"Loneliness...."
By: Suzaku no miko
Here is my first poem...let me know what you think!! Please review it!!


I lay awake at night, thinking....
Asking myself, what is to become of me...
And where is the love that I so much desire?

Is it too much to ask for someone to love?
To share the love that I have so much of?
Everything around me has had some type of love...

The type of love I wish to experience at least just once.
It is the love only a couple could experience.
Many people that are romantically involved tell me...

It is not as wonderful as it seems; you should not get involved.
If that is the truth, then why do I feel so left out?
If there is a man for every woman, where is mine?

Why is everyone moving ahead and I am left behind?

Loneliness...
Such a harsh word, it is what I feel right now...
And I don't know what to do...

It is a feeling much worse than death,
Feeling as though you were forgotten.

Would you have loved me...

If only I had said it earlier,
Or if I wasn't so terrified of the rejection...
Like of so many times before...

Loneliness...
I don't wanna' be alone anymore....