He has kept a secret for 13 long years, and now with permission from the Hokage, he can finally reveal his secret, how will the Elemental Nations deal with the Shinigami's Chosen One,
Zanpakuto/Kido Using/Hollow Naruto
Sup guys it's Bahamutsoulking, and I am doing something that I've been wanting to do for a while, here it is,
This is the Rewrite of Naruto of the Zanpakuto, I decided to make it sound more sense and do something a little different, and Naruto having every single Kekkei Genkai that exists makes him too overpowered, so I decided to do only the abilities of the Shinigami from Bleach,
Naruto has kept a secret for 13 years, only the Hokage, the Ichirakus and his himes knew the secret, Naruto has had a power that makes the Sharingan look like a second rate Kekkei Genkai, he has had this power ever since he became the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki, he was blessed with the powers of the Shinigami (Bleach Shinigami, if you're new to the anime),
He kept it and his true skills hidden from everyone, until the Preliminary Rounds with permission from the Hokage,
I changed the graduation age to 17, I believe that should be the correct age for being allowed into the shinobi forces, who just lets twelve year old children be shinobi and kunoichi out in the world where anything bad could happen to them, I mean really, why would the ninja villages do that?,
The Harem has been changed, instead of that massive harem, I decided to shorten it,
Here is the Harem,
Harem
Anko Mitarashi
Kurenai Yuhi
Yugao Uzuki
Hana Inuzuka
Koyuki Kazahana
Shion
Shizuka
Tsunade Senju
Shizune Kato
Konan
Kurami (Female Kyuubi)
Ayame Ichiraku
Female Zanpakuto Spirits in the Harem:
Sode no Shirayuki
Zabimaru (Chimpette, don't know what to call her)
Haineko
Tobiume
Katen Kyokotsu (Katen & Kyokotsu)
Suzumebachi
That's the harem, although I'm thinking about adding Tenten, Kurotsuchi, Temari and Mei Terumi and then set the harem in stone,
Reason for Tenten is because of his Zanpakuto and she'll be very interested and eager to wield it,
Reason for Kurotsuchi is because of a little alliance pact that the Yondaime Hokage and the Sandaime Tsuchikage made years ago sometime during the Third Shinobi World War,
Reason for Temari is because of the same alliance pact that the Yondaime Hokage made with the Yondaime Kazekage years ago,
Reason for Mei Terumi is also because of the alliance pact the Yondaime Hokage made with the Terumi Clan when the Bloodline War was still going on, and the pact will happen because Mei Terumi would become the Godaime Mizukage,
Hope that is more better to those who may believe that Naruto is Overpowered in "Naruto of the Zanpakuto",
Let's get right on to it,
Now there will be a scene on how Naruto got the Shinigami's Blessing, it will be in a later chapter,
Shinigami's Blessing for Naruto
Zanpakuto
Hollowfication
Kido
and those are the powers that the Shinigami blessed Naruto with,
And to clear things up, Naruto does indeed have the Hogyoku, however he only uses it when he has no choice,
Bashing: Sasuke/Civilians/Elders
Evil: Danzo/Orochimaru/Jiraiya
Reasons for the characters being bashed and evil will be explained at the end of the chapter,
Here we go!
"Zanpakuto Speech/Zanpakuto Techniques/Jutsu/Bijuu"
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto nor Bleach, they belong to Masashi Kishimoto (Naruto), and Tite Kubo (Bleach)
Chapter 1: Secrets Revealed
17 year old Naruto Uzumaki and his team got to the tower for the next part of the exams, Naruto also got to meet the other teams that passed.
One team from Kiri, one team from Oto, one team from Suna, one team from Iwa, one team from Kumo and one from Nadeshiko, Naruto got to know them and he also met with a red haired girl named Karin, and after learning of her Uzumaki heritage, he revealed to her his Uzumaki heritage and they formed a sibling bond, he also formed a sibling bond with the girl from Oto, she was Kin.
Naruto also went to the Hokage and told him of the Orochimaru confrontation and he removed the Five Pronged Seal
Later that night, Naruto was asleep and he was in his subconscious, talking to and spending time with his Zanpakuto Spirits, Inner Hollow, which he dubbed Menma and Kurami the Kyuubi no Kitsune, he has kept them a secret for 13 years, they knew that if the civilians ever found out about them, then they would try and get the Zanpakuto handed to Sasuke because of him being an Uchiha, and they absolutely abhor that mentally unstable spoiled brat.
Naruto treated them like family, although some of the female Zanpakuto spirits have romantic feelings for him which he was fine with, as he was eligible for the Clan Restoration Act.
One of the Zanpakuto spirits says "You seem troubled Naruto, is something wrong?", and Naruto looks to see Senbonzakura and says "Of course Senbonzakura, I'm just wondering what would happen if the civilian council finds out about you guys and try to force me to give you guys to Sasuke-teme.".
"They are fools and will do no such thing Naruto, Hiruzen will make sure of it." Senbonzakura reassured Naruto.
"If they try and force you to give us to that duck butt haired bastard, I'll kill them all." growled a demon-like humanoid, and Naruto says "As much as the idea is tempting Kazeshini, but we can't kill them, that will just make me no better than them.".
"We are with you until the very end Naruto." said a middle aged man wearing sunglasses while having an invisible wind blowing, and Naruto smiles "Thanks Zangetsu.".
Naruto spent all night in his subconscious with his Zanpakuto Spirits, Inner Hollow Menma and Kurami the Kyuubi no Kitsune, and he knew that the time to reveal his secret was near.
The Next Day
Naruto and his team were on the arena floor with the other genin that have passed and recieve the speech from Hayate Gekko and the Hokage.
The Preliminary Exams went under way.
(The fights up until Naruto's fight with Kiba are like the anime)
"Yahoooooooooooooo!" cheered Kiba as they look to see the screen.
Kiba Inuzuka vs.. Naruto Uzumaki
"We got this in the bag Akamaru, we'll beat that deadlast." said Kiba with a smirk and he gets to the arena floor.
Naruto jumps over the railing and lands on his feet expertly surprising everyone except the Hokage, Anko and Kurenai.
Naruto then says "I'm not the same deadlast at the academy Kiba, you should be more careful about judging people, especially on their appearance.", and the arrogant Kiba says "You're still the deadlast of the class, and I'll enjoy defeating you in the most humiliating way possible.".
Naruto sighs and says "That arrogant mouth of yours is going to be the death of you.", and that caught everyone by surprised, except the Hokage and two certain jonins, Naruto said something that was something that they never expected him to say, it was so not Naruto.
Naruto looks to the Hokage and Hiruzen seeing the look on Naruto's face and with a smile, he nods.
Naruto grins at this, he can finally reveal his secret.
"This will be over quick." said Kiba arrogantly, and Naruto says "For you, yes.".
Kiba growled at this, and Hayate asks "Ready?".
They nod and Hayate says "Hajime".
Kiba charges full speed at Naruto who just stands there with a bored look on his face.
And just as he was about to hit Naruto, he just suddenly disappears like he was never there.
Kiba stumbles a bit and looks around for Naruto and he sees Naruto reappear.
"What was that, are you cheating Dobe?" he growled, and Naruto says "In the shinobi world, nothing is fair, we do whatever we can to get the job done, and I'm just getting started, time for you to witness my true power.".
"What's that supposed to mean, what true power?" asked a confused Kiba.
"It means that the villagers are not the only ones with secrets, I've kept a secret from everyone, except the Hokage for 13 years, and now with his permission, I can finally reveal it." said Naruto with a smirk.
He gets his sword out and gets into a stance that nobody recognizes, and they then sense a very strong power radiating from Naruto and he calls out, "Lets see who is stronger, the canine or the feline.".
This confused everyone, and Naruto yells out "Grind, Pantera", and the arena is cloaked with a smokescreen and when the smokescreen dies down, everyone is stunned at Naruto's appearance, his teeth became jagged and sharp, his hands turned into black claws and his feet become black clawed paws, similar to that of a cat, along with a slender whip-like tail that's longer than his body.
His hair became very long and flowing, and the markings around his eyes enlarged and extended to the tips of his ears, which become swept back and cat-like and he now wears a sort of a headgear upon his brow covering his forehead.
He looked like a humanoid panther, and Naruto gives out a scream and it generated a shockwave, powerful enough to knock almost everyone off their feet.
'What the hell is this, a shockwave?, he can generate this much power just by screaming?' thought almost everyone in the arena.
"Well, this is unexpected." said Omoi in shock.
"Is this some kind of henge?" asked Karui in awe.
"What is this power?" asked Yugito in surprise.
"Since when did Naruto have this power?" asked Ino in surprise.
"Troublesome." said Shikamaru lazily.
"I've never seen this kind of power before." said Choji in surprise.
"This is nothing special." said Neji not caring at all, but he was indeed somewhat impressed with the power as he did a good job hiding his surprise.
"I have found my eternal rival." yelled Rock Lee with a fire in his eyes as his sensei shared the same idea that his student has a eternal rival of his own.
"So that's what the sword he has can do." said Tenten as she is more interested in the sword Naruto wields.
"He can use this kind of power, what kind of power is it?" asked Kankuro in shock.
"This is interesting, guess him saying that he has a secret is true." said Temari eyeing Naruto.
"He'll prove my existance." said Gaara with crazed but interested look on his face as the Bijuu inside him is telling him to be careful of Naruto's power.
"That's an unusual power." said Kurotsuchi with surprise and interest as she eyes Naruto as well, her teammates were starring in fear of Naruto.
"Naruto-kun?" stuttered Hinata with a blush seeing her crush in a different form.
"Always full of surprises." said Shino with interest and amusment.
'So he and Hokage-sama decided that it was time to reveal it.' thought Anko and Kurenai with knowing smiles.
Shizuka is looking at Naruto with interest and wonder 'Could he be the promised one I've been searching for?' she thought, she had admit that Naruto looked hot in her point of view.
"Kakashi-sensei, what has happened to Naruto, why does he look like that?" asked Sakura, and Kakashi says "I don't know.", he was in shock as he never knew about this from Naruto.
Kiba is in shock at this, he always mistook the sword Naruto had as a normal katana, 'This is what his sword can do, what other tricks and secrets does he have up his sleeve?' he thought.
Naruto charges at Kiba who barely had time to react and Naruto nails him so hard he gets knocked into the wall and loses consciousness.
'That was just sad.' said Pantera, and Naruto says 'I know, but this proves that you shouldn't underestimate nor overestimate your opponents.'.
Naruto's appearance goes back to normal.
"Winner by knockout, Naruto Uzumaki" said Hayate, and people were still in shock at what they had just witnessed, here the deadlast was able to defeat Kiba in one blow.
Shizuka was still staring at Naruto thinking 'He's perfect, he is without a doubt the one.', and the Nadeshiko sensei sees this and asks "Something on your mind Shizuka-sama?".
Shizuka says "I just found the one to fight for the battle I was promised for.", she was promised that she would fight a shinobi of unrivaled power and she just found him.
'What was that power just now?, Naruto never showed this during the missions.' thought Kakashi, then he realised what Naruto said before he used the power, 'It means that the villagers are not the only ones with secrets.', so that's what he meant.
Naruto walks up and stands where he was before he fought Kiba.
"Naruto, what was that power just now?" asked Kakashi hoping to know what exactly the power his student used against Kiba was, Sakura was curious as well.
"That was a power that I've been blessed with since birth." said Naruto, and he continues his explaination "It's a power that only I can use, this sword right here that was always mistaken as a normal katana, this is a Zanpakuto also known as a Soul Cutter, and it is not the only power I was blessed with, the other powers you'll see in the future when the time comes.".
"Why keep it hidden?" asked Sakura, and Naruto asks "Remember the Civilian Council?".
"Oh right, them." said Kakashi now understanding why Naruto kept the power hidden.
"What blessed you with this power Naruto?" asked Sakura, and the answer shocked them both "Whenever you believe me or not, the one who blessed me with this power was actually the Shinigami himself." said Naruto with a smirk.
"I told the Hokage about this power and he was surprised at this, and remembered a tale that was said that the one who is blessed with this power would be known as the Shinigami's Chosen One, and the Hokage told me to keep this power hidden until he gave me the okay to finally reveal it." said Naruto with a smirk.
"So when Hokage-sama nodded to you...?" asked Sakura, and Naruto says "It was finally time to reveal it.".
"Oh no." said a voice, and they look to see the next match, this made one person feel uncomfortable about it.
Neji Hyuuga vs.. Hinata Hyuuga
Neji gives a smirk and says "This won't take long." and he walk down to the arena as Hinata is doing the same.
As they're on the floor, Neji is just going on about his fate crap and is breaking Hinata's confidence.
"You should just quit Hinata-sama, fate has decreed me the winner of this match." said Neji with a scowling smirk.
Hinata was about to, when suddenly "Hinata, don't let this delusional jackass tell you that you can't win, show him the inner fighter of the Hyuuga." said Naruto encouragingly.
That gave Hinata her confidence back, and she gets into stance and Neji does so as well with a scowl, "Ready?" asked Hayate, they nod and then Hayate says "Hajime".
Neji charges and then it was a battle of the Gentle Fist Taijutsu Style, and after some time Neji gets the upper hand and keeps breaking Hinata's confidence, but Naruto's words of encouragment were enough to make her keep going until Neji struck her in the chest, which caused her to fall to the ground unable to move.
As Hayate declared Neji the winner, Neji then charges Hinata with the intent to kill, but was stopped by the senseis.
"You already won the match, and yet you would kill your own cousin?" asked an outraged Kurenai, and the ever arrogant Neji says "She is nothing but a Hyuuga Disgrace and she will die a disgrace, fate has declared it.".
They see Naruto tending to Hinata, and he has his hands glowing green above Hinata's chest, "Hinata is very lucky that it was the lung that got struck instead of the heart, otherwise it would have been worse, she would have been crippled and robbed of her career as a kunoichi." he said, and Kurenai goes up to them and asks "How is she doing?".
"One of her lungs is collapsed, nothing I can't fix in a hurry." said Naruto, and he heals up Hinata with no problems.
"You know medical ninjutsu?" asked Kakashi, and Naruto says "It's actually called medical kido, but yes I do.".
Naruto turns and glares at Neji and says "You better pray that you don't have me as an opponent in the finals, because I will make you suffer for what you did to Hinata.".
"Not likely, fate has declared your win as a fluke." said Neji with a scowl, and Naruto says "To hell with your fate beliefs, everyone knows that fate is another lie told by their superiors, nothing is written that cannot be unwritten."
Neji gets angry at his remark and was about to attack when "Stand down Neji Hyuuga, otherwise you'll be disqualified from the Chuunin Exams." said Hiruzen with his voice in full authority making Neji back down but not before he glares at Naruto.
(Other matches are from Canon Naruto, and the non-canon fights are because I'm too lazy to do them)
The winners of the other battles were Shizuka, Fu, Yugito, Kurotsuchi, Shikamaru, Shino, Dosu, Gaara, Kankuro, Karui, Samui and Temari.
Naruto and the other Genin that won their matches were now standing in front of the Hokage and the other Jonin.
"Congratulations for making it past the Preliminary Round of the Chuunin Exams, next is the Finals, which will take place next month." said Hiruzen, and Karui asks "A month?, why would we have to wait a month to take the finals?".
"For by now your opponents have seen your skills and abilities, for the month will give you time to come up with new techniques and abilities to get the upper edge against you." said Hiruzen.
"That makes sense." said Naruto with humor, and some snicker at this.
One by one people draw a number for who they may or may not be facing in the finals.
"Now, from left to right say the number that you've drawn." said the Hokage.
"I got 6." said Gaara emotionlessly.
"Hey, what do you know, number 1." said Naruto with a smirk.
"Troublesome, I got 9." said Shikamaru lazily.
"I have 10." said Temari with a smirk.
"Number 2." said Neji with a stern look.
"My number is 8." said Shino unchangingly.
"Number 7." said Kankuro with a smirk.
"I drew number 4." said Dosu.
"Number 12." said Yugito with a smirk.
"Number 3." said Shizuka with a small smile.
"I drew 11." said Kurotsuchi with an unseeable smirk.
"I got 14." said Samui with a unreadable expression on her face.
"I drew number 13." said Karui with anticipation.
"And so then, Sasuke will be number 5, and the battles are of the next month." said Hiruzen.
(Match Line-ups)
Naruto Uzumaki vs.. Neji Hyuuga
Shizuka vs.. Dosu Kinuta
Sasuke Uchiha vs.. Gaara of the Desert
Kankuro vs.. Shino Aburame
Shikamaru Nara vs.. Temari
Kurotsuchi vs.. Yugito Nii
Karui vs.. Samui
(End of Match Line-Ups)
'Perfect, I can knock his ego and pride down by many pegs.' thought Naruto with a smirk as the other contestants were having their own thoughts on the opponents that they are going to face in the finals.
"The matches are assigned, now best of luck on your training for the Finals next month." said Hiruzen.
And everyone walk their separate ways and Naruto stays behind to talk to the Sandaime about the up coming invasion that Orochimaru is planning thanks to the information provided by Karin and Kin.
Hiruzen also wanted to tell Naruto something when they got back to his office, and so they shunshined back to the Hokage's Office.
(Hokage Office)
Hiruzen and Naruto talk about training plans and Hiruzen says "Well Naruto-kun, I think I may have someone in mind of training you for your match against Neji, but I doubt you'll like it.".
"Who is it?" asked Naruto curiously, and Hiruzen says "It's Jiraiya, he is one of my students, a member of the Sanin and the self-proclaimed super pervert.".
"My failure of a godfather?" asked Naruto with narrowed eyes, and Hiruzen nods as he is well aware that Jiraiya would rather leave Naruto to fend for himself instead of doing his responsibilities as Naruto's godfather.
"Yes Naruto-kun, I understand that you're more than capable of fighting against Neji, but think of this as keeping a very close eye on Jiraiya, you see ever since I've first trained him, I noticed a lust for power in his eyes, Jiraiya believed himself to be a valient and noble shinobi, but I only saw darkness in his heart, this I also noticed with Orochimaru, the only student I will consider my true student is Tsunade Senju as she inherited her grandmother's stubborness and her grandfather's kindness." said Hiruzen, and Naruto realized what Hiruzen was getting at, it wasn't just for Naruto to train, it was also to keep a watchful eye on Jiraiya's intentions.
"Of course jiji, I'll keep a very close eye on him." said Naruto with a evil grin, and Hiruzen smile and says "I know you will.".
Naruto leaves and Hiruzen looks out the window and says to himself "So, we have the threat of not only Danzo, but also Orochimaru and Jiraiya, how my students have fallen into darkness, I know the crimes they have commited behind my back, once we have proof of their evil intentions of what they believe is protecting Konoha when really it is destroying it from the inside out, then we'll have them arrested and executed for their crimes, just need to play my cards right.".
(Naruto)
Naruto is heading towards where Jiraiya would most likely be, the hot-springs on the women's side, and he realized that Anko and Kurenai were also there as well as Yugao and Hana, and he becomes very mad at the thought of his bastard failure of a godfather peeping on some of his himes, he would make Jiraiya suffer for sure.
And as he got there he was right, Jiraiya was there peeping on his himes for his smut which he calls research, he walks right up to him and throws him into the women's side of the Hot-Spring, hearing the females inside yelling and beat the hell out of Jiraiya was music to his ears.
Moments later, Anko, Kurenai, Yugao and Hana walk out fully clothed and they walk to Naruto with smiles and he smiles back and they kiss him on the cheek as a thank you for busting the old super pervert and they leave.
Jiraiya comes out and growls out "Who dares interupt my research?", and Naruto says "I dare because jiji has told me you would train me for a month to fight against Neji Hyuuga.", and Jiraiya says "Take a hike.".
Naruto then kicks him in the nuts and Jiraiya screams in pain and Naruto says "It wasn't a request, it was an order by the Hokage for you to do so.", and Jiraiya painfully grumbles about this and accepts to train him, what Jiraiya doesn't know was that Naruto was told to keep an eye on him by the Hokage.
And for the month, Naruto has 'trained' under Jiraiya and he has learned the Rasengan and was told to never use it, which Naruto saw as fear of the Rasengan falling into the wrong hands because of the greed in Jiraiya's eyes.
Naruto would be the one to expose Jiraiya's evil intentions to the public of Konoha that believe in the Sandaime.
'Let the games begin.' thought Naruto with a smirk.
(To Be Continued)
Well, I just got the first chapter of the 'Naruto of the Zanpakuto' rewrite done, I know it may not be as enjoyable as the other one, but at least it would make more sense and make Naruto not all powerful,
Hope you guys understand,
Anyway, I have some ideas on which Zanpakuto would be an actually weakness to some clans in Konoha and other shinobis and kunoichis.
Zanpakuto that I think are a perfect match for the Weakness of certain clans and ninjas:
Hyuuga Clan: Sakanade
Yamanaka Clan: Kyoka Suigetsu
Nara Clan: Senbonakura
These three are what I think are weak against when Naruto may fight one of them, if you guys don't agree, let me know which Zanpakuto would actually be better to use against them.
Reason why Sasuke is bashed is because of the Civilian Council spoiling hi rotten.
Reason why Jiraiya is evil is because of the prophecy about the Shinigami's Chosen One.
This is Bahamutsoulking signing out,
Stay tuned for 'Chapter 2: Chuunin Final Exams',
Peace!