First of all, I want to thank all of you who are reading my fanfic, especially Azurite for
encouraging me to continue no matter what the others said.
I've started to work on the second chapter of LTE when I encountered a dilemma, and I need
your help to decide this.
1) I could start the second chapter with *Six Weeks Ago* and write the story from the beginning
from the third person's POV, the way I planned in the first place or
2) I could start with *Ten Months Later* and have Ranma and Akane explaining what happened to
the people around them (separately).
Let's pro and con this:
***Six Weeks Ago--pro: it'd be long; a lot of characterizations so you'll be able to see the
connection between this story and Takahashi's Ranma; a lot of the descriptions of the palace
and the ball and...
Con: it'd be long; it's harder for me to write; it'd take longer and a lot of it would be
irrelevant to main theme of the story.
***Ten Months Later--pro: it'd be shorter and much easier for me to write; there'd be more
feelings, I mean, a LOT more feelings since Ranma and Akane are telling what happened; the
characterizations would be from Ranma and Akane POV, which would be very close to Takahashi's;
you'll know what's going on sooner and you won't have to read the irrelevant stuff.
Con: it'd be shorter than I had original planned and I think that's it.
Actually, I have already decided on going with the second choice, it'd be a lot easier for
me and I personally think the story would be better. But email me at
cosmos_sailor_mars@hotmail.com and write a review and let me know what you think.
THANKS, love, CSMars
encouraging me to continue no matter what the others said.
I've started to work on the second chapter of LTE when I encountered a dilemma, and I need
your help to decide this.
1) I could start the second chapter with *Six Weeks Ago* and write the story from the beginning
from the third person's POV, the way I planned in the first place or
2) I could start with *Ten Months Later* and have Ranma and Akane explaining what happened to
the people around them (separately).
Let's pro and con this:
***Six Weeks Ago--pro: it'd be long; a lot of characterizations so you'll be able to see the
connection between this story and Takahashi's Ranma; a lot of the descriptions of the palace
and the ball and...
Con: it'd be long; it's harder for me to write; it'd take longer and a lot of it would be
irrelevant to main theme of the story.
***Ten Months Later--pro: it'd be shorter and much easier for me to write; there'd be more
feelings, I mean, a LOT more feelings since Ranma and Akane are telling what happened; the
characterizations would be from Ranma and Akane POV, which would be very close to Takahashi's;
you'll know what's going on sooner and you won't have to read the irrelevant stuff.
Con: it'd be shorter than I had original planned and I think that's it.
Actually, I have already decided on going with the second choice, it'd be a lot easier for
me and I personally think the story would be better. But email me at
cosmos_sailor_mars@hotmail.com and write a review and let me know what you think.
THANKS, love, CSMars
