Disclaimer: I don't own Love Hina or it's characters. They are owned
by TV Tokyo. The fiction you are reading is mine. Please do not steal
it, and claim it as your own, or sell it for profit. -B-chaos
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Mitsune: I was not in the second part I better be in this third one
B-chaos: you are in the third part
Mitsune: yes will I be the great main star .
B-chaos: sorry, no you will have a part so minor it is not funny
Mitsune: grr this is not good I'll get me revenge against you b-chaos
B-chaos: bye-bye Mitsuna, now on to the fanfic
Mitsune my name is Mitsune, Mitsune get it, not Mitsuna but Mitsune
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Outlaw star can I eat it
The Pretty lady who was onboard the outlaw star says, "I think Gene is waking up so can we come over to your ship now."
Kaolla replies, "what's a Gene can I eat it."
The pretty and very hot lady replies, " Nani, Gene is not a food item he is the Captain of this ship the Outlaw star."
About an hour later the entire crew of the Outlaw star was onboard the Tama space ship. Kaolla was the first person the great the other crew by saying, " hello do you like my little creation."
As every one is greeting the other crew Kietaro thinks in the back of his mind "that's odd I have not been punched, kicked, sliced, or injured in this fanfic yet"
But while he is thinking about how very luckily he is for not being attacked yet he walks right in to a cat looking women. When he looks up he notices that he is staring right at the chest area of the cat women. Much to Kietaro's surprise there is no punch from the cat women, no flying kick form Naru, Motoko did not attack him, but instead he hears a voice which he guess is the Gene guy and it says, "that dude is fast I never seen any one move that fast towards a women especially Aisha."
Gene's words had called attention to what Kietaro was doing. This resulted in Narusegawa hitting Kietaro flying towards the back of the ship. Then Gene says, "I want to introduce the crew of the outlaw star. This is my partner Jim Hawking, this is our navigator and my girlfriend Melphina, this is our resident Catrl-Catrl Aisha Clan-Clan, this is the greatest Assassin in the universe Twilight Suzuka, and me I am the captain of the Outlaw Star Gene Starwind. So who are you guys?"
Kaolla says, " This is Shinobu, Sara, Narusegawa, Haruka, Motoko, Kietaro, Tama, that girl in the corner hmm… I can't seem to remember her name, and I am Kaolla."
Mitsune just stand in the corner thinking, "I'll get my revenge against that stupid fanfic writer I will rewrite his next part and change the rating to R rating or higher," then Mitsune starts to think out loud, "Hahahaha I will have my vengeance."
After hearing Mitsune's out burst of laughter they all turn towards her. Then Aisha says, "that lady is a very weird person over there."
Shinobu shyly asks, "I was just about to make breakfast do you guys want any."
Aisha leaps on top of Gene and say, "food, yea we want to have food our supply ran out yesterday."
Everyone sits down to a meal that Shinobu has made of course Kaolla and Aisha devour their food and the food of the people around them. Gene comments, "it's like have two Aisha's around and where is the Kietaro guy at have not seen him in a while."
I a dark room towards the back of the ship Kietaro is trapped with the exit to the room being cut off by a two headed Mecha-Tama. All Kietaro is scream and scream.
As everyone starts to finishes up eating Motoko asks, "Miss Suzuka why do you carry around a wooden sword like that."
Suzuka calmly replies, "I use this so that I can pass through metal detectors undetected, I noticed that you are a warrior also do you want to have a little sparing match to test to see who truly is the better warrior."
"Hai"
" I must warn you that I was only defeated once and that was because the guy cheated to win."
Gene calls out, "hey, I did not cheat just because you lost your clothes does not mean that I cheated, I'm going to go look for that Kietaro guy I think he might be in trouble"
In the other room (kitchen) Melphina is asking Shinobu, "How do you cook so great"
Will Motoko beat Susuza? Will Gene save Kietaro from the two headed mecha-tama? Will Shinobu teach Melphina how to cook? Will Mitsune get her revenge against me? All these questions will be answered in the next part Mitsune's Revenge.
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Did you like the second chapter in this intriguing story I hope you did. Send me comments to bafarmer2@cs.com or post them
-B-chaos
by TV Tokyo. The fiction you are reading is mine. Please do not steal
it, and claim it as your own, or sell it for profit. -B-chaos
_______________________________________________________
Mitsune: I was not in the second part I better be in this third one
B-chaos: you are in the third part
Mitsune: yes will I be the great main star .
B-chaos: sorry, no you will have a part so minor it is not funny
Mitsune: grr this is not good I'll get me revenge against you b-chaos
B-chaos: bye-bye Mitsuna, now on to the fanfic
Mitsune my name is Mitsune, Mitsune get it, not Mitsuna but Mitsune
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Outlaw star can I eat it
The Pretty lady who was onboard the outlaw star says, "I think Gene is waking up so can we come over to your ship now."
Kaolla replies, "what's a Gene can I eat it."
The pretty and very hot lady replies, " Nani, Gene is not a food item he is the Captain of this ship the Outlaw star."
About an hour later the entire crew of the Outlaw star was onboard the Tama space ship. Kaolla was the first person the great the other crew by saying, " hello do you like my little creation."
As every one is greeting the other crew Kietaro thinks in the back of his mind "that's odd I have not been punched, kicked, sliced, or injured in this fanfic yet"
But while he is thinking about how very luckily he is for not being attacked yet he walks right in to a cat looking women. When he looks up he notices that he is staring right at the chest area of the cat women. Much to Kietaro's surprise there is no punch from the cat women, no flying kick form Naru, Motoko did not attack him, but instead he hears a voice which he guess is the Gene guy and it says, "that dude is fast I never seen any one move that fast towards a women especially Aisha."
Gene's words had called attention to what Kietaro was doing. This resulted in Narusegawa hitting Kietaro flying towards the back of the ship. Then Gene says, "I want to introduce the crew of the outlaw star. This is my partner Jim Hawking, this is our navigator and my girlfriend Melphina, this is our resident Catrl-Catrl Aisha Clan-Clan, this is the greatest Assassin in the universe Twilight Suzuka, and me I am the captain of the Outlaw Star Gene Starwind. So who are you guys?"
Kaolla says, " This is Shinobu, Sara, Narusegawa, Haruka, Motoko, Kietaro, Tama, that girl in the corner hmm… I can't seem to remember her name, and I am Kaolla."
Mitsune just stand in the corner thinking, "I'll get my revenge against that stupid fanfic writer I will rewrite his next part and change the rating to R rating or higher," then Mitsune starts to think out loud, "Hahahaha I will have my vengeance."
After hearing Mitsune's out burst of laughter they all turn towards her. Then Aisha says, "that lady is a very weird person over there."
Shinobu shyly asks, "I was just about to make breakfast do you guys want any."
Aisha leaps on top of Gene and say, "food, yea we want to have food our supply ran out yesterday."
Everyone sits down to a meal that Shinobu has made of course Kaolla and Aisha devour their food and the food of the people around them. Gene comments, "it's like have two Aisha's around and where is the Kietaro guy at have not seen him in a while."
I a dark room towards the back of the ship Kietaro is trapped with the exit to the room being cut off by a two headed Mecha-Tama. All Kietaro is scream and scream.
As everyone starts to finishes up eating Motoko asks, "Miss Suzuka why do you carry around a wooden sword like that."
Suzuka calmly replies, "I use this so that I can pass through metal detectors undetected, I noticed that you are a warrior also do you want to have a little sparing match to test to see who truly is the better warrior."
"Hai"
" I must warn you that I was only defeated once and that was because the guy cheated to win."
Gene calls out, "hey, I did not cheat just because you lost your clothes does not mean that I cheated, I'm going to go look for that Kietaro guy I think he might be in trouble"
In the other room (kitchen) Melphina is asking Shinobu, "How do you cook so great"
Will Motoko beat Susuza? Will Gene save Kietaro from the two headed mecha-tama? Will Shinobu teach Melphina how to cook? Will Mitsune get her revenge against me? All these questions will be answered in the next part Mitsune's Revenge.
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Did you like the second chapter in this intriguing story I hope you did. Send me comments to bafarmer2@cs.com or post them
-B-chaos