The Heads I Smashed Chapter 2: And Hell Freezes Over
A/N: Well, I'm kind of sad to write this, but I believe I got my first flame. Observe.
"I have to say that-Trunks is totally to good for Pan. She's a brat and a little annoying saiy-jin wanna be. And besides the age difference is totally right. Come on give me a break, Pan is half his age for pete's sake!" –Kenny
I changed nothing, this is straight from the review page for this story. Look for yourself.
Okay Kenny, I think this is a flame. It is…right? Well, who do you think Trunks should be paired up with? And I think that the summary for this story CLEARLY states that this is a T/P. Now, I understand where you're coming from. In GT, Pan does tend to be whiny, BUT Trunks doesn't really seem to mind. He's never really mad at her and who gives a damn about the age differences? If Pan is 21, Trunks is 35. So, technically, she isn't half his age. I have no idea why you read a Trunks and Pan story and then reviewed it like that. And what do you mean, "Trunks is totally to good for Pan."? Heh Heh, I'd say you're starting to sound like Veggie-Chan. Or is this whole thing about the little comment on the last chapter of The Tears I've Cried? If it is, that means you're a Marron and Trunks fan, and again, that means you had no business reading the story in the first place, for I CLEARLY stated it was a T/P story. I have nothing against Marron. She makes the most Kawaii little kid, but I despise fics with her and Trunks as a couple, which is exactly why I don't read them and certainly don't review them. Even if I did read one, and perhaps even reviewed one, I wouldn't flame the writer. Now, maybe this isn't what you call a flame. You still had no business writing that in a T/P review section. I happen to like T/P and that's the way it's gonna be. I really do care for your opinion. I just don't like reading it where it doesn't belong. Find a T/P & T/M war site where fans can vent their hate for each other freely. Don't do it here. Thank you for your review anyway.
Okay, now to the people who reviewed nicely.
Jami_Chan: Well, here's the next chapter, though this review got me down. Wow! You're rather boisterous about your Goten choice, ne? lol. Thanx Jami!
Fluffy: I want one too! I DON'T want Pan after me, though. I can say that much! Thankies!
Veggie Gurl 4221: Heh heh! Goten is a hottie, ne? Well, I dunno who he's gonna be paired up with yet, but I'll leave a side note at the end of this chapter. Sank Yuu!
Marina: G/B you say? Weeeeeee'll see! ^^;;;; Don't worry, EVERYONE will be happy in the end. Thankisay!
Brandon: Kawaii! One of the guys are reading my story! Yes Brandon, I will be adding more, as you can tell! Thanksies!
PsychoPixieDragon: You thought it was funny? Good. That's what I was aiming for. ^_^ arigatou!
Kenny: You already got your message. Thank you for the review.
Littlelizzygurl: Another big G/B fan! Amazing stories? Naaaaaaah. ^_^ Thank you very much!
Go-Chan: So glad you think it's cute! Thankies!
Gohan's Girl: You like Gohan-Chan? I do too! Well, anyway, it's 12:30 AM, and hopefully you'll be able to read this tomorrow morning! Thank you for being patient!
I Love you guys! Thanx! On to the madness….
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"Wedding dress shopping time!" Bra practically screams in my ear.
I rub my temples, silently letting her know that I'm having a bad day.
"Awww, poor Pan."
I growl softly, but stand to my feet anyway. I've prolonged this day for quite a while, and time is quickly running out.
A smile lights up Bra's face, and we walked out the front door, leaving a grunting Veggie-Tou-Chan stuffing his face with Lucky Charms.
We drove in silence to the Wedding Specialty Shop. Well, conversation silence anyway. Bra was wildly head banging and singing to some alternative song.
When we arrived, Bra practically had to pull me through the front doors.
"Come on Bra! Honestly! What's wrong with wearing a tux to a wedding!"
She eyes me evilly.
"Plenty when the Bride wants to wear it!"
I continue to argue, "What if the Bride is a guy? You know what I mean!" ((No offense is meant to homosexuals))
Bra then punches my arm. It hurt a little, but she has only recently started training too. We must have looked like crooks barging into the shop. Bra had me in a headlock and she looked rather psychotic, while I on the other hand was screaming obscenities and kicking. All the people paled.
We both realized the way we looked at the same time, and stood up straight, laughing idiotically.
"Um…heh heh, we're here to try on the dress custom made for Son Pan." Bra said.
The manager stood up from his position from being crouched behind the desk and snootily asked,
"And who might you be?"
Bra smirked. "Bra Briefs, live and at your service."
The guy begins to stutter, "Sorry, Ms. B..Briefs! I had no idea!"
Bra flipped her hair and walked passed him to the fitting rooms, "You are forgiven."
I'll never understand Bra. But I follow her anyway. This custom dress we're talking about, I helped design. Believe it or not. I had to paint it first though. Once it was painted and I saw it, I fell in love. But I would never admit that to anyone. Because I'm a big kid! And big kids don't act that way! Oops, I had a little to much Lucky Charms this morning. Me and Veggie had a cereal speed eating contest.
Bra and I step through the dressing room doors.
The Man quickly runs in with a rolly cart thing with the dress hanging by a hanger ((well duh)) on a bar.
He leaves it in the room then quickly walks out muttering something like "So sorry."
I shrug.
Bra takes the dress off the hanger and hold sit up to my chin.
My eyes grow big, "Bra…I think they made the dress too small." I say while pointing at the midsection with my index finger.
"Nonsense! It's supposed to be like that!"
I stubbornly shake my head, "I refuse to wear something uncomfortable."
Bra looks up at me. "Like hell you will!"
I retaliate, "Like hell I won't!"
"You will!"
"Yeah, and hell freezes over!"
She smirks at me, "I guess hell does."
And right then I knew I lost the battle.
A/N: I'm so sorry this chapter had no romance. I'm a little depressed over that comment. But I have decided to write 2 Goten stories. One with Bra and the other with Marron. Unlike some stories, each one will have a different plot. If you no wanna read, then you don't have to, but I will have Trunks and Pan playing decent roles in each. I'm sorry I'm doing this. But I can't turn you guys down! ::sighs:: so sorry its so crappy. I'll do better next time. I promise. Thanks for understaning.
--Lonna