This is my first fanfic

This is my first fanfic. All help would be appreciated greatly!!! I would love some reviews. Since I'm a big critic of myself, I don't know if people will like it. If enough people do like it I'll continue. Well enjoy the story!!

Disclaimer : I do not own Sailor Moon or Dragon Ball Z ( I can wish though)

Rebuilding a Broken Soul

Curse them, curse them all. They were the cause for all this pain I was in. It was all their fault. If I hadn't once loved them, I'd kill them, but I had loved them, and I guess a part of me still did. Still if they hadn't donte that. I still don't get why they would betray me. I had never done any wrong to them, yet now after all the time we had spent together, they go all out and betray me.

Each one knew what part of me they could hurt the worst, and they hit it with such a force that I could feel nothing by the time they were done. Ami, who had been so sweet and caring, who had always stood up for me, just stood back and laughed at me while the others did their worst. Mina took all her power to hurt my heart. She had seduced Darian, and he was now in her clutches never to come back to me. Lita decided to hurt me physically. She used her superior strength to kick me and punch me. And then Rei, whom I had always considered to be my best friend, took what little pieces of me were left and crushed them into a fine dust to blow away in the wind. She picked up my already battered body, and slammed me into a wall. She than told me how everything up till then had been a mere act. They had never cared for me, and they never would. She told me that I was nothing but a toy to be used to get what they want. Power. I would get them that power. She also said I had better like the feelings I was having because I would never again feel happiness. And if I found some source of happiness, she told me to be sure that they would come and destroy it. And they left.

They just left me there, in all of my pain. They didn't care what happened to me. They were happy I was pain. I had to end it, right now. The pain was too great. I couldn't live with this inside of me. I looked around me. This was an alley, there had to be some sort of way I could end it. And there it was. A knife. It was beautiful to me. It glistened in the street light. Cold and alone, just like I was. I was meant to use it. And now, this pain would end. It would be over.

:o)~ b l u e r h a p s o d y ~(o:

2.03.01

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