okay.....this is my first poetry/romance thing. it's in squall's pov and his thoughts about rinoa when she was in a coma. short and sweet. :) please R & R
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance/Poetry - Words: 248 - Reviews: 13 - Published: Jun 16, 2001 - id: 319796
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Fell in Love
Fell in Love
Your eyes closed
Your mind calm
That takes you into
A deep sleep
I sat there beside you
Watching….
Watching you
Waiting for you to wake up
Although you seem so lifeless
I can see ever
So clearly
That you were so full of life
Inside
What happened?
What am I to do?
What am I feeling?
You're lying there
Asleep…
Hypnotizing me with your radiance
Of beauty
But
Before all this happened
Your carefree attitude
Made me think about
Others
You made me
A
Different person
Even though I didn't care
What you say
You still won't give up…
Your strong energy stood
Out clearly
Your crimson smile
That makes me so weak
But I don't know why…
Now
As you lay asleep
I understand why…
I understand why I felt
This way…
I am missing something
And it's in you…
Your beauty
Your smile
Your spirit
That is what I'm missing
And that's what I need back
Please wake up
For that
I
Have
Fallen
In love
With you
Okay…how did you
like it?This is like my first poem for
this and I want to see how you guys think about it.Please R & R. b nice.thanks
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