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A/N I didn't really think I'd be writing this so soon, but I did ask for three reviews and I got 14, so, this next chapter is about Lily, and why shes really pissed off today!
But first, I'd like to thank:
kaybanana: cause she was very enthusiastic when reviewing, thankyousomuch!.
FireSorceress: Because her prediction was right, Lily is the new neighbor.
Persephone: cause she was really cool when she reviewed and the poor girl only had one review on her story and it was a flame! Damn bastard...LOL
***ginnypotter***: for realizing that I suck at uploading, and pointing it out to me.
~*Musapha*Moodswing*~: for, you know, reviewing
Harry'sLostSister: for telling me that my story was rushed, and it was, I really wanted to get another story up!!
Shayla Black: for doing what she was suppose to be doing, reviewing!(Oh cripes I'm rhyming)
Lilly_Dee: I think I get the picture that my format is screwed ;)
Lily's friend*Jess: My friend Jess, the other Jess, since I'm Jess too. Thanx for the review!
~~Chickadee~~: FOR PUTTING ME ON HER FAVS LIST, YAY!
athenaemira: thanx for the enthusiamsm !!!
And i don't think I missed anybody, but if I did, you rule too! Okay, on with the story.

Lily Evans sat in an empty room, staring at her wall, mad at her parents, mad at the world actually.
"Life is screwed," she said aloud to herself. Why had her parents made her move? She was so happy in America, she had a million friends, and everything! Now she just lived in bloody old England.(NO OFFENSE TO ANY ENGLISH PEOPLE! I LOVE ENGLAND EVEN THOUGH I'VE NEVER BEEN!. Lily is just pissed right now, and shes mad at England, but she'll luv it later)
And since when had she been saying bloody? I guess I just picked it up from somewhere, she thought. The thing Lily really missed about America was her boyfriend. Christopher. Her first boyfriend in her entire life, even though she was only 11, and then she had to leave him. But, she thought ruefully, he was a jerk. Why as soon as she told him that she was moving he said that we should break up. Just like that! The next day at school he was seen with another girl. Alayne. She was prettier than Lily, or thats what she thought. She had blonde, flowing hair, and bright blue eyes, and a very slender body. She was perfect, and Lily wasn't. She had flowing hair too, only hers was red. She had bright eyes too, only hers were green. A beautiful emrald green her Mom, Cindy, had told her.
"HELLO IN THERE!" A voice yelled so loud from behind her bedroom door she jumped. Then she realized it was just Petunia. She got up from the floor and opened the door.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT!?" She yelled back, right in her face. She wasn't trying to be mean, just giving her back what she gave Lily.
"Yo chill Lils," Petunia said, backing away from the door a bit.
"Sorry," Lily said pouting with her arms crossed.
"Yeah, anyways, Mom says we should have a party, and invite all the neighbors and stuff, but she wanted the familys opinion first."
A party? Well, maybe it wouldn't be so bad. "Yeah Okay, I'm in favor for it."
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"Well, well well," Mrs Black muttered to herself. "Oh Jack, deary!" She called through the kitchen window to Mr Black, who was outside and dersperately trying to get the blasted lawnmower to work (Hey, they had to do SOMETHING with their lawns, but the mower did all the lawnmowing by itself) .
"Yes, Chrissy?" He called back, his voice a little exasperated.
"Dear, the Evans, you know, the muggles next door, they've invited us to some kind of house warming party."
"Great..." Mr. Black said sarcastically.
"I think we should go!" She reinforced happily.
"Yes well," Mr. Black started, then he saw the look of anticipation on her face and gave in. "Hmm, I guess we could stop by for a while..."
"Thank you honey! Oh and it does say we can extend this invatation, do you think we should invite the Lupins?" (A/N, I was gonna say Potter, the I realized that they are neighbors too, they live a house away! So this is where James and Sirius meet Remus)
" The Lupins?" He asked as he finaly got the machine to work. He had a triumphant look on his face
"Didn't I tell you about Jessica, and her family? I met her a Magic Magies Yoga."
"I think you let that one slip Chris," He said, dusting the dirt off his pants and starting back inside.
"Oh yes, well, anyways, they have a son about Siri's age, so I think it would be nice to invite them, get to know them a little better." Chrysanthemum explained.
"Great, another friend to help Sirius reek havoc about Gordrics Circle," Jack Black stepped into the kitchen and gave his wife a kiss on the cheek. "But whatever darling,"
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"So James, my parents are having going to this party at the muggles house, you coming?"
"Yeah I guess.." said James.
"My Mum reckons they've got a daughter our age." James continued.
Sirius's ears perked up. "Cool! Finaly..... Anywas, Mum says that her Toga friend or whatever has a boy our age."
"Hmm.... Maybe this'll be more fun than I though," James wondered aloud. Sirius smirked. Hopefully, by then end of tomorrow night, he would have a girlfriend. That is, he thought again, if shes pretty.
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"Hello! How are you? So great of you to come..." This was how Cindy Evans, and her husband, Taylor Evans, greated each one of their guests. Her party was more full than she expected. When the Blacks arrived, they were accompianied by the Potters.
"Oh Chrysanthemum, Jack, you made it! And you too Kelly, Harry, wonderful..." They greated one another as they stepped into the house. It wasn't exactly a sixties pad, but there was some coloured lights, and LOTS of popuri. The mothers, decided they should have a mother to mother talk in the next room with the rest of the female guests, and headed off, leaving the men to talk about the ministry and things like that. James and Sirius just kind of stood there, ackward.
"What did your our Mums say we were not suppose to do at this party?" James asked, looking around for something interesting, besides the fact that everything in their was muggle made. But it didn't amuse him very much.
Sirius put on a high pitched voice and imatated his Mom, "Now Sirius, their is no sneering, no insiteful giggling, NO MAGIC, no talking to loud, no making fun of anybody, no burning up ANY part of their house, no terrorizing....."
"So basically," James cut him off, getting the point. "Our Mums said, no fun?"
"Yup, thats about right," Sirius said glumily.
Cindy came out of the "womens" room for some more refreshments when she noticed the two boys.
"Oh boys," She said to them. "If your bored, Lily is upstairs in her room, third one to the left with Remus, and the refreshments are in the kitchen, okay?" They nodded and headed up the stairs, passing a rather peculiar machine that had music coming from it. They looked at eachother and shrugged. Then they reached the third door on the left, and opened the door.
There sat a girl with wavy red hair, and laughing green eyes. In fact, she was laughing, lauging with the boys who sat next to her on the floor. Sandy brown hair, bright brown eyes, and flushed cheeks, and a wizard robe. Which Lily though was quite strange. Although, he did look kind of good in them, that is, according to Lily. Lily looked up as she heard the door creak open.
"Hi!" She said. They nodded, unsure. Strange, she thought, noticing what James and Sirius were wearing, does everyone in the neighbourhood wear robes? "Oh, this is Remus, and i'm Lily."
"I'm Sirius, and thats James," Sirius introduced, taking a bow. Lily giggled.
"Charmed," she said.
"So, what were you guys laughing about?" Sirius asked, who was always in for a good laugh.
"Oh, Remus, he had the funniest joke about a blonde!"(No offense to the blondes out there, 75 percent of my friends are blonde, that is all) Lily told him the joke, and they cracked up.
"So Remus, your Mums a friend of our Mums, right?" James said, trying to start a conversation.
"Yeah, some kind of Toga or another..." They laughed.
THis looked like a starting of a beautiful friendship.
(OH yeah, I didn't forget, Sirius's thoughts on Lils)
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Sirius's POV
We walked into the room, I wasn't nervous, I was used to girls, and in some strange sense I knew how they thought. But when I walked into that room, and saw her face, i knew it.
I, Sirius Christopher Black, was introuble.
I was inlove.
A/n, hehehehehehe, next i'll write James's thoughts. I dunno if this appealed oring to you cause I kind of thought I was losing my touch.
HOw'd you like it? Please review, I love em to bits, and if you have a prob with that, then I don't care cause its not my prob. There will barely be any swearing cause I have a friend named Jess, and she doesn't really like swearing, so there might be a D word or something, but nothing big.
THankyou everybody who reviewed, and this time, I'm asking for 5 more reviews b4 I keep on writting. Even though, I'll probaly write more anyways even if I Don't have that many reviews. Sorry if there are any spelling mistakes, this darn application doesn't have spell check! Anyways, review!