I'm sorry this is not an update but a response to a VERY RUDE flame that I took to heart.
*gets on her soapbox* Well thanks for being so forward Serusama. Personally, next time anyone sends me a nice little flame like that, send in to my e-mail box. I dont like people that enjoy the story for what it is to read such a personal low and rude letter. But now, I have to protect myself in front of all my fans. Thank you very much for making me stoop to this level.
*clears her throat* "the plot is sorta unoriginal.(Nora Jemson's Full Circle comes to mind. The Saiyai-jin halfbreed idea has been used before.)"
For your 411, I've had this idea ever since I came interested in the characters you have seen so far ( Kakarott, Vegeta, Bardock, Piccolo etc. etc.) and therefore never took it from someone. I have visited Nora Jemson's page, saw that she already had the idea and thought about not doing it. Unfortunately, the link was NOT working, which made me extremely disappointed, and only encouraged me to write this story. The rest of her stories are not working as well.
Also, if this story is so unoriginal because mainly two authors have thought about it, then I guess we better take away all the fics ever made- they all come around the same ideas one point away. *claps to some construction workers* Okay boys! Take away the Trunks/Goten fics away! They've been used too much! Oh oh! Look at the 'mysterious Saiyan girl that survived from the blow up of their planet' stories! Better take them away too! All right boys, head out!
"You made a mistake on Bardock" - *sighs* I know that! But I need him to be a Saiyan scientist. You know why? BECAUSE HE IS SO DAMN SMART! Honestly people, where do you think Son Gohan got his intelligence? ChiChi? *puts a gun to her forehead and pulls the trigger* Goku? Sure he's smart but not in books and science. I dont blame Funimation for saying he was scientist...because you know what? They were thinking ahead, the what if things. Besides, Bardock knew scientists, even friends with them.
"the dialogue was very decent" - Why thank you. One compliment. Thanks anyway.
"You did little research on DBZ, since you named Kami's/Piccolo's form Kamiccolo, which isn't his name form. It also means he never became god." - If you have been reading, I have ALREADY made a story up to cover that completely and personally, it works perfectly with the story. Now, about the God thing, I never said he was. If I did, it was a typo. Otherwise, I would be naming the damn place Onni is staying at "Kamiccolo's Lookout". *gags silently* And then there would be Mr. Popo. Sorry guys, but he scares me. Just another reason why he aint 'God'. Whoever was God before died from the Saiyans attack. And I'll do some research about who he was just to make you happy okay?
" The story needs to either be rewritten or erase all together. AU or not, you need to recongize character backgrounds better before writing further into this story." - *fumes really bad now* Sure thing! Let me just click the delete button all right!?!?! Look bud, I'm glad you're trying to help but I feel like you just flamed me. AND THAT IS A BIG NO NO! SITA-CHAN DOES NOT LIKE FLAMES. Stories are not easy to write, especially when you are trying to please yourself and the fans. You can't just run around, finding new things every day especially when I came into Dragon Ball Z when the Ginyu Force was getting the crap kicked outta of them by Goku. Now I think I've done a pretty good job on this story, with lots of help from fans and I THINK YOU BETTER APPRICATE THINGS that people try to do. If you have a problem with this story, or my attitude towards your 'help' (*FLAME!*) then you can e-mail me right now and we can yell back and forth but I will no longer tolerate writing this defense letter. I'm very sorry to the fans who like this story, but when someone sends me my very first flame on a story that I love writing with all my heart, my defenses are going to come up. I really hope that this will never happen again.
So, Serusama, if you plan to send any more flames on my story that isn't finished explaining things, do it by e-mail. I would hate to make another thing like this again. Again, sorry to all my special fans and I understand if you do not want to continue the story. *jumps off her soapbox with a heavy sigh*
-Sita