He was worried, pissed, and ready to kill this guy. However now he needed to give him to Vegeta. He could tell Brolly Jr. was getting impatient.
"Vegeta is going to take you Goten." He saw him tense for a moment. It was not in pain, it was not in fear, and it was because he was ashamed. He looked down at him.
"Goten don't feel ashamed, you did a very good job. I know dad would be very proud of you." He looked at Vegeta as he held out his hands. He handed him Goten. He saw him just sink into his arms. Vegeta rose up out of the area and went to a look out post far away. As he went away, he could tell Goten did not grip onto him the same way. Gohan turned around finally as his were filled with fury.
"You found a babysitter, how cute. Now we can begin this little game. I will finish you, your mom, and that brat...then I will end what my father couldn't do." Gohan stood on the ground in his ready stance. He glared up at the man.
"Don't underestimate me Brolly Jr. If my dad could have beat you then I can beat you. As far as I'm concerned, you are going to die first."
Vegeta flew away from Gohan very oblivious to the fight. Gohan had handed Goten over to him. He did not feel it then, but as he held Goten. He noticed his "ki" was down to about one or zero. He also noticed he did not hang on to him the same. He knew he was always tough of these kids about failing a fight or not beating the enemy. Except this time he knew Goten did not have a shot. He just did not have that kind of experience or training for shit like this. He landed himself just far enough away from the fight that if he had to join he could.
He sat himself down onto a near by rock as he held Goten close to him. The memory of him curling his tail around him, flashed in his mind again. As the other memory of him taking his finger and pulling, it tight made him blink. He looked at Trunks who seemed to hover close by him.
"Goten!" Trunks asked as if not noticing he was almost completely gone. He would not have lasted much longer.
"Trunks..." Vegeta noticed how weak he was. Suddenly Vegeta turned to Trunks, he knew how slow Kryilin was.
"Trunks I want you to go to where Kryilin is and get the sensu beans as fast as you can." He knew Trunks knew where that was. He looked at him for a moment then back at Goten.
"Right." He quickly turned super and sped quickly in the direction Kryilin had gone. He glanced down at Goten; he did not realize how much he cared for Kakkorot's brat.
The kid just lay there in his arms. He bled and needed more then a sensu bean. He needed a hospital. Unfortunately, he could not take him there now. It would be too dangerous. It could kill him by just flying there. He glanced up at Gohan, he knew for home much he was pissed. For his whole body would have been shaking in anger, he saw the intensity sharpen as he floated up to be at the same level as Brolly. He realized then he did not really know how much stronger Gohan had become. He just watched. They were just getting ready to fight.
Well? How do you guys think of this story so far? I know I have not written a synopsis yet for it. However, I have not finished it yet! LOL...what do you think of my character development? Is it okay? Am I doing a good job? Do you like it? Anything I could do to make it better. TELL ME! LOL. Could you see this as an episode? That is what I'm trying to do...though I don't know if its working or not. I will try to add a chapter a day to this thing. Though if you like this story please check out my other things! Read and Review them all...please tell me what you think!
Vegeta had not quite caught up to Gohan, but he heard the scream from Goten. It was louder then before. He saw Trunks tense.
"I shouldn't have left him..." Vegeta looked back at his kid. He was not going to comfort him or tell him he did the right thing. He would have to figure it out on his own. He took him by the hand though and charged himself up as high as he could, which was lower then Gohan still, but followed close behind. He then turned down his "ki" so they would not feel him coming either.
He had turned himself back to normal Goten. He felt another punch come towards his back. He could not take much more. His vision started to fade as he felt him punch him again in the back. He could not scream any more, as he had lost almost all the energy. He was tossed again as he landed against the wall. The blood came dripping out of his mouth as his vision started to fade. He could not hold on for much longer. He felt his body give as he blinked to keep himself awake. Even though he could not feel his body, he got himself back onto his feet.
"Don't you ever give up!"? Goten just looked at him for a long moment, he was not seeing much of anything.
"I was never taught to give up." The man slammed him hard in the face with his foot. It sent him fast towards another cliff. He knew he should of felt himself hit the hard wall once again. Instead, he felt himself be quickly caught by a pair of strong but gentle arms. He could not really tell who it was; he just knew it was not that guy. He glanced up as the person who held him landed himself gently onto the ground.
"Goten, it is me, Gohan." Goten felt the fear leave his body as he realized his brother was there. He clutched onto his brother tight. He was crying into his brother's arms. He held him for a long moment and looked up at Brolly Jr. Goten felt the strong power his brother possessed. He did not want to be left alone, even if it was to fight the guy. He knew if he was left alone, he might lose consciousness. He was so weak.
"Gohan..." He felt him look up in the sky for something then back at him. Goten heard the guy laugh evilly.
"So you are the famous brother that is suppose to kick my ass."
Gohan looked down at his little brother. He did not have much left in his family life. All he had was his brother and his mother. He already lost his father because he could not do the job right. He learned hard from his mistake. His brother's "Ki" was so weak, he was afraid of leaving him unattended. He just clutched to Gohan, as if afraid to lose consciousness. He knew he did not have much time, as the guy just stood there with his arms crossed. He glanced down at his little brother who was so frail, weak, and beaten to all hell.
"Why the fuck did you do this to my brother, you asshole." He saw a grin spread onto his face.
"Revenge against your father, Kakkorot. Seems somewhat appropriate to kill his kids, since he killed my dad. Its only fair." Gohan has raised his eyebrow. He tried to rank his memory for what this guy looked like to him.
"You don't know who I am, do you?" The guy just laughed as he pointed a finger at him.
"I am Brolly Jr." Gohan's eyes narrowed ever so slightly as that name left his lips. He glanced down at his brother who clung tight against his body. He felt his pain, as there seemed to be no "ki" left inside. He needed to fight this guy as the rage ran through his veins. He was very protective over his little brother.
Vegeta flew up just in time to have seen Goten being tossed like a doll and Gohan quickly caught him before he hit the wall. Gohan saw him touch down to the floor as Goten held tightly onto him. He knew both brothers were extremely close. Vegeta held tightly onto Trunks arm, as he seemed to want to go quickly to him.
"Wait." He moved around Brolly Jr. He got around him as he started to touch down. He noticed Gohan glance up at Brolly Jr. for a second then back at Goten. Vegeta noticed the kid clung onto his brother but was barely conscious. His hand went into a fist. He saw Trunk's hand shake as he looked up at him.
"Dad he can't fight and watch Goten at the same time." Vegeta knew that. He nodded his head. Gohan had not noticed he was there yet. He saw him look at the sky for a moment as if hoping someone would show up...most likely Kryilin with the sensu beans.
Gohan held his brother to his body as he held him in his arms. He could not let him go. The guy laughed at him as he held up a hand to him.
"I think you have a problem, don't you. I would not worry about that little brat; he will not last long anyway. I give him a few hours in that condition...I am surprised he lasted this long." Gohan's hand went into a fist.
"What you are proud you beat up a small kid? You are a real smart aren't you?" Gohan heard the voice from behind him. It was Vegeta. He looked behind him as he walked up with Trunks by his side. The guy looked at Vegeta for a moment. Gohan thought he would be pissed.
"Actually I am smart...." He was not even pissed at the comment Vegeta made. He saw a little bit of be wilderness cross his face. Gohan turned to Vegeta all of a sudden, as he tried to contain his anger.
"Goten..." He looked down at him. His eyes stayed closed as he clung onto him. He opened his eyes slowly as they looked at him. He was so weak.
"Gohan..." He was worried, pissed, and ready to kill this guy. However now he needed to give him to Vegeta. He could tell Brolly Jr. was getting impatient.
"Vegeta is going to take you Goten." He saw him tense for a moment. It was not in pain, it was not in fear, and it was because he was ashamed. He looked down at him.
"Goten don't feel ashamed, you did a very good job. I know dad would be very proud of you." He looked at Vegeta as he held out his hands. He handed him Goten. He saw him just sink into his arms. Vegeta rose up out of the area and went to a look out post far away. As he went away, he could tell Goten did not grip onto him the same way. Gohan turned around finally as his were filled with fury.
"You found a babysitter, how cute. Now we can begin this little game. I will finish you, your mom, and that brat...then I will end what my father couldn't do." Gohan stood on the ground in his ready stance. He glared up at the man.
"Don't underestimate me Brolly Jr. If my dad could have beat you then I can beat you. As far as I'm concerned, you are going to die first."
Vegeta flew away from Gohan very oblivious to the fight. Gohan had handed Goten over to him. He did not feel it then, but as he held Goten. He noticed his "ki" was down to about one or zero. He also noticed he did not hang on to him the same. He knew he was always tough of these kids about failing a fight or not beating the enemy. Except this time he knew Goten did not have a shot. He just did not have that kind of experience or training for shit like this. He landed himself just far enough away from the fight that if he had to join he could.
He sat himself down onto a near by rock as he held Goten close to him. The memory of him curling his tail around him, flashed in his mind again. As the other memory of him taking his finger and pulling, it tight made him blink. He looked at Trunks who seemed to hover close by him.
"Goten!" Trunks asked as if not noticing he was almost completely gone. He would not have lasted much longer.
"Trunks..." Vegeta noticed how weak he was. Suddenly Vegeta turned to Trunks, he knew how slow Kryilin was.
"Trunks I want you to go to where Kryilin is and get the sensu beans as fast as you can." He knew Trunks knew where that was. He looked at him for a moment then back at Goten.
"Right." He quickly turned super and sped quickly in the direction Kryilin had gone. He glanced down at Goten; he did not realize how much he cared for Kakkorot's brat.
The kid just lay there in his arms. He bled and needed more then a sensu bean. He needed a hospital. Unfortunately, he could not take him there now. It would be too dangerous. It could kill him by just flying there. He glanced up at Gohan, he knew for home much he was pissed. For his whole body would have been shaking in anger, he saw the intensity sharpen as he floated up to be at the same level as Brolly. He realized then he did not really know how much stronger Gohan had become. He just watched. They were just getting ready to fight.
Well? How do you guys think of this story so far? I know I have not written a synopsis yet for it. However, I have not finished it yet! LOL...what do you think of my character development? Is it okay? Am I doing a good job? Do you like it? Anything I could do to make it better. TELL ME! LOL. Could you see this as an episode? That is what I'm trying to do...though I don't know if its working or not. I will try to add a chapter a day to this thing. Though if you like this story please check out my other things! Read and Review them all...please tell me what you think!
