Review answering time!
ton190p: I admit I originally had the idea of Max having a lust mode similar to his wrath state, but I felt it would be overpowered for him to channel two deadly sins. I'm gonna try to have the sin of lust affect him in a more subtle way. For now he's quite shy about this kind of thing, but the more lust and love he feels, the more confident he grows. He's not gonna be some super jacked up chad with a ginormous package, but someone who can keep up with a succubus and not lose himself to the pleasure. Though he's still human so he's gonna need some water or orange juice afterwards lol. And don't worry about his vitality, whether it's fighting or loving, Max has plenty of stamina to spare.
Now, onto the lewds!
After such a night with Charlie, a new deal was struck between her and the human. She was eager to help her human friend explore his more sexual side, so now once a day she'll take the time to jerk him off with her soft hands. They made sure to be discreet about it, not wanting anyone to see or hear them get up to their naughty fun. Unfortunately for Max, after five days of this fun between them, the princess of hell thought it was time to try something a little advanced. Charlie seemed to really love the way he looks as he's drowning in pleasure, and Max just can't say no to her.
"C-Charlie~ isn't this dangerous?" He asks even though he doesn't make a move to stop her. In one of the many empty hallways of the hotel, Charlie had dragged him here and unzipped his pants before she went to town on him, her hand feverishly stroking his cock with that eager look in her eyes.
"Don't worry, no one comes around her except Niffty. I just thought introducing a little risk would be fun, it certainly seems to have you excited.~" She teases, her soft looking black lips curled into a smug smile that had him clenching his fists to try and resist pushing her onto her knees and taking charge. Over the course of the last few days he's felt a strange urge every now and then. Not like his wrath, but something else. Maybe this was that inner animal that some guys would talk about back during high school.
"Don't be silly…the reason I'm so hard is because I'm doing it with you." He looks away, blushing from having said that but he can't help but be more honest with himself around her, especially at times like this.
"J-jeez, don't say stuff like that, you're gonna make my heart skip a beat." She pouts at him, her face a little red from his confession and her hand working his cock at a faster pace, making sure her palm rubs against the sensitive tip.
"Fuck, gonna cum Charlie.~" He groans out, his words like music to her ears as she presses her chest against his body and strokes his cock harder and faster. She felt like nothing could ruin this…only to hear Niffty humming and her shadow visible around the corner. "W-wait do I hear something?" Max's face goes a little pale as he quickly tries to get out of Charlie's grasp.
"It's okay! Just cum for me and we'll be on our way."
"Now's not the time Charlie!" He struggles again but the demonic princess isn't having it. She was determined to have him cum and her hands weren't stopping or slowing down for even a second. "P-please Charlie, w-where is it even gonna go?" She gets a naughty idea, and aims his cock at the nearest wall.
"Just cum! I promise you'll love what I got planned."
"Fuck, I can't stop-!" He grits his teeth as he finally lets loose his orgasm, noisy splatters audible as his cum hits the wall and slowly flows downward, the sticky cream leaving a big mess with a noticeable scent too.
"Mmm~ quick in here!" As much as she wanted to take in the sight, once his orgasm ended she quickly dragged Max into a nearby supply closet, the door open a bit so the two of them could watch as little Niffty came by with a cart full of cleaning supplies.
A gasp escapes her as she looks at the big mess of cum staining the wall and puts her hands on her hips. "Goodness gracious! What a mess, did someone spill a drink here? It looks thicker than milk…maybe a smoothie or a protein shake?" She couldn't help but ponder a little, leaning in and lightly sniffing it. "Smells funny…but kinda familiar too." She leans in closer to take another inquisitive sniff of it.
Back in the snug closet, with Max tapped between the furthest wall and Charlie bent over in front of him, neither Max nor Charlie could believe their eyes. Charlie made sure to make a mental note to try and convince Niffty in assisting her in pleasuring Max, only for her eyes to widen and a squeal nearly escape her as she feels something hard touch her butt. She looks over her shoulder and is surprised to see Max is still rock hard despite just cumming a bit ago.
"You're still hard?~ Does Niffty really do it for you?~" She teases as Max looks away shyly.
"I-it's not that, I mean she's really cute but…" Max wasn't sure how to finish that sentence without sounding like a degenerate.
"Wait a second, have you been staying hard after cumming all this time? You've been able to go more than one round…and never told me?" She huffs, looking a little mad at him for keeping such a secret as Max could only look away ashamed.
"I-I just didn't wanna take up more of your time. I'm so happy you've helped me cum once a day, I didn't wanna be greedy and ask for more." He explains only to gasp as Charlie grabs hold of his cock and begins jerking him off furiously.
"You dummy, if you were still horny I would have been more than happy to help! Well now you're gonna have to be punished. Take a good long look at Niffty.~" He does as she ordered and peeks through the slightly opened door again only for his cock to throb hard in her grasp.
What he sees is Niffty bent over with a sponge in hand as she works hard at cleaning the mess he left earlier. "Messy messy messy, so messy!" She mutters to herself, not realizing her surprisingly big and bouncy looking asscheeks were being revealed to Max as her skirt failed to hide it thanks to her position. Another surprise was that apparently Niffty liked to go commando.
"Wow, and I thought Vaggie had a nice big butt.~" Charlie giggles as she can feel Max's cock throb again in her hand as she keeps mercilessly stroking his dick. "I wonder, do you think if you asked, she'd let you cum all over her?~ I think that would give us a rare sight of her enjoying a mess.~"
"C-Charlie please.~ Don't make me think that…not about sweet Niffty." He pleads only for his eyes to be glued to the shortstack's jiggling rear. "Fuck, why does she have such a huge bubblebutt?" Maxwell groaned as he became dazed from the pleasure.
"That's it, just tell your good friend Charlie what you wanna do.~" Charlie coos softly, encouraging him to be more honest with himself.
"I-I wanna cum so much! Fuck I'm so close!~" He tries to muffle his voice with his hand, not wanting to alert poor Niffty. "Please don't make me cum on her, I don't wanna risk making her angry or disgusted with me!"
"Awe, don't worry Max, I wouldn't do that to you. I think I have an idea where you can discreetly cum.~" She carefully closes the door with her free hand before she leans close to his cock and puckers up her lips before giving the tip of his cock a big wet sloppy smooch. Max felt as if for a second, his soul left his body as those soft luscious lips made contact with the sensitive head.
"C-cumming!~" He said in a breathy voice as he felt his balls clench and an orgasm made its way through his cock. Charlie only licks her lips, wanting to taste him so bad, to stuff his cock in her mouth and make him experience heaven, but chose to save it for another time. Instead she quickly unbuttons her top, letting her huge milky white breasts spill out, the last few buttons trying their damndest to hold all that tiddy back. Just as the first rope of cum was about to fire out of Max's cock, she swiftly wraps her arms around his waist and hugs him tight, his cock slamming deep into her cleavage and squeezed tightly between her boobs.
Max was helpless as a silent cry escaped him, unable to do anything else other than cum and cum and cum between those wonderfully soft boobs, feeling as if the sweet demon was trying to milk him for all he's worth. "Oh god.~" Max breathed out, Charlie giggling at his response while happily holding him close as he filled up her cleavage with his warm sticky seed.
"From now on, you are to tell me immediately if you have an erection. It's not healthy leaving you so backed up with cum." She reprimands in a kind but slightly teasing voice as she gives him a wink and slowly pulls back, letting his cock slip out of her messy cleavage and much to her surprise, reveal it's still hard.
"Alright then…I'm horny again Charlie." He says just as instructed as he gives his cock a little wag side to side in front of Charlie, her mouth agape as all she can do is stare in disbelief. "Uh, did I say it right?" She's still silent, making him worry a bit. He quickly peeks out the door and sees Niffty left. "Phew, looks like she's done. We can leave if you'd like, we don't have to go again immediately. We could wait a couple hours if you'd preFER!" His voice rises as Charlie suddenly grabs his hips.
"Jeez, warn me beforehand!" He frowns down at her, only to look at her with curiosity as she seemed so focused on his cock. For a second he swore he saw her pupils turn into hearts, but before he could look again, her eyes suddenly shut and she dived forward with her mouth wide open. In the blink of an eye, Max is overwhelmed with pleasure as the princess of hell just inhaled his entire cock in her soft wet mouth and down her sinfully snug throat.
"Gah! C-Charlie wait! My heart isn't ready for this, hnng.~" He could barely muster any resistance as Charlie let out a low hum of delight, her throat lightly vibrating around his shaft as she took her time taking in every aspect of this, from his delectable taste, to his mouth watering scent. All Max could do was lay his hands on top of her head, gently stroking her hair and petting her to show he was very much enjoying her mouth. Just when he thought it couldn't get better, the sexy demon purses her lips tight around his phallus, further making escape from her maw highly unlikely, and she slowly pulls back.
Max grits his teeth as he tries not to let out any shameful moans, his body trembling from the feeling of her soft lips dragging along every centimeter of his shaft while her tongue mercilessly lapped at the sensitive tip. Ever so slowly she continued to pull away until almost all of his saliva drenched cock was revealed, all except that head that was still firmly secure inside her mouth and between her lips. His hands instinctively grab hold of her hair and very lightly tug at it, a primal desire to pull at it and fuck her hot face for hours on end screaming in his mind. For a second he regains his composure, reminding himself how rude it was to ever pull on someone's hair and lets go, only for Charlie to snap into action and grab his hands with her own.
Before Max can make any comment, she places his hands back on her head and opens her eyes a little to give him a lidded lustful stare. Her eyes were practically hypnotic, if she told him later that she was using some kind of magic stare, he would have believed it wholeheartedly. No magic was in use though, all it was was a simple glance, her eyes giving him a message that told him everything he needed to know. With a small nod of his head, he returns his grip on her hair and pulls at her blonde locks, a hungry desperate moan escaping Charlie as she enjoys the rough attention and can't help but crave more.
Giving in to his desires, Max takes control and shoves every inch of his cock back inside that wonderful mouth of hers, a noisy GLK coming from Charlie as her throat is filled once more. "Who knew a good girl like you could be such a dirty little slut?" A voice that Max barely recognized as his own is heard, a commanding tone combined with a domineering gaze that left poor Charlie shuddering in anticipation. "You wanted me to use you, to take your body as my personal stress relief. Instead of getting on your knees and properly begging, you acted in such a depraved roundabout manner, all in hope of seeing me finally snap. Well congratulations princess, I'm going to ruin you now."
With his piece said and Charlie feeling terrified yet absolutely ecstatic, Max pulled out of her mouth until only the tip remained in her mouth once again, then roughly pushed every inch back inside just like before. It took a couple thrusts but soon enough Maxwell developed a good rhythm to begin properly fucking her face. In and out, his cock disappeared past her lips and bulged in her throat, just for it all to suddenly pull back out like a rabbit out of a magician's hat. Sometimes he thrusted himself, moving his hips to ravage her mouth as if attempting to breed it with his balls smacking her drool covered chin. Other times he got a firm hold of her head and slammed her into his lap, burying her face into his crotch just to pull her by her hair afterwards and yank her mouth off until she was removed from his cock completely. Once he let her get a gasp of air, he wasted no time in shoving her head down again with his cock back in her mouth like it was its luxurious home it never wanted to leave.
Unfortunately all good things must come to an end, thankfully there was still the wonderful climax for them to enjoy. "I think I remember you enjoyed the taste of my cum. I guess you've done quite a good job so a reward is in order, just be sure not to spill.~" He chuckles softly before his hips begin thrusting much faster than before, Charlie letting out a noise of surprise and pleasure as her mouth and throat are thoroughly ravished by the horny human. "Fuck yes, take every last drop you little slut!~"
With a final cry, Max releases his last orgasm of the day, Charlie letting out a muffled shriek of glee as her throat is filled with his sticky seed. Not wanting her to go without getting a good taste, Max slowly pulls out until just the tip is in her mouth, allowing her tongue to be showered with the thick warm cream she just couldn't get enough of. He made sure there was plenty for her to swallow, her mouth filled to the brim with his semen and her cheeks puffing out from the sheer abundance, leaving her looking a little silly but cute as her cheeks are packed with his protein rich nut. Only once his orgasm finally ends does Max finally pull away, his cock going flaccid as he seemed to be efficiently drained.
The supply closet was silent except for the panting coming from a tuckered out Maxwell, and the noisy lewd gulps coming from a content Charlie as slowly but surely she managed to get all the cum in her mouth down to her stomach. Once she finished she took in some fresh air and exhaled with her mouth wide open and tongue out. "Look Maxxie, no spills. I swallowed every last drop.~" A small giggle escapes her as she shows off her mouth to him, Max feeling a throb in his cock despite how much he came.
"You're such a good girl.~" He praises as he pets her head, Charlie leaning into hand with a big smile on her face. As the post-but clarity set in, Max began to regret some of his rough actions. "Say Charlie…I wanna apologize for the stuff I said. I was really in the moment but that's no excuse to be so rude to you. Is there anything I can do to make it up to you?" Charlie looked at him confused for a bit before giggling and taking his hand and nuzzling her cheek into it.
"You're such a silly sweetheart Maxxie. You don't gotta apologize, I really enjoyed it!"
"You did? Oh thank goodness, I was worried I misread your signals or something. I've read about acting dominant in some stories, but I never tried it. I wasn't too mean was I?"
"Nah, you did great! To be honest, while I had a lot of fun taking charge and making you feel good, I'm kinda more in the bottom department." She says with a blush on her face and a shy laugh. "So when you took hold of my hair and said those things? Unf~ my legs felt like jelly.~" She looked up to him with a small lip bite, Max feeling his face get warm. "I promise if you ever do something I don't like, I'll tell you immediately, just like you can do the same if I do something you don't like. That way we both have some happy healthy fun."
"Wow, thanks for the clarification." He smiles at her and gently picks her up off her knees. "Hope your knees don't hurt from doing that too long though, I can only imagine how uncomfortable the floor is and how bad it is on the knees. Wonder if I should get you some knee pads if we plan to do this more often?"
"I'll be sure to jot that down on the shopping list, thank you for the consideration of my poor knees." She jokes with a giggle before giving her knees a little pat. "Honestly though, you got a really hot dominant side.~ Tell me to get on my knees with that kind of voice and I might not care about the type of floor and just get started immediately on jerking you off.~ …or tittyfucking you… or sucking you off…you know being on my knees actually covers a lot of fun stuff! Yeah maybe knee pads are a good idea."
"Jeez, be careful with what you say, don't want me to get a big head." He chuckles and rubs the back of his head.
"Too late.~" She says with a mischievous grin before giving the tip of his cock a little poke with her dainty index finger.
"Gah! Hmph, bad girl." Deciding to tease her back, he tries his dominant side again and reels his hand back before giving her butt a firm smack, surprised and aroused by the softness and how much it jiggled from the impact.
"Eek! H-hey no spanking!" She pouts at him with her cheeks red.
"Fuck, my bad. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to go too far." He quickly apologizes only for Charlie to stop him.
"I-it's not that…it's just a little embarrassing is all." She looks away, unintentionally giving her butt a little shake towards him. "I'm a little sensitive to having my butt squeezed or spanked, it…feels too good." She admits with one hand gently rubbing where he spanked, a soft moan escaping her.
"R-really? Okay, well now I know. No spanking and no squeezing the booty."
"Well I never said that…" Charlie quickly says before looking over her shoulder at him with an embarrassed but horny look in her eyes. "You may spank it only once a day…and you gotta warn me beforehand! That includes squeezing. I don't wanna end up cumming too fast just from your hand…that'd be so embarrassing." She can't help but hide her face in her hands at the thought.
"Okay I promise, only once a day and with your permission first…Pfft, now I can't help but gotta ask…how often does Vaggie like doing that to you?~" He teases with a wiggle of his eyebrows.
"E-eh? No, bad Max! I-I'm not gonna tell you that!"
"Ha! Just the other day you mentioned using toys with her without batting an eyelid. Now I mention her spanking you and suddenly you get all shy and cute…well, cuter to be exact."
"Noooooo, I'll tell you just like I told her, no bullying me about my butt!"
"So is bullying you about your boobs okay?" He asks with an impish grin as he gently pokes her bosom, making her involuntarily giggle.
"No!….well maybe…I wouldn't mind if you were to squeeze my nipples and fuck my boobs I mean."
"But if I wanted to say, hotdog my cock between your bubbly cheeks?"
"Absolutely not! You'd probably make me cum immediately by doing that!…WAIT I DIDN'T SAY THAT!"
"You're so cute.~" He teases again, making her pout more before he gently kisses her blushing cheek. "Okay I'm sorry. No booty fun, only booby fun,." He nods his head with a smile.
"Yes! Exactly…great now I'm thinking of you and Vaggie playing with my chest… and don't say with my butt instead!"
"…I'm still gonna think it.~" He cackles before getting his pants back on and leaves the closet.
"Hey! Get back here! Oh you're lucky I promised to help you cum everyday!" She huffs before chasing after him. What the two didn't notice was around the corner of the hallway, a certain moth demon had her arms crossed and a light blush on her face.
Coming up next is another Omake, but this one is a bit different. The last few are completely non canon to this story, but what's coming up next is an event that can happen at any time in Max's timeline here, it's just not really that important to the plot, but may be referenced in the future. So I'll refer to it as semi canon, you'll see some Omake's titled as such so you'll know.
Semi Canon Omake
While Hell was home to so many different forms of debauchery, there are still some activities that can be done that are relatively harmless such as golf, hiking, and even fishing. Which brings us to the crew of the Hazbin Hotel, the six demons and one human out in a large lake taking in the peace and quiet…well at first.
"This is such bullshit." Max grumbles as he looks at his empty fish bucket, not one demonic aquatic creature going close to his lure. Actually that's not true, they were getting close, the problem is none of them took a bite.
"It's okay Max, the point of fishing is to relax." Charlie reminds him as she pats his shoulder.
"Easy for you to say, you've been catching and releasing fish every five minutes!" Max commented with a hint of envy.
"Oh that's not true…hey a bite!" She exclaims much to Max's growing frustration as the princess reels in a big red angry looking fish.
"Oh wow!" Niffty says in awe as she takes a picture of the fish with a Polaroid camera, waving the photo a little as soon as it comes out. "It kinda looks like Max!" She realizes as she puts up the photo of the fish right next to Max's face, both having the same sour look on their faces.
"Don't worry Max, it just takes time. Hey, I think a fish is coming!" She notes as she looks into the clear water, a big juicy looking fish swimming towards Max's lure.
"Come on come on…" Max whispers to himself as the fish inches closer. "Get it get it get it! Want it, have it, need it, WHY?!" He questions as the fish just swims by, not caring about his lure for even a second. "Why!?" The human yells up the sky as Charlie and Niffty are shaken a little, Max's rage shaking the boat a little.
On another boat were Vaggie and Angel, Vaggie glancing at the raging human. "Wow, and I thought I could get mad."
"I feel bad for whoever he decides to sleep with, because I can tell all that rage is gonna come out in the bedroom." Angel jokes, cackling at the look on Vaggie's face.
"C-can you not?! Pendejo…wait what are you doing to your lure?" She asks as she notices Angel hooking something white to his lure.
"Just giving the fish here something more fun to nibble on." Angel answers innocently.
"A-are you giving crack to the fish?!"
"What's the big deal? I can't use it myself since you and your girlfriend won't let me use it at the hotel, so I thought instead of trashing it, I'd spice up the fishing a little." Angel explains before dipping the lure into the water.
"That's completely asinine, there's no way that cocaine can attract fish." She firmly states only to get splashed with water as suddenly Angel is hauling in a massive bigmouth bass bigger than his arm.
"Ha ha! Look at this fat fucker!" Angel laughs as the big fish squirms in the boat, Vaggie looking on in surprise.
"…fuck it, give me some."
"What the GARBAGE man!?" Max yells in frustration as he nearly throws the fishing pole out of the boat but restrains himself considering it was a gift from Alastor.
"Take it easy Max, just think of calm blue oceans." Charlie advises while Niffty rubs his shoulders.
"I'm trying so hard not to snap this fishing pole."
"And I'm happy you know better than to destroy property when mad, especially such a nice gift!" Charlie comments with a smile as Max just decides to try again.
"Fifteenth one's the charm I guess…" Max sighs. On another boat was a certain radio demon smiling, looking quite happy with himself.
"What's got you looking so smug?" Husk asks, the sinner having been busy grabbing fish out of the water with his bare hands. One benefit of having an avian and feline body, fantastic fishing skills.
"Oh nothing, just happy to enjoy such a nice peaceful fishing trip."
"Are we on the same fishing trip? Hard to call it peaceful with the kid over there yelling."
"Really? I personally think it's music to my ears!"
"…you did something to that fishing pole of his, didn't you?" Husk accuses with a knowing look.
"Who? Me? Now why would I say, give Max a fishing pole designed so that no fish would ever bite his lure?" He asks only to hear in the distance some more of Max's frustrated screams.
"JUST FUCKING TAKE THE LURE! JUST TAKE IT!"
"Such a perfect fishing trip.~" Alastor chuckles with a serene smile.
"WHYYYYYYY?!"
"Wow, the lungs on that kid. Can't believe you gave him a jinxed fishing pole." Husk says as he scoops up another fish out of the water.
"Well, technically it's not jinxed." Alastor reveals.
"What do you mean?"
"It was made specifically so it can only catch one specific type of fish, Northern Snakeheads."
"Snakeheads?….wait, don't snakeheads grow huge here in hell?" Husk asks, slightly worried as he looks down in the water.
"Oh absolutely humongous! They call them the fish from hell back in the mortal realm, but they have no idea how big they get down here."
"And you gave the fishing rod meant specifically for getting the attention of those things to Max!?"
"Oh Husker my boy, no one has seen a Snakehead here in years! You worry too much." Alastor waves off, only to hear a cry from Max.
"I GOT A BITE! I GOT ONE MOTHERFUCKERS!" Max yells out as he starts reeling, a determined look on his face.
"Well, I've been wrong before." Alastor shrugs, Husk backing away from the water as he swore he saw something massive down there.
"You got this Max!" Niffty cheers on, the boat rocking to and fro as the human struggles, pulling back on the rod.
"Be careful! You don't wanna let the line snap!" Charlie cautions even though she's having trouble holding in her excitement.
"Holy fuck, whatever he got is putting up a real fight!" Angel comments as his and Vaggie's boat is shaking as well until they see a massive tail end rise up out of the water before crashing down. Vaggie scoots away from Angel as a massive splash of water crashes onto the spider demon, Vaggie unable to keep herself from laughing at the drenched sinner.
"Come on you squirmy bastard! COME ON!" Max roars out, his wrath coursing through his body, giving him the extra strength needed to stand his ground as the slimy beast gave one last struggle. "MY NAME IS MAXWELL IGNITUS, AND BY GOD I WILL MAKE YOU MINE!" Maxwell yells as with one last mighty pull, the Snakehead is pulled out of the water and into the human's arms.
"Yeaaaaaah!" Max shouts victoriously as he lifts up the massive fish, its body big enough to swallow him whole if it so desired.
"You did it Max!" Charlie cheers happily while Niffty bounces around excitedly, taking several pictures of the massive catch.
Max pants heavily as he slowly lowers the heavy fish down into the boat. "Kind of a bittersweet victory to be honest…"
"Why's that?" Charlie asks curiously.
"…because I personally hate the taste of fish." Max answers truthfully before collapsing into the boat on his back, Charlie unable to stop the laughter from escaping her while Niffty takes one last picture of Max on his back, eyes closed, and an arm out high in the air giving a thumbs up.