I know I said that I would have this posted up soon, but I just couldn't decide on which parts of this story that needed to be improved, so I revised it. I hope you like this one in my opinion its better than the first one I posted. So enjoy.
"So what's your name?" a girl purred taking a seat right next to Amara. Amara looked at the girl and smiled. The girl's face was flushed once she realized she had Amara's full attention. Her eyes were now spacey and it was obvious that her mind was no longer on earth right now, but waiting for Amara to say something to her so she could ponder on her words. Amara recognized this girl from her PE class, she was apart of the group that sat on the bleachers and talked for hours until the coach said something. Amara was just about to reply to the girl's question when suddenly a voice shouted. "KIMBERLY! What are you doing?" a girl shouted walking towards the table. The blond with a ponytail looked up to face her scolder. "Just introducing myself to the new guy here, why do you have a problem with that Terry?" she hissed. "As a matter of fact I do. Who gave you permission to talk to the new hunk at school before me?" Terry growled. Amara looked up at the two and was just about to explain to them that she wasn't a guy, but before she could another voice yelled out at them.
"Would you two knock it off," a girl with long red hair and emerald green eyes yelled at them both. The two girls stared at the red head for a minute before replying, and then suddenly they went off. "BACK OFF ELENA!" Kimberly snarled. "Yeah go flirt with your own guy or what ever it is you flirt with," Terry snarled standing in front of Amara. Elena glanced at Amara and then stared at the two in front of her. "You two are a couple of ditzes when it comes to guys especially ones that belong to me, she said crossing her arms then narrowing her eyes at them both. "What!" Terry shrieked. Kimberly walked up to Elena and stared her in the eyes. "Your lying, he can't be yours he just got here today." A smart little smirk spread across Elena's face. "That shows how much you know, we've had a long distance relationship since... "Since nothing Elena your lying so go ahead and confess." "Confess to what, that I'm in love. How can you be so cruel as to get me to deny my feelings."
Amara glanced over at Elena then shook her head sadly. She knew Elena was just playing around with the girls. She was trying to get them to leave her alone, but she was going a bit to the extreme to do so. 'I guess I'll play along with them...since its getting interesting', she thought to herself. "Well since you do go with him, then how come you were with Brian the other day?" Terry demanded. Elena sighed. "I was flirting, I don't like him." "Yeah right," Kimberly grumbled drawing her attention back to Amara. "I wouldn't even waist my time on red here, she'll love you and leave you." Amara smiled slyishly. "What makes you think I'm not going to do the same to her?" Terry and Kimberly stared at Amara, then busted out with laughter. "Very funny", Elena mumbled, while glancing off at the librarian's assistant who was at his desk. "Hey I like this guy," Terry laughed. "Yeah he's playing the same game your playing red", Kimberly said trying to stop laughing.
Elena just rolled her eyes then glanced at the duo. "Are you two done laughing yet?" "No, but will leave you alone right now since your probably about to kill your boy friend here," Kimberly coughed with laughter still in her voice. "Come on Terry". Terry started to follow Kimberly, but before she left she turned around and winked at Amara. Amara turned red surprised at what had just happened. Elena could see this out of the corner of her eye and decided to say something about it. "You better keep your eyes to yourself unless you want them knocked out of your head," she threatened. Terry rolled her eyes then walked off. "You know...I think she likes you," Elena said teasingly taking a seat next to Amara. Amara shrugged. "What are you talking about?" "I think you know, Terry's got a thing for you." "Yeah right red, so how did you spot me out?" Amara said changing the subject. "Oh my cousin Brandon told me about your hair cut yesterday and I decided that I just had to see it before those crazy girls started fussing over you." "I see, but you didn't think I was guy like everyone less did you?" Amara inquired looking at her friend.
Elena paused for a minute before replying then looked up at her. "Well?" Amara asked once more. "I did, but Michelle told me that you weren't before I could go on that guy crazy mode." "Really," Amara said half-heartedly. "Yes really, you actually think I'd do what those two girls did a few minutes ago?" "Well...yeah you probably would if you had the chance. So since when am I your boy friend?" Amara began. "Look I was just playing...." "Yeah I know, but what told you to make up something like that? "Amara inquired shuffling her papers that were on the table and placing them in her book. "I was just helping you, Michelle told me to since she's practicing for her recital and she didn't have time to hunt you down in order to keep those maniacs away from you," Elena explained. "So she sent you instead to be my body guard........... I see," Amara said getting up from the table with her book in her hand. "You've got track tryouts right?" "Yeah why did you sign up?" "As a matter of fact I did wind girl." Amara glanced at Elena. She knew her friend was challenging her again for the sixth time this year. 'She never gives up'; she thought studying her friend's face.
"Oh so your challenging me again, are you?" Amara began. "Yeah I guess I am and this time you don't have to worry about me falling down close to the finish line either," Elena replied "Now that's a laugh every time your about to beat me you fall down or something always happens, it never fails." Elena raised an eyebrow at the blond. "And I was just about to help you get out of here too." "What do you mean, I don't need your help to get out of here." "Oh yes you do." " And why is that?" Elena pointed to the exit of the library and there talking to Amara's home room teacher was Mrs. Tenou herself. "Why is she here?" Amara thought out loud. "Your mom came here to get your make up work," Elena answered as they were now behind a bookshelf. " And you wait till now to tell me?" Amara scolded. "Hey I already thought you knew." " Yeah right." 'That's a likely excuse', Amara thought. Now what am I going to do to get out of here. I can't fool her exactly like I did dad. I'll have to come up with something else'.
"Hey I've got a plan," Elena spoke up. "Oh no you don't, I know how your plans are they always back fire," Amara snapped. "This one wont now, follow my lead." "If we get caught Elena, I'll... "We wont get caught Amara, now come on and let me help you. " "Helping me, your getting me caught." " Amara just relax look ahead and old Mrs. T wont even recognize you." " Yeah right," Amara mumbled as they headed towards the exit. Amara knew this probably wouldn't work this time, she knew her mother could spot her out much better than her father could. She did want Mrs. Tenou to spot her out though, but not at school so she could freak out totally. Amara made herself a personal note to get revenge on Elena for this later. She planed on getting her back for this some how even if it meant waiting a few months after her punishment was over, which she knew wasn't long behind her. 'She always has to be so sure of things,' Amara thought as they walked up to her mother.
"Well look who's here, Elena how nice to see you," Carla smiled looking at the red head. "Its nice to see you too Mrs. Tenou and may I say that's a beautiful dress you have on," Elena started. 'Suck up', Amara thought. "Why thank you dear and who is this handsome young man?" Carla asked now looking at Amara. Amara glanced at her mother with out saying a word. She was surprised that her mother didn't recognize her, but then again her mother was in a good mood so she figured it hadn't hit her yet. "Why this is my good friend Sam.... He's. Uh studying with me right now," Elena replied. "Are you sure you were studying Elena? I've never known you to study with. ...Boys before unless there was something more involved." "Good point", Amara mumbled. "What was that?" Elena asked glancing at Amara. "Never mind," Amara sighed. " So where are you two going?" " To the cafeteria," Elena answered. "Really and would this happen to be a date", Mrs. Tenou winked at the two. 'Yeah is it?' Amara thought glancing at Elena. Elena glanced at Amara from out of the corner of her eye, as if she had heard her thoughts then drew her attention back to Mrs. Tenou. "No maim I'm just showing him around." "Oh I see, but wont Brian be disappointed that you're not having lunch with him? "Mrs. Tenou inquired. Amara made a fake smile at her mother. "Oh I'm sure he won't mind if she's with me today," she said sarcastically putting an arm around Elena.
Elena stared up at the ceiling as if trying to avoid from saying any remarks towards that explanation, while Mrs. Tenou looked at Amara carefully. "You look so familiar to me...I feel like I've seen you somewhere," she started. "Well Sam here travels a lot because his father Mr. O'Neil's busy job," Elena answered. "That sounds interesting is he from over sea's?" "Yes maim he works for... "The US computer companies of Microsoft," Elena finished Amara's sentence. "Oh I've heard of them, I tried to get my husband involved in that several years ago. Is he a class C worker?" "Yeah he's a category A, class C worker," Amara replied. "Interesting and what's his position?" "Major electronics." "I see, so Elena have you signed up for track yet." "Yeah, but I'm not counting on making the team though, I planed on trying out for JV soccer and softball," Elena sighed staring up at the clock on the library's wall. "But Amara told me she was trying out", she announced. "Oh I don't think Amara really meant to say that, she must have had something else on her mind," Mrs.Tenou said.
'No I didn't, you just don't want to accept that,' Amara thought. "I'm not sure of that, Amara seemed really set on doing this," Elena corrected her. Mrs. Tenou sighed trying not to get mad. "Yes well I guess she did, I'll see you later Elena and please tell Michelle I said hi," Mrs. Tenou started off towards the hallway, but before she stepped out she glanced at Amara. "Oh and nice meeting you Sam," she said leaving. Amara didn't even bother saying anything to her mother, because once again she had made her mad. Now Amara was bringing her attention back to her list that she had planed out for the day. Since number one was over with, her hair was now cut and now it was time for two make the track team. 'I'll prove you wrong', Amara thought to herself. 'I'll make the team and prove you wrong, you'll see I'll complete the next thing on my list and you'll finally see things my way...........
So what did you think? Liked it? Or you just don't know what to say? I know you can't wait for the next chapter, so I'll try to hurry up and finish that up soon so it can be posted. So expect that to be posted some time next week. Or at a later date I know it will be before this month is out. Please write a review and don't forget my email address is sailorujv17@hotmail.com. Suggestions are always welcomed and ideas for another story by request.
"So what's your name?" a girl purred taking a seat right next to Amara. Amara looked at the girl and smiled. The girl's face was flushed once she realized she had Amara's full attention. Her eyes were now spacey and it was obvious that her mind was no longer on earth right now, but waiting for Amara to say something to her so she could ponder on her words. Amara recognized this girl from her PE class, she was apart of the group that sat on the bleachers and talked for hours until the coach said something. Amara was just about to reply to the girl's question when suddenly a voice shouted. "KIMBERLY! What are you doing?" a girl shouted walking towards the table. The blond with a ponytail looked up to face her scolder. "Just introducing myself to the new guy here, why do you have a problem with that Terry?" she hissed. "As a matter of fact I do. Who gave you permission to talk to the new hunk at school before me?" Terry growled. Amara looked up at the two and was just about to explain to them that she wasn't a guy, but before she could another voice yelled out at them.
"Would you two knock it off," a girl with long red hair and emerald green eyes yelled at them both. The two girls stared at the red head for a minute before replying, and then suddenly they went off. "BACK OFF ELENA!" Kimberly snarled. "Yeah go flirt with your own guy or what ever it is you flirt with," Terry snarled standing in front of Amara. Elena glanced at Amara and then stared at the two in front of her. "You two are a couple of ditzes when it comes to guys especially ones that belong to me, she said crossing her arms then narrowing her eyes at them both. "What!" Terry shrieked. Kimberly walked up to Elena and stared her in the eyes. "Your lying, he can't be yours he just got here today." A smart little smirk spread across Elena's face. "That shows how much you know, we've had a long distance relationship since... "Since nothing Elena your lying so go ahead and confess." "Confess to what, that I'm in love. How can you be so cruel as to get me to deny my feelings."
Amara glanced over at Elena then shook her head sadly. She knew Elena was just playing around with the girls. She was trying to get them to leave her alone, but she was going a bit to the extreme to do so. 'I guess I'll play along with them...since its getting interesting', she thought to herself. "Well since you do go with him, then how come you were with Brian the other day?" Terry demanded. Elena sighed. "I was flirting, I don't like him." "Yeah right," Kimberly grumbled drawing her attention back to Amara. "I wouldn't even waist my time on red here, she'll love you and leave you." Amara smiled slyishly. "What makes you think I'm not going to do the same to her?" Terry and Kimberly stared at Amara, then busted out with laughter. "Very funny", Elena mumbled, while glancing off at the librarian's assistant who was at his desk. "Hey I like this guy," Terry laughed. "Yeah he's playing the same game your playing red", Kimberly said trying to stop laughing.
Elena just rolled her eyes then glanced at the duo. "Are you two done laughing yet?" "No, but will leave you alone right now since your probably about to kill your boy friend here," Kimberly coughed with laughter still in her voice. "Come on Terry". Terry started to follow Kimberly, but before she left she turned around and winked at Amara. Amara turned red surprised at what had just happened. Elena could see this out of the corner of her eye and decided to say something about it. "You better keep your eyes to yourself unless you want them knocked out of your head," she threatened. Terry rolled her eyes then walked off. "You know...I think she likes you," Elena said teasingly taking a seat next to Amara. Amara shrugged. "What are you talking about?" "I think you know, Terry's got a thing for you." "Yeah right red, so how did you spot me out?" Amara said changing the subject. "Oh my cousin Brandon told me about your hair cut yesterday and I decided that I just had to see it before those crazy girls started fussing over you." "I see, but you didn't think I was guy like everyone less did you?" Amara inquired looking at her friend.
Elena paused for a minute before replying then looked up at her. "Well?" Amara asked once more. "I did, but Michelle told me that you weren't before I could go on that guy crazy mode." "Really," Amara said half-heartedly. "Yes really, you actually think I'd do what those two girls did a few minutes ago?" "Well...yeah you probably would if you had the chance. So since when am I your boy friend?" Amara began. "Look I was just playing...." "Yeah I know, but what told you to make up something like that? "Amara inquired shuffling her papers that were on the table and placing them in her book. "I was just helping you, Michelle told me to since she's practicing for her recital and she didn't have time to hunt you down in order to keep those maniacs away from you," Elena explained. "So she sent you instead to be my body guard........... I see," Amara said getting up from the table with her book in her hand. "You've got track tryouts right?" "Yeah why did you sign up?" "As a matter of fact I did wind girl." Amara glanced at Elena. She knew her friend was challenging her again for the sixth time this year. 'She never gives up'; she thought studying her friend's face.
"Oh so your challenging me again, are you?" Amara began. "Yeah I guess I am and this time you don't have to worry about me falling down close to the finish line either," Elena replied "Now that's a laugh every time your about to beat me you fall down or something always happens, it never fails." Elena raised an eyebrow at the blond. "And I was just about to help you get out of here too." "What do you mean, I don't need your help to get out of here." "Oh yes you do." " And why is that?" Elena pointed to the exit of the library and there talking to Amara's home room teacher was Mrs. Tenou herself. "Why is she here?" Amara thought out loud. "Your mom came here to get your make up work," Elena answered as they were now behind a bookshelf. " And you wait till now to tell me?" Amara scolded. "Hey I already thought you knew." " Yeah right." 'That's a likely excuse', Amara thought. Now what am I going to do to get out of here. I can't fool her exactly like I did dad. I'll have to come up with something else'.
"Hey I've got a plan," Elena spoke up. "Oh no you don't, I know how your plans are they always back fire," Amara snapped. "This one wont now, follow my lead." "If we get caught Elena, I'll... "We wont get caught Amara, now come on and let me help you. " "Helping me, your getting me caught." " Amara just relax look ahead and old Mrs. T wont even recognize you." " Yeah right," Amara mumbled as they headed towards the exit. Amara knew this probably wouldn't work this time, she knew her mother could spot her out much better than her father could. She did want Mrs. Tenou to spot her out though, but not at school so she could freak out totally. Amara made herself a personal note to get revenge on Elena for this later. She planed on getting her back for this some how even if it meant waiting a few months after her punishment was over, which she knew wasn't long behind her. 'She always has to be so sure of things,' Amara thought as they walked up to her mother.
"Well look who's here, Elena how nice to see you," Carla smiled looking at the red head. "Its nice to see you too Mrs. Tenou and may I say that's a beautiful dress you have on," Elena started. 'Suck up', Amara thought. "Why thank you dear and who is this handsome young man?" Carla asked now looking at Amara. Amara glanced at her mother with out saying a word. She was surprised that her mother didn't recognize her, but then again her mother was in a good mood so she figured it hadn't hit her yet. "Why this is my good friend Sam.... He's. Uh studying with me right now," Elena replied. "Are you sure you were studying Elena? I've never known you to study with. ...Boys before unless there was something more involved." "Good point", Amara mumbled. "What was that?" Elena asked glancing at Amara. "Never mind," Amara sighed. " So where are you two going?" " To the cafeteria," Elena answered. "Really and would this happen to be a date", Mrs. Tenou winked at the two. 'Yeah is it?' Amara thought glancing at Elena. Elena glanced at Amara from out of the corner of her eye, as if she had heard her thoughts then drew her attention back to Mrs. Tenou. "No maim I'm just showing him around." "Oh I see, but wont Brian be disappointed that you're not having lunch with him? "Mrs. Tenou inquired. Amara made a fake smile at her mother. "Oh I'm sure he won't mind if she's with me today," she said sarcastically putting an arm around Elena.
Elena stared up at the ceiling as if trying to avoid from saying any remarks towards that explanation, while Mrs. Tenou looked at Amara carefully. "You look so familiar to me...I feel like I've seen you somewhere," she started. "Well Sam here travels a lot because his father Mr. O'Neil's busy job," Elena answered. "That sounds interesting is he from over sea's?" "Yes maim he works for... "The US computer companies of Microsoft," Elena finished Amara's sentence. "Oh I've heard of them, I tried to get my husband involved in that several years ago. Is he a class C worker?" "Yeah he's a category A, class C worker," Amara replied. "Interesting and what's his position?" "Major electronics." "I see, so Elena have you signed up for track yet." "Yeah, but I'm not counting on making the team though, I planed on trying out for JV soccer and softball," Elena sighed staring up at the clock on the library's wall. "But Amara told me she was trying out", she announced. "Oh I don't think Amara really meant to say that, she must have had something else on her mind," Mrs.Tenou said.
'No I didn't, you just don't want to accept that,' Amara thought. "I'm not sure of that, Amara seemed really set on doing this," Elena corrected her. Mrs. Tenou sighed trying not to get mad. "Yes well I guess she did, I'll see you later Elena and please tell Michelle I said hi," Mrs. Tenou started off towards the hallway, but before she stepped out she glanced at Amara. "Oh and nice meeting you Sam," she said leaving. Amara didn't even bother saying anything to her mother, because once again she had made her mad. Now Amara was bringing her attention back to her list that she had planed out for the day. Since number one was over with, her hair was now cut and now it was time for two make the track team. 'I'll prove you wrong', Amara thought to herself. 'I'll make the team and prove you wrong, you'll see I'll complete the next thing on my list and you'll finally see things my way...........
So what did you think? Liked it? Or you just don't know what to say? I know you can't wait for the next chapter, so I'll try to hurry up and finish that up soon so it can be posted. So expect that to be posted some time next week. Or at a later date I know it will be before this month is out. Please write a review and don't forget my email address is sailorujv17@hotmail.com. Suggestions are always welcomed and ideas for another story by request.