Ok, last time I posted this poem, NO ONE reviewed it.-_- Didn't make me too happy. But when something fails, try try again. I've added a bit so be kind, rewind...I mean review!



Disclaimer: I don't own Zelda but I do own a penny and a piece of lent in my pocket!



Hero, Eternal: Revised



In praise of the great liberator,

Of Hyrule's knight, the gladiator,

We lift our hearts in times no greater

Than now when giving thanks to thee.



A land once filled with serenity

Saved by a knight's divinity;

A warrior for all eternity

Who helped a land forever be.

A brave knight who made the endeavor

To banish evil's wrath forever,

To walk the path where none has ever

And make a land forever free.

Thou brought the evil's humility

And fought with godly agility.

Only thou hast the ability

To help the blind land see.

The drumming of the battle tabor

Brought from its sheath the hero's saber.

Peace was won through bloody labor,

And all our praise shall go to he.



To save a land of evil reign,

And fight the war through fiery pain

Has proven now that he shall gain

A tale that shalt not die in vain.



Even when his vigor failed

Did he not stop till he prevailed

To clear the malice that had ailed.

He is our hero, forever hailed.

-Rosaceae



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