This my first fanfic. I want you to tell me if it is good or if it totally stinks.

A New Evil

Trunks was sleeping peacefully in his bed. Suddenly he sensed something. He woke up and
tiptoed outside. His father, Vegeta, was dressed in Saiyan armorpreparing to go somewhere.
"Father, where are you going?" Trunks asked sleepily. "It's none of your business but it
won't hurt for you to know so I'll tell you, something strange is happening at a nearby town,
I've been sensing it for about an hour, now go back to sleep,boy." Vegeta said in his usual
grumpy way. "I'm coming with you Father!" Trunks demanded. "Be my guest, just don't get in
my way." Vegeta said.

"Hey, Gohan, Goten, wake up!" Goku nudged his sons awake. "Can you sense it?"Gohan was the
first to reply, " Yes, it... it's like something is terribly wrong.""Now that you mention it
I do sense something!" Goten exclaimed. "And it feels like it's gonna be a long night."

"Father, look, it's Goku!" Trunks exlaimed as they landed in the town. "Kakarot, why are you
and your foolish children here?" Vegeta said. Gohan spoke up, "Well, we've been sensing some
"activity" near here." Suddenly, Goten cried out and pointed, "Look over there, what is that
thing!" They all looked where Goten was pointing. Then, something came out of the shadows and
hit Trunks in the head, making him fly into a cliff. Goten rushed to his side. Something
sparked inside Vegeta. He remembered how Trunks had been killed this same way by Cell. Laughter
came from the shadows. They all stared in horror as they heard Cell's voice. "It... It can't
be!" Gohan cried. "Im...impos... impossible!" Was all Vegeta could manage to say.

The creature stepped forward from the shadows. "Wha...wha...what is it daddy?" Goten asked.
Goku spoke, "All I know is that it isn't Cell." The creature began to speak, " I was one of
Dr. Gero's plans but Android X was the one who completed me. Android X is, how can I put this,
X-terminated, hahahaha!" "From your poor humor and incessant blabbing who wouldn't know you
were one of Gero's creature?" Vegeta said in his sarcastic tone of voice. "Let's skip the
jabbering and start the fight!" Goten was crying now, "You monster! What kind of creature are
you?" The monstrous creature began, " I am the most powerful being in this universe, the
ultimate creation, in short you petty saiyans can call me Android #22!" "If you don't mind,
I'd like to fight first." Goku said looking at Vegeta. "Actually, I do mind! First, He kills my
son, then, he insults the saiyan race by calling us petty! So, Kakarot, I will fight first."

Android #22 watched as Vegeta powered up to a Super Saiyan. Vegeta began with his signature Big
Bang attack. When the dust cleared, #22 was gone. Vegeta turned around and saw the android
smirking at him. Then Vegeta looked at Trunks. His anger sparked and he ascended to level 2.
He continued the fight with the android. #22 used a Kamehameha on Vegeta who dodged and kicked
#22 in the face. Suddenly, a whirring sound was heard in the distance. A helicopter with the
words Capsule Corp on it approached. Bulma stepped out and ran to Trunks. #22 saw her and fired
a blast of energy right through her. "Mommy!" Bra came out of the spaceship but was caught in
the blast. Bulma and Bra collapsed in a heap on the ground. "Nnn...nooooooo!" Vegeta exploded
in anger. Thunder boomed and lightning flashed. Huge balls of hail smashed into the earth.
Gigantic thunderclouds formed and a downpour started. A bright aura appeared around Vegeta.
A red tail appeared and red hair covered Vegeta's body. His yellow hair turned black and his
power level soared.

#22 stared in horror as Vegeta continued to raise his power level. Suddenly, over the sound of
crashing thunder, a yell was heard. Gohan and Goku turned around and saw Krillen, Tien, Piccolo,
and Yamcha. Krillen saw Trunks and ran to him. "I'd give him a Sensu Bean but it will only work
if he's alive." Krillen announced. Goku spoke up, "I'll go get Dende to come and heal him."
Goku reappeared seconds later with Dende, who healed Trunks. Goten rejoiced when he saw that
Trunks had recovered. Dende also healed Bulma and Bra. Everyone returned their attention to the
battle once again. #22 was no match for Vegeta and he knew it. "Vegeta you are good, but you
have yet to see my true power, hahahahahaha!" #22 proclaimed. Just then #22 started to change,
he became a large lizard-like creature almost like cell but he had almost the same nature that
#17 and #18 had. His power rose and surpassed Vegeta's. He grabbed onto Vegeta by his tail and
threw him into a rock. He started to use a Kamehameha but Gohan jumped in front of him and the
blast shot him into Tien, knocking them both unconscience.

"Gohan!" Goku yelled as he powered up to a Super Saiyan. He flew towards #22 who threw him aside
like a rag doll. " Hey Goku, I know that Saiyans get stronger when they are mad so if I make you
mad, I might actually have a challenge. So, how 'bout I just kill your other son, Goten." #22
said as he sent a blast right into Goten's heart. "Nooooooooo! You monster, you're gonna regret
that!" Goku shouted as his anger rose. His yellow hair began to flash and then it grew all the
way down to his knees. He fired a Kamehameha right at #22 who knocked it away like it was
nothing. Vegeta finally spoke, "Kakarot, I hate to say it but we can't win unless we fuse."
"Right." Goku replied. They began the fusion dance and when they were done a bright glow
appeared. Gogita resumed the fight by firing a bunch of energy blasts into #22.

"Dende, if you heal Goten, we can fuse just like Goku and my father." Trunks pleaded desperately.
"Okay I'll do it." Dende replied. In a few moments Goten and Trunks had fused into Gotenks and
joined the fight. " Gotenks, we must end this now!" Gogita commanded. Gotenks and Gogita fired
a Kamehameha right through the monster and then they fired energy ball after energy ball at #22
just to make sure he didn't come back.

After summoning the dragon and wishing back all the people #22 had killed, the Z fighters
returned home.