Hey guys, yea I decided to do a chapter two, the story just wasn't finished I couldn't leave it like that. I wrote The End in case I didn't decide to finish it.
At the scene of the crash still.
Val stands numbly in the spot where Tyler was hit, his blood lay all around, his presence seems to be there. "God what did I do?" She asks looking towards the heavens. "Please I'll do anything to take it back. Take me instead." She waits a second almost wishing to find herself dead in Tyler's place. It of course does not work.
"Come on Val we have to go" Jamie says gently pulling her towards the ambulance
"No Jamie let me stay, I'll walk later, I don't deserve to be treated fair"
"Don't blame yourself Val. It wasn't your fault"
"If she is coming tell her to get in cause I'm leaving right now" Hank says in a cold voice to Jamie
"Val come on lets go" Jamie pleads
"Leave me Jamie. I don't want to leave"
"Fine then I'll stay with you" Jamie says
"No Jamie please I want to be alone" The tone of Val's voice scares Jamie still he says
"Ok Val go ahead I wont go with you"
"Thank you Jamie" Val leaves
"JAMIE get in now I'm leaving" Hank says both upset and angry
"Nah I'm walking tonight I need time to think" Jamie tells him
"Fine! I'll talk to you later" Hank tears away from the scene of the accident
Jamie turns and jogs down the block in the direction Val headed. He finds her sitting on an old now unused overpass. Val looks up as Jamie gets closer.
"I told you to leave me be" Her voice is cold.
"I couldn't do that you were too upset."
"I'm fine Jamie you can go"
"Tell me what happened Val"
She looks at him surprised "Why would you even want to talk to me after everything that has happened?"
"Cause I know how it feels when you feel like you let everyone down and everything is your fault" Jamie shrugs
"But everything IS my fault and I HAVE let everyone down"
Once again Jamie shrugs "It doesn't matter you still should talk about it"
"Ok.." Val takes a deep breath and starts to talk "About 2 or 3 weeks ago….."
The scene fades into a flashback of about 3 weeks ago Val, Caitie and Tyler are standing by the front entrance of the school.
The three of them are talking and joking when the roar or an engine to a 1989 Mustang pulls into the parking lot the car is fire engine red and is making a huge scene.
The driver of the car comes walking into the school a minute later. The guy is totally built it shows he works out, with a great tan, light brown hair and deep brown eyes, his smile can make your heart melt, and his clothes obviously new. He smiles at Val as he walks by and says "Hey"
"Hi" Val says weakly. The guy moves on into the building.
~~~~"I remember that day. Every girl in school was talking about that guy" Jamie says back in the present.~~~~
In study hall later on. Val is sitting at her desk daydreaming about the mystery guy, when the door to the classroom opens and the guy walks in.
He speaks to the teacher a minute, then the teacher motions for him to take a seat next to Val where there is an empty desk.
He sits down and leans over "Hey long time no see, and I know it is cause I never forget a face like yours." Val giggles "Thank you"
Tyler is sitting behind them with Hank and he makes a face about it "What is up with that Hank? I mean come on I'd never forget your face? That's pathetic!"
Hank shakes his head and laughes, your just worried Val will break up with you for the new guy"
"I am not" Tyler says defensively
"OK Tyler whatever you say" Hanks laughs
"So what's your name?" the guys asks Val
"Val- Val Linear"
"Nice to meet you Val Linear, I'm John Vedrai. I just moved here from Florida"
*That explains the amazing tan* Val thinks to herself
"Wow Florida huh? I was there once it's really pretty there"
"Nothing could be as pretty as you Val. Hey would you like to hang out after school today? You know show me around the neighborhood?"
"Sure thing I would love too. Show you around town" Val answers
~~~~"I remember that day you came into work late for like the first time. How could you fall for a line like that?" Jamie asks
"Come on Jamie this amazingly hot guy comes in and asks ME out of all the girls to show him around town. How could I say no?"
"I don't know Val. Saying no might of been a good idea Ok well continue the story."~~~~
That day after school. (actually it was during last class but they left early)
"Wow you know I never skipped class before" Val said
"Oh yea?" John says looking at her "So how does it feel?"
"Actually it feels great I feel so free!" Val exclaims
"You like that feeling? Have you ever gone down a rode so fast its like your flying?"
"No, but it sounds like fun" Val smiles
"Come on I know the perfect place"
They drive a little bit until they get to an old and abandoned rode that is desolete.
"You ready?" John asks Val
"Uh huh" She says a little nervously
"Hey don't be nervous, just buckle up tight"
Val tightens her seat belt. A second later they clear a 2 mile stretch of rode in about 10 seconds flat (I know I'm exaggerating but its fun).
They stop and John turns to her "So how did you like THAT?"
"Oh my gosh I loved it"
John smiled "I knew you would"
The next couple of days went like this Val and John cutting class, going off racing in the woods, they'd make out in his car, get food, and just hang out. Until that day a few days after John showed up.
Tyler is at his locker and he slams it shut. He is surprised to see Val on the other side.
"Hey Val" he says smiling
Her voice steady she says "We need to talk"
"OK" Tyler says then follows her into an empty classroom "What's up?"
"Listen this is kinda hard so don't say anything until I'm done ok?"
Tyler nods.
"We have to break up Tyler I never meant for it to happen this way but we can't"
"UH - Uh is it because of that guy John?"
"Yes it is because of that guy John and I love him, we are meant for each other."
"Val-"
"Hey baby" John says poking his head in the room "You ready to go?"
"Uh huh I'm coming. Later Tyler"
"Bye" Tyler mumbles. He looks at the clock the first bell hasn't even rung
Once outside John ask Val "So did he take it like a man?"
"OH puh-lease he looked like he was about to cry - I almost felt sorry for him. He is so pathetic. But you know" she smiles coyly "It was kinda a rush"
John smiles "You want a real rush?"
"Sure what do you have in mind"
"This" John pulls his hand out of his pocket and reveals a joint in his hand
~~~~ Jamie groans "Tell me you didn't Val"
Val looks down ashamed "I did and I didn't stop there, I did some LSD, and other crap I dont even know what, I drank I went to parties, I don't even know who I am anymore"
Val looks down, her face expressing more then what she is saying.
"What else happened Val?" Jamie asks gently ~~~~
One night at a party the night before chapter one took place.
Val and John are at a raving open house party, the crowd is getting wild and everyone is experimenting with all different drugs and drinks.
Val starts to get a little bit dizzy and wants to stop dancing and just sit down.
"Val what are you doing? The party is over here" John says
"I need to sit a minute" Val complains
"Val dont be a baby come on get up" John orders
"Don't yell at me" Val shouts
"Shut up!" John sreams in her face "Come back over here!"
Val gets a pissed off look on her face and gets up to leave she gets out the front door when John comes after her.
"VAL! I said stop!" He screams starting to sound crazy.
"NO!" Val sreams
John grabs her wrist and uses it to drag her back into the party.
End Of Flashback.
"Let me see your wrist Val" Jamie tells her gently
Val obliges and shows him
"Val I think your wrist may be broken….has he ever hurt you before?"
Val nods and moves the hair off the back of her neck, revealing deep dark black bruises , the same goes for her back.
"Val what's going on this isn't like you…"
"What isn't like me Jamie? I don't even know who I am anymore….i'm so lost and alone I dont have anyone left and the one person I truly loved is dead"
Jamie hugs her and says "You need to get help Val, and you should see a doctor."
"I know… I am so scared though"
"I am here for you Val"
"How come Jamie.? How come you didn't abandon me like everyone else?"
"Val no one abandoned you, you left them and they had to go on with their lives but they will still be there for you especially Caitie"
"I don't know Jamie"
"Come on Val" Jamie says pulling her up "Remember to take it one day at a time"
"One day at a time huh?" She says softly "Thanks for being such a good friend"
"Friends don't leave friend even in the worst of times." Jamie comforts her.
"So whats next ?" Val asks
"Well we get you to a doctor, talk to your parents to Caitie and…….."
"Tyler's funeral" Val supplies "What have I done?" she says barely above a whisper
TBC'd. So did you guys like this chapter. Everyone else will be more involved in the next chapter but I needed to let you guys in on how all of this happened. Feedback please R&R and be constructive. Or email me at italianangel1438@hotmail.com
At the scene of the crash still.
Val stands numbly in the spot where Tyler was hit, his blood lay all around, his presence seems to be there. "God what did I do?" She asks looking towards the heavens. "Please I'll do anything to take it back. Take me instead." She waits a second almost wishing to find herself dead in Tyler's place. It of course does not work.
"Come on Val we have to go" Jamie says gently pulling her towards the ambulance
"No Jamie let me stay, I'll walk later, I don't deserve to be treated fair"
"Don't blame yourself Val. It wasn't your fault"
"If she is coming tell her to get in cause I'm leaving right now" Hank says in a cold voice to Jamie
"Val come on lets go" Jamie pleads
"Leave me Jamie. I don't want to leave"
"Fine then I'll stay with you" Jamie says
"No Jamie please I want to be alone" The tone of Val's voice scares Jamie still he says
"Ok Val go ahead I wont go with you"
"Thank you Jamie" Val leaves
"JAMIE get in now I'm leaving" Hank says both upset and angry
"Nah I'm walking tonight I need time to think" Jamie tells him
"Fine! I'll talk to you later" Hank tears away from the scene of the accident
Jamie turns and jogs down the block in the direction Val headed. He finds her sitting on an old now unused overpass. Val looks up as Jamie gets closer.
"I told you to leave me be" Her voice is cold.
"I couldn't do that you were too upset."
"I'm fine Jamie you can go"
"Tell me what happened Val"
She looks at him surprised "Why would you even want to talk to me after everything that has happened?"
"Cause I know how it feels when you feel like you let everyone down and everything is your fault" Jamie shrugs
"But everything IS my fault and I HAVE let everyone down"
Once again Jamie shrugs "It doesn't matter you still should talk about it"
"Ok.." Val takes a deep breath and starts to talk "About 2 or 3 weeks ago….."
The scene fades into a flashback of about 3 weeks ago Val, Caitie and Tyler are standing by the front entrance of the school.
The three of them are talking and joking when the roar or an engine to a 1989 Mustang pulls into the parking lot the car is fire engine red and is making a huge scene.
The driver of the car comes walking into the school a minute later. The guy is totally built it shows he works out, with a great tan, light brown hair and deep brown eyes, his smile can make your heart melt, and his clothes obviously new. He smiles at Val as he walks by and says "Hey"
"Hi" Val says weakly. The guy moves on into the building.
~~~~"I remember that day. Every girl in school was talking about that guy" Jamie says back in the present.~~~~
In study hall later on. Val is sitting at her desk daydreaming about the mystery guy, when the door to the classroom opens and the guy walks in.
He speaks to the teacher a minute, then the teacher motions for him to take a seat next to Val where there is an empty desk.
He sits down and leans over "Hey long time no see, and I know it is cause I never forget a face like yours." Val giggles "Thank you"
Tyler is sitting behind them with Hank and he makes a face about it "What is up with that Hank? I mean come on I'd never forget your face? That's pathetic!"
Hank shakes his head and laughes, your just worried Val will break up with you for the new guy"
"I am not" Tyler says defensively
"OK Tyler whatever you say" Hanks laughs
"So what's your name?" the guys asks Val
"Val- Val Linear"
"Nice to meet you Val Linear, I'm John Vedrai. I just moved here from Florida"
*That explains the amazing tan* Val thinks to herself
"Wow Florida huh? I was there once it's really pretty there"
"Nothing could be as pretty as you Val. Hey would you like to hang out after school today? You know show me around the neighborhood?"
"Sure thing I would love too. Show you around town" Val answers
~~~~"I remember that day you came into work late for like the first time. How could you fall for a line like that?" Jamie asks
"Come on Jamie this amazingly hot guy comes in and asks ME out of all the girls to show him around town. How could I say no?"
"I don't know Val. Saying no might of been a good idea Ok well continue the story."~~~~
That day after school. (actually it was during last class but they left early)
"Wow you know I never skipped class before" Val said
"Oh yea?" John says looking at her "So how does it feel?"
"Actually it feels great I feel so free!" Val exclaims
"You like that feeling? Have you ever gone down a rode so fast its like your flying?"
"No, but it sounds like fun" Val smiles
"Come on I know the perfect place"
They drive a little bit until they get to an old and abandoned rode that is desolete.
"You ready?" John asks Val
"Uh huh" She says a little nervously
"Hey don't be nervous, just buckle up tight"
Val tightens her seat belt. A second later they clear a 2 mile stretch of rode in about 10 seconds flat (I know I'm exaggerating but its fun).
They stop and John turns to her "So how did you like THAT?"
"Oh my gosh I loved it"
John smiled "I knew you would"
The next couple of days went like this Val and John cutting class, going off racing in the woods, they'd make out in his car, get food, and just hang out. Until that day a few days after John showed up.
Tyler is at his locker and he slams it shut. He is surprised to see Val on the other side.
"Hey Val" he says smiling
Her voice steady she says "We need to talk"
"OK" Tyler says then follows her into an empty classroom "What's up?"
"Listen this is kinda hard so don't say anything until I'm done ok?"
Tyler nods.
"We have to break up Tyler I never meant for it to happen this way but we can't"
"UH - Uh is it because of that guy John?"
"Yes it is because of that guy John and I love him, we are meant for each other."
"Val-"
"Hey baby" John says poking his head in the room "You ready to go?"
"Uh huh I'm coming. Later Tyler"
"Bye" Tyler mumbles. He looks at the clock the first bell hasn't even rung
Once outside John ask Val "So did he take it like a man?"
"OH puh-lease he looked like he was about to cry - I almost felt sorry for him. He is so pathetic. But you know" she smiles coyly "It was kinda a rush"
John smiles "You want a real rush?"
"Sure what do you have in mind"
"This" John pulls his hand out of his pocket and reveals a joint in his hand
~~~~ Jamie groans "Tell me you didn't Val"
Val looks down ashamed "I did and I didn't stop there, I did some LSD, and other crap I dont even know what, I drank I went to parties, I don't even know who I am anymore"
Val looks down, her face expressing more then what she is saying.
"What else happened Val?" Jamie asks gently ~~~~
One night at a party the night before chapter one took place.
Val and John are at a raving open house party, the crowd is getting wild and everyone is experimenting with all different drugs and drinks.
Val starts to get a little bit dizzy and wants to stop dancing and just sit down.
"Val what are you doing? The party is over here" John says
"I need to sit a minute" Val complains
"Val dont be a baby come on get up" John orders
"Don't yell at me" Val shouts
"Shut up!" John sreams in her face "Come back over here!"
Val gets a pissed off look on her face and gets up to leave she gets out the front door when John comes after her.
"VAL! I said stop!" He screams starting to sound crazy.
"NO!" Val sreams
John grabs her wrist and uses it to drag her back into the party.
End Of Flashback.
"Let me see your wrist Val" Jamie tells her gently
Val obliges and shows him
"Val I think your wrist may be broken….has he ever hurt you before?"
Val nods and moves the hair off the back of her neck, revealing deep dark black bruises , the same goes for her back.
"Val what's going on this isn't like you…"
"What isn't like me Jamie? I don't even know who I am anymore….i'm so lost and alone I dont have anyone left and the one person I truly loved is dead"
Jamie hugs her and says "You need to get help Val, and you should see a doctor."
"I know… I am so scared though"
"I am here for you Val"
"How come Jamie.? How come you didn't abandon me like everyone else?"
"Val no one abandoned you, you left them and they had to go on with their lives but they will still be there for you especially Caitie"
"I don't know Jamie"
"Come on Val" Jamie says pulling her up "Remember to take it one day at a time"
"One day at a time huh?" She says softly "Thanks for being such a good friend"
"Friends don't leave friend even in the worst of times." Jamie comforts her.
"So whats next ?" Val asks
"Well we get you to a doctor, talk to your parents to Caitie and…….."
"Tyler's funeral" Val supplies "What have I done?" she says barely above a whisper
TBC'd. So did you guys like this chapter. Everyone else will be more involved in the next chapter but I needed to let you guys in on how all of this happened. Feedback please R&R and be constructive. Or email me at italianangel1438@hotmail.com
