Hi, I have ten minutes before my tennis lesson (like you care), so I am going to write a RTK fanfic

Hi, I have ten minutes before my tennis lesson (like you care), so I am going to write a RTK fanfic.  This is my first RTK fanfic so bear with me.

This is taken in the point of view of a foot solider of Liu Bei escorting Lu Su through the canyon (and later Lu Su dies because of an ambush)

I walked with my comrades through a treacherous canyon.  The rocks seemed to be bulging out and their menacing faces seem to be spelling death. 

I look over my commanding officer, Lu Su, he seemed to be nervous as well.  Suddenly, a barrage of arrows begin to fly from opposite directions of the canyon.  Ten arrows fly right towards Lu Su.

No!! He just got shot by many arrows that are still fly down.  A pandemonium of yells could be heard.  I quickly took over in a cave near by.  I know I should be protecting my commanding officer, but he is already dead.  Arrows continue to poor.  One of my friends got shot three times through his neck.  Red blood squirt out of his dying throat.  Around me, my fellow soldiers are dying while me, a craven coward just takes cover in a cave.  I feel guilty, but fear of dying overrides the guilt.

I decided to be some use to my dying army.  I ran for a bow lying on the ground and lunged for some arrows.  I got shot on the leg while running back to my cave.  Taking cover from my cave, I aimed for the enemy archers above. 

I shot one, and he fell from the cliff.  As he was falling, he caught on a few shape ledges and it tore his body into two.  I grimaced and aimed for another solider.

Finally, the enemy ambush left, and only about thirty solider remain.

You DON'T have to tell me that it sucks.... I can't think anything good about it, can you?