Okay I thought ha Coyote Ugly what girl would not want a job there. Hey I am 14 and I need a good job. What the hell write a story about it!! Yeah so that is what I did. Check it out. Review and yuou will Review!! Peace!! :P





The night was young. And the bar was just about to open, Racheal ( beginnignher bitchy self) was just gettin warmer up. She saw some kind of druckie asking from money at the side of the bar.

" Mama please will someon just give me some money." He was covered with dirt fromhis head to his feet. He wore bagging ripped up jenas and a hat that looked about 25years.
" God get aawy from me you sick ugly jerk." She kicked himas she tried to get rid of his grip around her ankel.
She was already in one of her moods. After Zoe had left it was just not the same. Okay so they had thie new girl come in and she was falling behide. Her name was Violet and some how Lil had came up with the
idea to call her Jersey. Go figue

" Why me and I mean what in the world have I done you be out in a pleace like this." She was stopped infront after raming into a 6'1 guy. Brown hair and a drop dead smile. Not at all her type
" OMG I am soooo sorry miss." He said as her tryed to help her up.
" save it you jerk, and get lost." She got up by herself and walked away. Not long after leaving the guy in her dust he was right behide her.
" Listen I know what I did was dumb and I was talking on my cell when I should be looking out for girls that like to walk down he street in heels and fall flat on there butts when I come around."
He smiled and Rachela was about to blow her lid.
" Listen the name is Rob and I would love to make it you to you, I say why don't you let me buy you dinner."
She was flatter, but not into it.
" Listen asshole, no guy can just make me fall right on my butt and then think og my going out with him. Ha I rather see you get a life."
With that she turned on her heels and walked straight down the street



~~*~~POV Rob~~*~~

" I thought she was going to beat the shit out of me. O well I guess I will have to hey wait a min." He looked at the ground to see some sort of card. It was white with COYOTE UGLY writen on it.
" Looks like I have a date to night with a coyote." He holled under his breath and went home to wonder what this Coyote Ugly thing would be about.


~~*~~POV RACHEAL ~~*~~

" I wonder if Cammie ever got in to this much trouble when she was flirty with that guy last night." she looked at her watch to see what time it was
" Shit Lil is goin kill me if I am late again. It 8 and the bar opens soon.


She ran down the street as fast as her heels could take her.

~~*~~ At the bar~~*~~

" Well Well look what the cat dragged in." She was greeted by Cammie dancing around ht ebar that was at the end of the bar.
" Stuff it Cammie I am only 10mins late.""
" Only 10 ha last time it was 5, well at least you got here. Dress up. and come on." Lil was in the back sitting up with Violet's help.

~~*~~ THat Night ~~*~~


AS Racheal and Cammie were on the bar dacning and having guys just want to touch them. A unknow man walked in

" Yo man is Rachela here??"" He asked the bouncer at the door
" She's on the bar." HE said " Next" He was letting people in and did not even look at the guy.
" THanks man."" He walked into see about 100 guys and abou 50 girls yelling and sceaming there heads off.



Racheal was to busy with her whole dancing and swing her hips (inside joke hey Shep) to see the guy walk in.

" Rach!! BAR!! NOW!!" Cammie yelled as both jumped behide the bar.

" What can I get you??" SHe asked as she flipped glasses up on the conuter.
" Beer and your name."
She looked up to see the guys that see had ran into earlier that day.
" You what the hell do you want??""






Ya Ya laught it up. It was a dream that I had. So I was sick on day and boird so I thougt what thehell write a story and then here how bad it was. Okay BRING IT ONE I CAN TAKE THE REVIEWS!!
And should I go one with this story. Plus I don't have any ideas. PLEASE I NEED IDEAS!! :) Thanks peace out :P