OK I decided to write the fight scene over again. It wasn't very descriptive so it was boring. I've changed a lot so here I go again:
Bartleby gave an evil smile and started to slowly walk towards the door. "It look's like your all alone now. No one's here to help you and most of all no one can here you scream!" Bartleby told her and ran towards the door.
Mya slammed it in his face and heard the thud as he hit the door. She quickly got up and tried to run but he had already opened the door and had pulled the carpet that was covering the wooden hall floor out from under her. Mya fell to the floor with a loud thud but she quickly got back up and ran into her room. She knew that she always hid a baseball bat under her mattress for protection. She pulled off her mattress and grabbed the metal bat that was now exposed. She her hands into the perfect spot on it so she could hit Bartleby nice and hard right on the jaw if she's lucky. She ran outside of her room and stopped. Bartleby was standing there with the same evil smile on his face and the knife in his hand. She did a practice swing and he laughed, "Oh look she's got a bat, I'm really scared now! Do you really think your any match for me, Mya?"
Mya walked towards him and swung the bat knocking the knife out of hand. "Yes I actually do!"
Bartleby tried to jump for the knife but Mya swung the bat again and he backed away. Mya picked up the knife and threw it into her room. "If you want it go and get it!"
Instead of going to get the knife Bartleby lunged forward towards Mya. She jumped out of the way before he could get her. He hit the wall and fell to the ground. Mya tried to swing at him again but this time he was ready. He grabbed the bat and ripped it out of her hands. Mya was out of ideas now, she was doomed.
Bartleby started to walk towards her. The plan that was running threw his head was simple, walk her to where the stairs are take a swing at her with the bat and boom she'll be falling down the stairs.
Mya just backed up trying to stay away from him. She didn't know his plan but she knew something was going threw his mind and it wasn't good.
He stopped and she stooped but she didn't know they were right in front of the stairs and that one swing from the bat would send her falling down the stairs. He gave her the evil smile again and swung the bat. It hit her in the head and she fell backwards and all the way downstairs to the bottom. She wasn't even affected by the hit or the fall down the stairs but for her it was still hard trying to get up.
Bartleby was now running down the stairs for her. She covered her head and hoped that either her father or Loki would come and save her. But they were no where in sight.
*I'm like a damsel in distress but where is my knight in shining armor? * Mya thought to herself and tried her best not to start crying. That would be the worst thing. You NEVER show your enemy tears, they will show no mercy.
"Well, it looks as if this might be the end for you, Mya." Bartleby said and grabbed one of Mya's wings. She heard it crack and immediately knew that he had broken it. Mya couldn't help it anymore, she started to cry and heard him laugh. "What a crybaby. It probably doesn't even hurt for you. You're an angel you can feel pain!" Bartleby said and twisted her wing. "Oh wait yes you can, does this hurt?" He twisted her wing again and she let out a little cry in pain.
Mya looked over to the kitchen and saw Kimmie coming towards Bartleby with the knife in his hand. Mya shook her head and Kimmie ran forwards and stabbed him in the back.
"That was for my mom!" Kimmie said and took the knife out, but was surprised when Bartleby just grabbed the bat and her in the head. She fell unconscious to the floor and Mya gasped.
"You shouldn't have done that!" Mya said and grabbed the knife out of Kimmie's hand.
She stabbed Bartleby and had a reason for each time she stabbed him, "This is for my mom, this is for Kimmie, and most of all this is for Loki!" She kept stabbing him for NO reason and finally she felt someone grab her hand and take away the knife. She turned around and looked the person, who was her father, in the eye. He pulled her into a hug and they sat like that in till they heard the police and the ambulance pull up outside.
Bartleby gave an evil smile and started to slowly walk towards the door. "It look's like your all alone now. No one's here to help you and most of all no one can here you scream!" Bartleby told her and ran towards the door.
Mya slammed it in his face and heard the thud as he hit the door. She quickly got up and tried to run but he had already opened the door and had pulled the carpet that was covering the wooden hall floor out from under her. Mya fell to the floor with a loud thud but she quickly got back up and ran into her room. She knew that she always hid a baseball bat under her mattress for protection. She pulled off her mattress and grabbed the metal bat that was now exposed. She her hands into the perfect spot on it so she could hit Bartleby nice and hard right on the jaw if she's lucky. She ran outside of her room and stopped. Bartleby was standing there with the same evil smile on his face and the knife in his hand. She did a practice swing and he laughed, "Oh look she's got a bat, I'm really scared now! Do you really think your any match for me, Mya?"
Mya walked towards him and swung the bat knocking the knife out of hand. "Yes I actually do!"
Bartleby tried to jump for the knife but Mya swung the bat again and he backed away. Mya picked up the knife and threw it into her room. "If you want it go and get it!"
Instead of going to get the knife Bartleby lunged forward towards Mya. She jumped out of the way before he could get her. He hit the wall and fell to the ground. Mya tried to swing at him again but this time he was ready. He grabbed the bat and ripped it out of her hands. Mya was out of ideas now, she was doomed.
Bartleby started to walk towards her. The plan that was running threw his head was simple, walk her to where the stairs are take a swing at her with the bat and boom she'll be falling down the stairs.
Mya just backed up trying to stay away from him. She didn't know his plan but she knew something was going threw his mind and it wasn't good.
He stopped and she stooped but she didn't know they were right in front of the stairs and that one swing from the bat would send her falling down the stairs. He gave her the evil smile again and swung the bat. It hit her in the head and she fell backwards and all the way downstairs to the bottom. She wasn't even affected by the hit or the fall down the stairs but for her it was still hard trying to get up.
Bartleby was now running down the stairs for her. She covered her head and hoped that either her father or Loki would come and save her. But they were no where in sight.
*I'm like a damsel in distress but where is my knight in shining armor? * Mya thought to herself and tried her best not to start crying. That would be the worst thing. You NEVER show your enemy tears, they will show no mercy.
"Well, it looks as if this might be the end for you, Mya." Bartleby said and grabbed one of Mya's wings. She heard it crack and immediately knew that he had broken it. Mya couldn't help it anymore, she started to cry and heard him laugh. "What a crybaby. It probably doesn't even hurt for you. You're an angel you can feel pain!" Bartleby said and twisted her wing. "Oh wait yes you can, does this hurt?" He twisted her wing again and she let out a little cry in pain.
Mya looked over to the kitchen and saw Kimmie coming towards Bartleby with the knife in his hand. Mya shook her head and Kimmie ran forwards and stabbed him in the back.
"That was for my mom!" Kimmie said and took the knife out, but was surprised when Bartleby just grabbed the bat and her in the head. She fell unconscious to the floor and Mya gasped.
"You shouldn't have done that!" Mya said and grabbed the knife out of Kimmie's hand.
She stabbed Bartleby and had a reason for each time she stabbed him, "This is for my mom, this is for Kimmie, and most of all this is for Loki!" She kept stabbing him for NO reason and finally she felt someone grab her hand and take away the knife. She turned around and looked the person, who was her father, in the eye. He pulled her into a hug and they sat like that in till they heard the police and the ambulance pull up outside.