The Beginning…
The Beginning
Hello people! Nice to meet
you again. I'm not really good at writing stories poor
mois. Anyway, on with the disclaimer: I do not own Cardcaptors or
Cardcaptor Sakura. The wonderful company CLAMP does. And
I don't own Star wars, Pokemon, Digimon or Sailormoon, so
don't sue me please people.
What you must know before
even start reading:
" " –
Conversation
( ) – insignificant
comments
- significant
comments
[ ] – character thoughts
This is not a normal fan
fiction at all. You know how sometimes you just decide that you
are going to write a fan fiction, then you start to think about
what to write? Well this one is different. From sometime in my
life, I'm beginning to develop this wild imaginative story
of a person who trains a girl named Salee in martial arts,
gymnastics and all other things. After I came to Canada and
watched CCS, I added some new characters into my story.
In my fiction, Li Syaoran and
Eriol are identical twins, and Eriol's last name is
"Li". Sakura does not exist (okay, okay, she does, but
not as a main character. Sorry to the Sakura fans...). There's a
new kind of card called the Sun Card, Hong Kong belongs to China
but can not participate in any government society, and lastly,
angels or gods do exist. In Chinese, angels or gods is
"Éñ"
You can find any unidentified
words in the Glossary.
Oh, and since Fanfiction.net
doesn't allow violation, I had to down tons of details cuz
part of it dealt with child abuse
Hats off to: Lily
Sun for helping
me with the fic and all the naming and plotting and stuff
And to all of the viewers who
took their time to read and review my fiction.
----------------------------------
Chapter 1
Is was another silent night in
Hong Kong, the moon is glowing and the navy blue sky is so pure
that it seems like you can just see through the whole
universe
A house stood silently near the
suburb. Nobody knows where it came from, who's living in
that house or when did it appear. It seems like it
justexists. Inside the house, a 12-year-old boy is sitting
on his bed and staring at his sleeping twin brother. His soft
brown eyes are filled with caring and content. His memory slowly
drift back to where it all started
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Four years ago ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"I, I can I can do
it! I know I can, just a few more to go," he chanted under
his breath. His sword slashed through the air and cut the bullets
in half. [Finally, the last shot had been deflected]
Looking at the newly captured card—The Hollow—slowly
turns into a Sun Card from a Clow Card. Unaware of his exhaustion
and the burning muscles, happiness and joy swept over him [the
last Card and it's mine! Now I'm ready for the training
again] Although no smile showed on his face, the happiness
and the joy in his eyes is enough to tell his partner and friend
Salee how happy he was, also the exhaustion he's in. She
placed her hand on his shoulder and whispered lightly,
"Congratulations, Syaoran." Startled, he looked up and
immediately turned slightly pink, "uh, thanks," was his
only reply. Looking at the couple from a distance, their
trainer—Vivian—smiled.
"Come on, let's go
home, you need a good rest after all the fighting,"
practically glowing from the excitement and pushing him gently
without waiting for his reply Salee commanded. (ok, I know I made
Salee sounded bossy ^^')
Being the older apprentice, ever
since the day Vivian found Li, Salee took care of him and taught
him all he had to know to survive in the magical world. She sees
him as her younger brother since she never had any. She gave all
her love to him. She tried her best to help him catch up in his
martial art training with Vivian who is the current the Sun Queen
and their trainer. In order to become the Sun King, he must train
terrible hard and the rules are strict: no crying, no tantrums
are allowed in his whole life under regular circumstances, and no
mistakes at are allowed during his training The rules took
away almost all of his freedom for him being a eight years old.
But he never complained, never said a word about how hard the
work it was or how many times did Vivian made him repeat a move
just because he was 0.001 second slower than she was.
"That was very good, Li,
but there are a few mistakes you have made that have slowed you
down, I'd like to take them up and practice them with you
after dinner." Nodding, Li (since everyone but Salee call
him Li, I'll just write his name that way ^^;) quickly
finished his dinner and after doing several quick stretches, he
followed Vivian out the door.
Watch the duo walked out the
door, Salee shook her head [what does coach think Syaoran is?
Some kind of fighting machine that you can program and run over
and over again? Can she see that he's exhausted?] "I
just don't understand," she mumbled. [oh well, I'd
better get ready for my training] with that thought, she finished
her dinner and went to the weapon storage room and pick out her
favorite—a bow and a bag of arrows. Salee loved archery,
ever since the first day she started the training with Vivian,
she show her favor to the bow and arrows. [Right now Syaoran is
almost as good as I am and he only had been here for two years.
He definitely is the right person for the Sun King].
Quietly, Salee entered the
training yard. It is obvious to her that Li and Vivian were just
finishing up, because Li is doing what he'll do every
time—summarizing what he had learnt, what mistakes had he
made, and how is he suppose to correct them.
As Li walked back to his room,
every muscle of his was tired out. He dragged himself to the
shower, dragged himself out and put on his pajamas, carefully did
a few stretched to relax himself and then plopped on to his bed,
without much trouble, he fell asleep.
Who would know what terrible
disaster will struck them soon
Then one night, the sky was
black and filled with smoke; thunder struck down uncontrollably
at their house. Vivian sensed something was very wrong, so she
collected Li and Salee, who have been battling for fun in the gym
and took them outside to fight whoever it was. The battle was
short, immediately after Li stick (is that a good word to
describe it?) his sword in to the chest of the evil spirit, the
spirit shot out a lighting bolt which in the legend is
undefeatable, in other words, one hit KO. The bolt headed
straight for Li, but he was too stunned to move out of the way,
seeing this and doesn't want her friend die, Salee jumped
right in front of Li just in the time when the lighting bolt
struck
As the evil spirit slowly
disappeared into the night sky with the laughter and the phrase
"you made her die! You killed her! You are a
murder", the sky cleared, the storm stopped and
Salee is lying on the grass motionlessly
"Salee!" scared and
also upset, Li rushed beside her, but it was too late
-----------------
Author's note: So how do
you like it? Too bad Salee died, but she's not actually
dead.
Zipper: uh, what exactly are
you talking about?
~*Smile*~ read on and find
out, duh!
I don't really think
that this is better the prologue, cuz, I don't know, I just
don't like it as much as the prologue Please R&R
& this is my first fanfic, so please give me some suggestions
or comments (I guess flames are OK, too, as long as it is a
suggestion...) I prefer short chapters so you can finish reading
it while you are on the internet and review it IT took me
about 10 minutes to read the whole thing, but then again, I read
fast so it'll probable take 10-15 minutes to read and 5 more
minutes to imagine the scenes
Again, don't sue
me So far, nothing but CCS is used in this fic so far
Date written:
June 20, 2001
