This is my 4th invader zim story that I have written, please review and please like it.
Zim and Dib's war
"ahh, Gir, it is a lovely afternoon and I don't want to do anything but relax, what about you gir?"
*gir laughs* "I plan to watch the dirty monkey show."
"TYPICAL!! I knew that you were going to say that!"
Soooo, just hearing about that monkey made Zim mad. He went down to his lab and started to make something that would destroy Dib.
"Oh dang, I left my most important tool up where Gir is!! Oh no! Who knows what could happen!"
"GIRRRRRR! Where is my tool?"
"Oh, you mean your hot dog?"
"HOT DOG??? Well, it might be shaped like one, BUT IT'S NOT A HOT DOG! IT'S A VERY IMPORTANT TOOL THAT I NEED TO USE RIGHT NOW!"
"oh, i understand, well, I think it went down my body, because I thought that it was a silver hot dog! Heehee"
"YOU ATE MY TOOL?????? Great, just great!"
So, Zim stomped angrily back to his lap when suddenly, it hit him! The perfect plan tp destroy Dib! Zim would just disguise him as a mailman or something and go to Dib's house and then he would hypnotize him into being his slave!
"Why am I so amazing?"
He asked himself
~meanwhile at Dib's house~
"gaz!!! I want you to bring me a sandwhich! I can't get up!"
"You are a lazy pig, Dib! I am wishing right now that you were never born!"
"GAZ! WAIT! You never brought me my sandwich! grrrr"
Meanwhile, while Gaz was playing her gameboy like thing, Dib was thinking of a plan to destroy the green headed kid, also known as ZIM. Dib had man many ways to destroy him, he just had to CHOOSE one.
*ding dong* (at dib's house)
"ooh, I'll get it!"
"HUH? Um, are you a pizza boy?"
"ummmm, why YES! I am a pizza boy!"
"Now, on the count of 3, you, Dib, will be my personal slave!"
"1.......2........3!!"
~in a weird voice tone, robot like voice~
"I am under you command, I, Dib, will serve your every command and will destroy you!"
"what???? I programed this stupid hypnosis thing to hypnotize, not to destroy me!"
"HAH HAH! ZIM! You really thought that your penny tied on a string would hypnotize me? I don't think so! Now, I am going to use my alien handcuffs! You escaped it on the day of *skool* but you won't escape now! AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!!!!!!!! *laughs for a short while...more like 5 minutes!*
"ZIM? Where did you go? ZIM? Oh DARN! I was so close to capturing him! UGHGUHG, I have to learn not to laugh that much when I am very close to suceeding!"
But where did Zim really go? Hmmm, most TYPICAL place. his lab. Zim was trying to create some sort of robot that would destroy Dib.
Soon, then it turned Saturday.It was turing to Spring Break, they wouldn't have to go to Skool for the whole next week.(Think how happy that will make Ms.Bitters!)Kids from his skool all came out to play and Zim was in the field secretly hiding from all the kids and he was in the back of the field so no one would find him.
"Ahh, finally, I am done with my big robot thing. When trouble hits me, I'll just press this button and my big robot thing will let me inside and I will be safe from attacks! AHAHA, my most best invention yet!"
~dib speaking
"AHAHAHHAHA! I have completed my alien finder! If zim is ever outside his house,I can find him with this! AHAHHAHA! Oh yeah, my real invention is the new and improved robot thing! I can protect myself from harm! AHAHAHAH! Zim won't be able to hide from me now!"
~Dib outside trying to locate zim~
*beep beep beep!!!*
"My thing has found Zim! Now, thing!, bring me to Zim now! AHAHAHAH!"
~meanwhile in the field~
"Hmmm, these flowers are pretty! PRETTY PATHETIC! What are these colorful things doing on a planet like this? Wait a minute! This planet is stinky, and absurd. So who cares is FFFFFFFFFlowers are on the planet!"
~dib comes~
"ZIM!"
"There you are! I have been looking all over for you! I will finally capture you now and send you to mysterious mysteries!"
"oh no, dib is here! But, I do not have fear, I have my big robor to protect me from all kinds of harm! AHAHHAHHA!"
*computer talking*
~activiting robot now, prepare for destruction!~
"ahahahahah,since I am in my robot now, nothing can harm me!"
Then something bad happened,(for those of you who really like Dib, like me! He will be alright after this) Zim, with all his robot might, kicked Dib when Dib had no protection! He kicked Dib right in the face and Dib fell to the ground unconcious......
Did you people like that story? Please tell me so and I will make my next story!
Zim and Dib's war
"ahh, Gir, it is a lovely afternoon and I don't want to do anything but relax, what about you gir?"
*gir laughs* "I plan to watch the dirty monkey show."
"TYPICAL!! I knew that you were going to say that!"
Soooo, just hearing about that monkey made Zim mad. He went down to his lab and started to make something that would destroy Dib.
"Oh dang, I left my most important tool up where Gir is!! Oh no! Who knows what could happen!"
"GIRRRRRR! Where is my tool?"
"Oh, you mean your hot dog?"
"HOT DOG??? Well, it might be shaped like one, BUT IT'S NOT A HOT DOG! IT'S A VERY IMPORTANT TOOL THAT I NEED TO USE RIGHT NOW!"
"oh, i understand, well, I think it went down my body, because I thought that it was a silver hot dog! Heehee"
"YOU ATE MY TOOL?????? Great, just great!"
So, Zim stomped angrily back to his lap when suddenly, it hit him! The perfect plan tp destroy Dib! Zim would just disguise him as a mailman or something and go to Dib's house and then he would hypnotize him into being his slave!
"Why am I so amazing?"
He asked himself
~meanwhile at Dib's house~
"gaz!!! I want you to bring me a sandwhich! I can't get up!"
"You are a lazy pig, Dib! I am wishing right now that you were never born!"
"GAZ! WAIT! You never brought me my sandwich! grrrr"
Meanwhile, while Gaz was playing her gameboy like thing, Dib was thinking of a plan to destroy the green headed kid, also known as ZIM. Dib had man many ways to destroy him, he just had to CHOOSE one.
*ding dong* (at dib's house)
"ooh, I'll get it!"
"HUH? Um, are you a pizza boy?"
"ummmm, why YES! I am a pizza boy!"
"Now, on the count of 3, you, Dib, will be my personal slave!"
"1.......2........3!!"
~in a weird voice tone, robot like voice~
"I am under you command, I, Dib, will serve your every command and will destroy you!"
"what???? I programed this stupid hypnosis thing to hypnotize, not to destroy me!"
"HAH HAH! ZIM! You really thought that your penny tied on a string would hypnotize me? I don't think so! Now, I am going to use my alien handcuffs! You escaped it on the day of *skool* but you won't escape now! AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!!!!!!!! *laughs for a short while...more like 5 minutes!*
"ZIM? Where did you go? ZIM? Oh DARN! I was so close to capturing him! UGHGUHG, I have to learn not to laugh that much when I am very close to suceeding!"
But where did Zim really go? Hmmm, most TYPICAL place. his lab. Zim was trying to create some sort of robot that would destroy Dib.
Soon, then it turned Saturday.It was turing to Spring Break, they wouldn't have to go to Skool for the whole next week.(Think how happy that will make Ms.Bitters!)Kids from his skool all came out to play and Zim was in the field secretly hiding from all the kids and he was in the back of the field so no one would find him.
"Ahh, finally, I am done with my big robot thing. When trouble hits me, I'll just press this button and my big robot thing will let me inside and I will be safe from attacks! AHAHA, my most best invention yet!"
~dib speaking
"AHAHAHHAHA! I have completed my alien finder! If zim is ever outside his house,I can find him with this! AHAHHAHA! Oh yeah, my real invention is the new and improved robot thing! I can protect myself from harm! AHAHAHAH! Zim won't be able to hide from me now!"
~Dib outside trying to locate zim~
*beep beep beep!!!*
"My thing has found Zim! Now, thing!, bring me to Zim now! AHAHAHAH!"
~meanwhile in the field~
"Hmmm, these flowers are pretty! PRETTY PATHETIC! What are these colorful things doing on a planet like this? Wait a minute! This planet is stinky, and absurd. So who cares is FFFFFFFFFlowers are on the planet!"
~dib comes~
"ZIM!"
"There you are! I have been looking all over for you! I will finally capture you now and send you to mysterious mysteries!"
"oh no, dib is here! But, I do not have fear, I have my big robor to protect me from all kinds of harm! AHAHHAHHA!"
*computer talking*
~activiting robot now, prepare for destruction!~
"ahahahahah,since I am in my robot now, nothing can harm me!"
Then something bad happened,(for those of you who really like Dib, like me! He will be alright after this) Zim, with all his robot might, kicked Dib when Dib had no protection! He kicked Dib right in the face and Dib fell to the ground unconcious......
Did you people like that story? Please tell me so and I will make my next story!