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Alternative Serena
by: Darienfan
Hi. This is my first attempt at something, so be nice please. This story is
definitely an alternative universe. How ever it shows what could happen during Darien's
breakup with Serena. Well, actually if Serena wasn't as nice and soft hearted as she is.
As you read the story you will appreciate that part of her more. Oh ya, as of rating I
would say PG or PG13, somewhere there. DISCLAIMER TIME: Obvious I don't own Sailor Moon. I just own the storyline. I wish I could take Darien/Mamoru/Tuxedo Mask/Prince Endymion/Moonlight Knight. I know you guys got the idea with only Darien but I couldn't help myself. Visit my website at http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/darienfan/
The story is kind of depressing but don't worry, I try to write other more happy stories,
and nobody can change my mind about rewritting the ending or writting a sequel cause I
wanted something different so this is how the story is. You can e-mail me at
bachngoc17@netscape.net to compliment, flame, death threats, whatever. One more thing I need editors, since I'm new at this. 'thoughts of characters'
I can still see and hear the things he did and said to me that day. flashback "I don't
love you anymore Serena," while he turned away from me and walk away. W...Why Dar.r...rien? Tears fell down my face blurring my eyes, as my feet couldn't hold me up anymore. I fell over and the tears wouldn't stop no matter how much I tried to keep them
from falling. After an hour the crying stopped and I was able to move from that place in the park and go home. end flashback I'm in my room thinking about my relationship with everyone now. My parents are away on vacation, Sammy is away at his friend's house for
two weeks. Lunar is with Artemis. Darien and I were such a sure thing, which I counted everything on our relationship.If I was wrong about our relationship, then I can't be sure of anything else. My so-called friends might not be my friends at all. Maybe I'm alone in the world, and people put up with me cause they have to. The girls and our guardian cats seem to be sick of me and their always nagging me about how I do things. I've tried my best and still they ask for more. Even with homework, I now get B's or C's which is a great improvement from D's and F's, yet mom still complains. I've had it with them pushing me,
Serena around! I'm leaving!And I might NOT come Back! As I yelled, I got my suitcase and packed up my belongings and savings from a job at the Rose Cafe. I didn't tell anyone about my job because they will just laugh and make jokes about how I'll mess up like usual.
~Meanwhile at Darien's apartment~
'How can I do this to her. I love her but the voice that said she'll die keeps comming. Now I know how it feels to love someone so much that it hurts. I'll always love you and look after you, Serena. Fate is so cruel but you must understand, in time you will forget me. Time will heal you, Serena. I wanted to comfort you so much that it's tearing at my heart to see you so hurt, but it's for your own good. I wish I could tell you but you might not let go
if I told you. Goodbye, my love. ~Back to Serena's room~ I just got all my stuff and called the Moon Apartment owner. They were looking for someone to rent their apartment. Now I'm heading over there, I've seen the apartment before. It's really nice with two bedrooms, one bathroom with a shower. A small but very nice kitchen, they even have a balcony.
I took it and moved in, right away. I went back home to write letter's to my friends. As for my family, I erased their memories, so no problem there. The letter is as follow:
Dear Darien and the Scouts,
I decided to leave cause you guys seem to think I am a nuisance. I thought you were my friends. I did improve a great deal from what I was in the beginning. You guys however didn't appreciate it, and I'm tired of all the nagging. I expected more from you, because you guys knew about our job to protect the world. I'm tired of working hard and not being
appreciated. It's ok that everyone else puts me down because they don't know I have to save the world. Even though they didn't know, they complimented me on my improvements. I cared about you guys, but no more. I can't take it anymore. Don't
even try to find me cause you won't beable to. I tried my best but it's not enough for you, obviously. I'll be back you can count on that, and don't be too supprise on how I make my entrance.
No longer your friend,
Serena Tsukino
I dropped by Raye's temple and left it with Chad, and told him to hand it to Raye. I went back to my new apartment to put everything in place. I was so tired afterwards that I collapsed on the bed and drifted off to sleep. ~Next day at Raye's Temple~
"Where is that Meatball head? I told her to meet us here at 12 pm on Saturday! She better be here soon." [ Obviously somebody forgot to give Raye the letter.] Thirty minutes later " So Amy why do you think we haven't had a new enemy in months?" "I don't know Lita, maybe they are waiting until we get off guard. I'm still scanning for evil vibes on my computer, so good so far." Chad finally remembers, so he knocks on Raye's door. "Chad, go away I'll..." "But Raye it's important, a letter from Serena," Chad interrupted. 'Why would Serena write a letter instead of coming here in person,' everyone thought. Raye was the first to recover and asked him when he got the letter.
"Yesterday...Why?" "You mean to tell me that you had the letter since yesterday and wait until now to give it to me!!" As she ran after him threatening to hurt him. Everyone sweatdropped, as Amy said, "Raye calm down and read the letter." "Oh ya,"as she stopped chasing a really scared Chad, who side in relieve when she stopped. "I'll call Darien, it's to him too, said Raye." "Already did," said Mina looking at everyone proudly. Darien walked in just then. " What's up girls, did something happen to Serena?" They quickly read the letter and everyone looked down in shame. All of a sudden a scream was heard from outside of the temple. Everyone quickly transformed as they headed toward the scream. Sailor Mercury tried to contact Sailor Moon but got no answer. The monster was an ice figure of a giant, and he was shooting ice everywhere. The scouts appeared, Mars with her mars fire ignite blasted at the monster distracting it and making it angrier. Venus cresent beam smash! Even Jupiter's combo with Venus didn't work. Mercury typed furiously at her computer to no prevail. Tuxedo Masked made a supprised entrance distracting the monster long enough for the four girls to combine their powers
and dusted the monster. As everyone was about to leave, they heard a voice. "We'll be back Sailor Scouts!" The shadow was watching the whole time to study the Scout's moves to find a way to destroy them.
To be continue.....
Read it please, don't let the promise of depression scare you. I just read so many fanfics with happy endings so I decided to write something different. I will continue to write if comments are sent and if someone wants me to continue.
Alternative Serena
by: Darienfan
Hi. This is my first attempt at something, so be nice please. This story is
definitely an alternative universe. How ever it shows what could happen during Darien's
breakup with Serena. Well, actually if Serena wasn't as nice and soft hearted as she is.
As you read the story you will appreciate that part of her more. Oh ya, as of rating I
would say PG or PG13, somewhere there. DISCLAIMER TIME: Obvious I don't own Sailor Moon. I just own the storyline. I wish I could take Darien/Mamoru/Tuxedo Mask/Prince Endymion/Moonlight Knight. I know you guys got the idea with only Darien but I couldn't help myself. Visit my website at http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/darienfan/
The story is kind of depressing but don't worry, I try to write other more happy stories,
and nobody can change my mind about rewritting the ending or writting a sequel cause I
wanted something different so this is how the story is. You can e-mail me at
bachngoc17@netscape.net to compliment, flame, death threats, whatever. One more thing I need editors, since I'm new at this. 'thoughts of characters'
I can still see and hear the things he did and said to me that day. flashback "I don't
love you anymore Serena," while he turned away from me and walk away. W...Why Dar.r...rien? Tears fell down my face blurring my eyes, as my feet couldn't hold me up anymore. I fell over and the tears wouldn't stop no matter how much I tried to keep them
from falling. After an hour the crying stopped and I was able to move from that place in the park and go home. end flashback I'm in my room thinking about my relationship with everyone now. My parents are away on vacation, Sammy is away at his friend's house for
two weeks. Lunar is with Artemis. Darien and I were such a sure thing, which I counted everything on our relationship.If I was wrong about our relationship, then I can't be sure of anything else. My so-called friends might not be my friends at all. Maybe I'm alone in the world, and people put up with me cause they have to. The girls and our guardian cats seem to be sick of me and their always nagging me about how I do things. I've tried my best and still they ask for more. Even with homework, I now get B's or C's which is a great improvement from D's and F's, yet mom still complains. I've had it with them pushing me,
Serena around! I'm leaving!And I might NOT come Back! As I yelled, I got my suitcase and packed up my belongings and savings from a job at the Rose Cafe. I didn't tell anyone about my job because they will just laugh and make jokes about how I'll mess up like usual.
~Meanwhile at Darien's apartment~
'How can I do this to her. I love her but the voice that said she'll die keeps comming. Now I know how it feels to love someone so much that it hurts. I'll always love you and look after you, Serena. Fate is so cruel but you must understand, in time you will forget me. Time will heal you, Serena. I wanted to comfort you so much that it's tearing at my heart to see you so hurt, but it's for your own good. I wish I could tell you but you might not let go
if I told you. Goodbye, my love. ~Back to Serena's room~ I just got all my stuff and called the Moon Apartment owner. They were looking for someone to rent their apartment. Now I'm heading over there, I've seen the apartment before. It's really nice with two bedrooms, one bathroom with a shower. A small but very nice kitchen, they even have a balcony.
I took it and moved in, right away. I went back home to write letter's to my friends. As for my family, I erased their memories, so no problem there. The letter is as follow:
Dear Darien and the Scouts,
I decided to leave cause you guys seem to think I am a nuisance. I thought you were my friends. I did improve a great deal from what I was in the beginning. You guys however didn't appreciate it, and I'm tired of all the nagging. I expected more from you, because you guys knew about our job to protect the world. I'm tired of working hard and not being
appreciated. It's ok that everyone else puts me down because they don't know I have to save the world. Even though they didn't know, they complimented me on my improvements. I cared about you guys, but no more. I can't take it anymore. Don't
even try to find me cause you won't beable to. I tried my best but it's not enough for you, obviously. I'll be back you can count on that, and don't be too supprise on how I make my entrance.
No longer your friend,
Serena Tsukino
I dropped by Raye's temple and left it with Chad, and told him to hand it to Raye. I went back to my new apartment to put everything in place. I was so tired afterwards that I collapsed on the bed and drifted off to sleep. ~Next day at Raye's Temple~
"Where is that Meatball head? I told her to meet us here at 12 pm on Saturday! She better be here soon." [ Obviously somebody forgot to give Raye the letter.] Thirty minutes later " So Amy why do you think we haven't had a new enemy in months?" "I don't know Lita, maybe they are waiting until we get off guard. I'm still scanning for evil vibes on my computer, so good so far." Chad finally remembers, so he knocks on Raye's door. "Chad, go away I'll..." "But Raye it's important, a letter from Serena," Chad interrupted. 'Why would Serena write a letter instead of coming here in person,' everyone thought. Raye was the first to recover and asked him when he got the letter.
"Yesterday...Why?" "You mean to tell me that you had the letter since yesterday and wait until now to give it to me!!" As she ran after him threatening to hurt him. Everyone sweatdropped, as Amy said, "Raye calm down and read the letter." "Oh ya,"as she stopped chasing a really scared Chad, who side in relieve when she stopped. "I'll call Darien, it's to him too, said Raye." "Already did," said Mina looking at everyone proudly. Darien walked in just then. " What's up girls, did something happen to Serena?" They quickly read the letter and everyone looked down in shame. All of a sudden a scream was heard from outside of the temple. Everyone quickly transformed as they headed toward the scream. Sailor Mercury tried to contact Sailor Moon but got no answer. The monster was an ice figure of a giant, and he was shooting ice everywhere. The scouts appeared, Mars with her mars fire ignite blasted at the monster distracting it and making it angrier. Venus cresent beam smash! Even Jupiter's combo with Venus didn't work. Mercury typed furiously at her computer to no prevail. Tuxedo Masked made a supprised entrance distracting the monster long enough for the four girls to combine their powers
and dusted the monster. As everyone was about to leave, they heard a voice. "We'll be back Sailor Scouts!" The shadow was watching the whole time to study the Scout's moves to find a way to destroy them.
To be continue.....
Read it please, don't let the promise of depression scare you. I just read so many fanfics with happy endings so I decided to write something different. I will continue to write if comments are sent and if someone wants me to continue.