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Disclaimers: Ranma ½ is owned by the ingenious Rumiko Takahashi. I'm just borrowing her characters for the sole purpose of writing this humble, non-profit fic. Gomen Takahashi-sama!

I actually don't know where THIS came from… I have a 'sort of' idea where it can go… so PLEASE review, and if you think you have a good idea for the fic, (or want to be my prereader, as I would surely be yours ^_^) email me at nm3@evangelion.com.

Without more ado…

…on with the… teaser! ^_^

She ran. Tears streamed down her pale face. Her brownish blue hair was plastered to the sides of her head , thanks to the stormy rain that fell mercilessly on the streets.

                * Ranma…* A sob cut through her wild breathing.

               

                She stopped in her tracks, burying her eyes on the asphalt below her feet.

                * Black… Why does everything has to be so… black, so obscure… I wish…. I wish that it didn't have to be this way… I wish… There was something… someone… that could guide me… no… Us…* With that thought, she rubbed her belly.

               

                She sheltered her damp and cold body in some store's shed. Settling down, and hugging her knees to her chest, her mind replayed the day's events… clouding her mind even further.

* Why!!!* her mind cried.

                A new wave of tears fell. 

                "Huh?" Her head snapped up from its sleeping position over her hugged knees.

                * It finally stopped*

               

                Her body shuddered involuntarily.

                * It is not usually healthy to sleep in soaked clothes*

                " Dammit!" she whispered for the millionth time.

                She stood up, her sore muscles screaming at her.

                " Where am I?"

                * Somewhere far enough from his reach* she answered herself.

                She walked down the street, going nowhere…

                * I have to do something… I can't go on like this, but I can't go back either… I won't go back… to… to… nothing… there's nothing there for me anymore… everything that was… I brought it here with me* she finished her thought with her right hand on her womb…

…Before bumping with a body as cold as her very own. Brown and blue lagoons met. A gasp followed. Confusion hit her features. Wrinkles chased away her fear. 

END?

A/N: Sorry for any confusions! ^_^  But, this _is_ a TEASER!

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Thank you for reading… and reviewing!

He he… now that I'm eighteen *strikes a heroic pose, doing a V sign with her hand*  …^_^  yep, on June 14th … I can buy all you –non minors- a drink… well, at least here in Costa Rica! ^_~

Well, 'bout BEYOND, chapter 5 will come through soon… he he. Now I'm on finals… so as you can see, I was only able to write something very short and very quick. =)  But by the first week of July ( I'm not sure yet), I'll be on vacations! So I hope to write a couple of chapters of BEYOND, the first chapter of HAVE YOU GOT THAT FEELING, and the first chapter of this "UNTITLED" fic too! ( IF and only if I get some reviews on this!!)  ^_^  So, I'll keep myself  _very_ busy… only for you guys!^_^  he he!

'Thank U's: Arigatou gozaimasu to my prereaders, T-chan and fio-chan!  ^_^  Thanks you guys!  *grins stupidly*  a LOT!

And hey ya people… Behave!!!… and IF you don't…. CALL ME!!! So I can join the fun!!! ^_^

…( T-chan & Fio-chan: you know what I'm talking 'bout! ^_~  you _must_ be bored with this!)

     Take care y'all! ^_^..

      Ja ne!!!                  

                                                                                      Nm3

" My mamma always said :

                         …Life's like a box o' chocolate, you never know what you're gonna get"

*I suppose that I don't have to write who said this….  Anyways*

                                                                                                                   Forrest Gump