Who Want to Jump Off a Cliff?
Hi! I'm back. It really sux that I can't get on to fanfiction.net....so thanx Sally for putting up my stories. And thanks for the reviews. ooh...and thanks for the three peepes that put this story on their fav list....it means quite a lot to me....(disclaimer: I don't own escaflowne)
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Back at the top of the cliff, Van was laughing very hard. "Ha, I can't believe that Dryden squished Milerna. Ha ha ha ha!!.......anyways, Celena you're up."
Celena was very scared....and she was angry at Van. She didn't understand where this angry suddenly came from, but she knew it was there. She walked up to the hat and pulled out a piece of paper. She read it out aloud,"You'll try to fight Van." Oh no. What am I going to do? I don't have the courage to face Van...or the skill. What to do? What to do? I hate that stinkin' bastard! I hate him. Suddenly, an odd shadow formed behind Celena's back. Celena shivered.
Van tossed her a sword. It was pretty heavy. Van said, "Come on, charge at me.....this is the only way you can be my bride....either you die under my sword or you die jumping down Hanger's Cliff."
Celena, of course, charged at him. She didn't know why, but she was really good at this. She's never lifted a sword in her life. Why would be so skilled at this? Why is she feeling very strange? As if a shadow had come over her.
"Wow, you're pretty good," Van said as their swords clashed. "You almost remind me of d..." Celena smashed van's sword away. This got Van very mad. He ran at her, and pushed her off the cliff.
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Celena thankfully caught on to a branch on the side of the cliff. In her head, she thought about the many things she hated about Van. Suddenly the shadow lifted, and she like her old self again.
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"Well, Hitomi, I think its your turn now," Van snickered.
Hitomi felt very scared, but she went to the hat anyways. "You have to approach me and rip a bit of any part of my shirt. No swords will be allowed in this battle. Only fists." Hitomi didn't know what to do. Suddenly, she thought of a plan. Since she was such a fast runner, she immediately ran up to Van's shirt. Instead getting his shirt, she snatched his pendent. He tried to push her off, and at the last second Hitomi wished that he would turn back into his old self again.
"HITOMI!" He tooked off his shirt, and his beautiful wings came out. He flew down to Hitomi. "I had always loved you. I hope you know that."
Hitomi felt really good to be in his arms again. I hope this moment could last forever.
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i think there will be one more chapter and an epilogue. any more suggestions?
thanks ....bobo
Hi! I'm back. It really sux that I can't get on to fanfiction.net....so thanx Sally for putting up my stories. And thanks for the reviews. ooh...and thanks for the three peepes that put this story on their fav list....it means quite a lot to me....(disclaimer: I don't own escaflowne)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Back at the top of the cliff, Van was laughing very hard. "Ha, I can't believe that Dryden squished Milerna. Ha ha ha ha!!.......anyways, Celena you're up."
Celena was very scared....and she was angry at Van. She didn't understand where this angry suddenly came from, but she knew it was there. She walked up to the hat and pulled out a piece of paper. She read it out aloud,"You'll try to fight Van." Oh no. What am I going to do? I don't have the courage to face Van...or the skill. What to do? What to do? I hate that stinkin' bastard! I hate him. Suddenly, an odd shadow formed behind Celena's back. Celena shivered.
Van tossed her a sword. It was pretty heavy. Van said, "Come on, charge at me.....this is the only way you can be my bride....either you die under my sword or you die jumping down Hanger's Cliff."
Celena, of course, charged at him. She didn't know why, but she was really good at this. She's never lifted a sword in her life. Why would be so skilled at this? Why is she feeling very strange? As if a shadow had come over her.
"Wow, you're pretty good," Van said as their swords clashed. "You almost remind me of d..." Celena smashed van's sword away. This got Van very mad. He ran at her, and pushed her off the cliff.
***
Celena thankfully caught on to a branch on the side of the cliff. In her head, she thought about the many things she hated about Van. Suddenly the shadow lifted, and she like her old self again.
***
"Well, Hitomi, I think its your turn now," Van snickered.
Hitomi felt very scared, but she went to the hat anyways. "You have to approach me and rip a bit of any part of my shirt. No swords will be allowed in this battle. Only fists." Hitomi didn't know what to do. Suddenly, she thought of a plan. Since she was such a fast runner, she immediately ran up to Van's shirt. Instead getting his shirt, she snatched his pendent. He tried to push her off, and at the last second Hitomi wished that he would turn back into his old self again.
"HITOMI!" He tooked off his shirt, and his beautiful wings came out. He flew down to Hitomi. "I had always loved you. I hope you know that."
Hitomi felt really good to be in his arms again. I hope this moment could last forever.
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i think there will be one more chapter and an epilogue. any more suggestions?
thanks ....bobo