Disclamer: None of these characters are mine except for the ones i made up.
This is the 2nd part of a friend for Brooklyn. If you liked the first part you
probably will like this one as much.
To recape: Brooklyn and the clan tried to stop Demonia from casting a spell,
and while doing that Brooklyn was sucked into a wirlpool created by magic.
Everything was dark for Brooklyn. "Am i dead" he thought. "No, I can't be, my
body hurts too much. Maybe i should check to see if the others are ok"
Brooklyn lifted him self up and off the cold hard ground. He had been lying there
for some time and his body had gotten stiff. As soon as he opened his eyes, for the
first time, he dicovered he was in a strang land.
He looked around him and saw forests all around him, no Manhattan, no streets and
people, no Goliath or the others. NO GOLIATH OR THE OTHERS!! "Where am i"
he said outloud. "Where are the others?" "i can tell you, if you want me too."
said a voice.Brooklyn turned around too see a strange creature. "Who are you"
said Brooklyn, "What are you?"
The creature told Brooklyn his name was Storm and that his species didn't have a
name.
Storm looked kinda like a coccer spanial that was the size of a wolf, with the
feet of a cat and medium sized ears. He had a white face, with a brown body,
and he had very curly hair on his ears that flew into his eyes.
How did i get here asked Brooklyn. You came through in a wirlpool thingy
and into our world, said Storm. What is your worlds name, asked Brooklyn.
Storm said it was called Lightica. Do you know how i can get back to my world,
asked Brooklyn. Storm told him he didn't, and couldn't tell him anyone who did.
By know Brooklyn was feeling lost and confused and hardly
believed what was happening to him. He kept asking him self what he was going
to do.
Storm told Brooklyn that he was traveling to a nearby town called St. Hope, and
maybe someone there could help him get home. Brooklyn decided to follow Storm to
this town, and decided that everything would come full cicle and turn out right.
He also decided that he should try to trust Storm since he was such a friendly
creature.
The road that would take them to St. Hope was three days long. Along the way they
talked and Brooklyn got to know Storm. He found out that Storm called himself a
wanderer. He also learned that storm traveled from place to place doing odd jobs
for money and helped people who needed help. Storm also got to know Brooklyn.
About his past, family, and adventures.
Brooklyn also started noticing his surroundings a lot more. He stepped atop a hill
to get a better view once and surveyed the land. He saw that the world he was in
was very lushious and green in some parts, desilate and gray in others parts,and
was speckled with small towns, and in the center of it all was a mountain with a
white gleaming castle on top of it.Who's castle is that, asked brooklyn.
That is King Zemorius's castle, he's the leader of our world. One other thing
brooklyn notice, was that it was day. He wondered to himself, why am i not a statue?
When the two finally reached St. Hope, they found an unbelieveable site. Many of the
buildings were dimolished or on fire. There was no one around except for a begger,
that looked like a turkey mixed with pigeon. What happened here, asked Storm. The
begger said that some stranger had come through the town demanding money, and when
the towns people refused to pay up, she destroyed the place. What did she look like
asked brooklyn. She looked sort of like you except a female, with red hair, and called
herself Demonia. Demonias here, how did she get here? asked brooklyn. The begger then
told them, that he saw a strange light, then a wirlpool appeared just above the center
of the town. I have to find her, before she does this to any other place. I guess i'll
have to wait to go home, said brooklyn. Before leaving storm asked the begger if he
knew where she was headed. He said that she was headed to Arcturus.The duo started on
there way to Arcturus. Storm asked Brooklyn if he could help him on his journey, and
asked if he could they could be partners. Brooklyn said yes.
At a rest stop on a nice path, Storm left brooklyn a lone for a short while, to scout
ahead and see how far they'd traveled.
Brooklyn sat underneath a tree and thought about how he was going to stop demonia and get
home. Suddenly brooklyn heard a cracking sound above him. He looked up, just as a creature
fell out of the tree and on top of him. He looked into its eyes just as it lifted its head.
She was a girl, she was a gargoyal!
Who is this Girl? Is she a friend or enemy?
This is a pretty corny story and i stink as a writer. Read and Review and tell me what you
think.Tell me if i should keep writing or give the story to a nice shreader.
This is the 2nd part of a friend for Brooklyn. If you liked the first part you
probably will like this one as much.
To recape: Brooklyn and the clan tried to stop Demonia from casting a spell,
and while doing that Brooklyn was sucked into a wirlpool created by magic.
Everything was dark for Brooklyn. "Am i dead" he thought. "No, I can't be, my
body hurts too much. Maybe i should check to see if the others are ok"
Brooklyn lifted him self up and off the cold hard ground. He had been lying there
for some time and his body had gotten stiff. As soon as he opened his eyes, for the
first time, he dicovered he was in a strang land.
He looked around him and saw forests all around him, no Manhattan, no streets and
people, no Goliath or the others. NO GOLIATH OR THE OTHERS!! "Where am i"
he said outloud. "Where are the others?" "i can tell you, if you want me too."
said a voice.Brooklyn turned around too see a strange creature. "Who are you"
said Brooklyn, "What are you?"
The creature told Brooklyn his name was Storm and that his species didn't have a
name.
Storm looked kinda like a coccer spanial that was the size of a wolf, with the
feet of a cat and medium sized ears. He had a white face, with a brown body,
and he had very curly hair on his ears that flew into his eyes.
How did i get here asked Brooklyn. You came through in a wirlpool thingy
and into our world, said Storm. What is your worlds name, asked Brooklyn.
Storm said it was called Lightica. Do you know how i can get back to my world,
asked Brooklyn. Storm told him he didn't, and couldn't tell him anyone who did.
By know Brooklyn was feeling lost and confused and hardly
believed what was happening to him. He kept asking him self what he was going
to do.
Storm told Brooklyn that he was traveling to a nearby town called St. Hope, and
maybe someone there could help him get home. Brooklyn decided to follow Storm to
this town, and decided that everything would come full cicle and turn out right.
He also decided that he should try to trust Storm since he was such a friendly
creature.
The road that would take them to St. Hope was three days long. Along the way they
talked and Brooklyn got to know Storm. He found out that Storm called himself a
wanderer. He also learned that storm traveled from place to place doing odd jobs
for money and helped people who needed help. Storm also got to know Brooklyn.
About his past, family, and adventures.
Brooklyn also started noticing his surroundings a lot more. He stepped atop a hill
to get a better view once and surveyed the land. He saw that the world he was in
was very lushious and green in some parts, desilate and gray in others parts,and
was speckled with small towns, and in the center of it all was a mountain with a
white gleaming castle on top of it.Who's castle is that, asked brooklyn.
That is King Zemorius's castle, he's the leader of our world. One other thing
brooklyn notice, was that it was day. He wondered to himself, why am i not a statue?
When the two finally reached St. Hope, they found an unbelieveable site. Many of the
buildings were dimolished or on fire. There was no one around except for a begger,
that looked like a turkey mixed with pigeon. What happened here, asked Storm. The
begger said that some stranger had come through the town demanding money, and when
the towns people refused to pay up, she destroyed the place. What did she look like
asked brooklyn. She looked sort of like you except a female, with red hair, and called
herself Demonia. Demonias here, how did she get here? asked brooklyn. The begger then
told them, that he saw a strange light, then a wirlpool appeared just above the center
of the town. I have to find her, before she does this to any other place. I guess i'll
have to wait to go home, said brooklyn. Before leaving storm asked the begger if he
knew where she was headed. He said that she was headed to Arcturus.The duo started on
there way to Arcturus. Storm asked Brooklyn if he could help him on his journey, and
asked if he could they could be partners. Brooklyn said yes.
At a rest stop on a nice path, Storm left brooklyn a lone for a short while, to scout
ahead and see how far they'd traveled.
Brooklyn sat underneath a tree and thought about how he was going to stop demonia and get
home. Suddenly brooklyn heard a cracking sound above him. He looked up, just as a creature
fell out of the tree and on top of him. He looked into its eyes just as it lifted its head.
She was a girl, she was a gargoyal!
Who is this Girl? Is she a friend or enemy?
This is a pretty corny story and i stink as a writer. Read and Review and tell me what you
think.Tell me if i should keep writing or give the story to a nice shreader.
