This is my first attempt at a fanfic. I am a huge fan of L/J stories and I figured why not try and make my own.
Please don't be too hard on me. After all this is just a beginning, feel free to
give constructive criticism, please don't flame me-I would be forced to laugh at you if you do.
Disclaimer: All characters that you recognize in this story do not and will never belong to me-they are the creations
on the one and only J.K. Rowling. All other characters are mine-she can have them if she wants them.
Read, Review, and enjoy my first attempt at a fanfic.
Before Beginning, I would like to thank for everyone for his or her kind review. Thanks! I will make sure I keep it
goin for ya!
The Good Ol Days: A Tale of the Hogwarts Marauders
Chapter Five: Summer Days part 2
Lily, James, Remus, Sirius, Peter, Sara, and Susan spent a lot of their time that summer break just trying to stay out of trouble. They played pranks on everyone around them and they were a menace to society. They had a blast.
One particular night when the breeze was blowing gently across the moonlight sky the group was playing dare, naturally this was just the game to make things interesting in the Potter household...
"Lily, I dare you to invite Severus Snape to your birthday party the day after tomorrow" said Sirius with a wicked grin.
Lily, while grimacing slightly, replied by saying " Well, alright, but I dare you to invite Katrina Hopkins as your DATE!" and she began giggling madly.
" Well, ok, I will make a deal, how about both of those dares are dropped eh?" Sirius asked.
"GOOD."
"GOOD."
"Okay, umm James, I am gonna dare you next. Umm. I dare you to... Kiss Lily! Not one of those little packs, I want a real French Kiss-at least 20 seconds" Susan laughed as she said this
"If you don't do it I get to make your hair bright pink all year next year!"
" Ok, OK, I will do it."
James moved closer to lily, he looked her straight in the eyes as he bent his head and closed his lips on hers. Slowly, both began to kiss freely, without even noticing it. Lily would always remember her first kiss, because it wasn't extravagant or wonderful-it was just a simple innocent kiss that was done on a dare, but oh how it would forever alter her perception of James.
He pulled away 20 seconds later and both he and Lily knew there was something different, not bad, just different.
" Someone has a C_R_U_S_H!" Sirius said while laughing madly
blushing crimson both said "Do NOT!" at the same time, which only proved to make them blush more furiously.
The rest of the summer passed without event. Lily and James were still the closest of friends and they could still tell each other everything and trust it not to get passed around. The rest of the group had forgotten that fateful dare and everyone was happy. The day they arrived back at kings cross was a wonderful day indeed, they were all very glad to be going back to what they had soon considered home. Hogwarts had never seen such a group of trouble makers in all its history.
Well, I am sorry it is so short. I will write more soon. I would like to give a special thanks to Lily Girl and all the other wonderful people who have added me to their fav authors list. It means so much to me. Thank you, all of my wonderful reviewers. I would never have kept it going this far had it not been for your reviews. I hope this chapter didn't suck. I tried my best. The next chapter will be better, I promise. I am experiencing writers block. ANY IDEAS? Feel free to give me some.
Love Ya,
Lilly_DEE
Please don't be too hard on me. After all this is just a beginning, feel free to
give constructive criticism, please don't flame me-I would be forced to laugh at you if you do.
Disclaimer: All characters that you recognize in this story do not and will never belong to me-they are the creations
on the one and only J.K. Rowling. All other characters are mine-she can have them if she wants them.
Read, Review, and enjoy my first attempt at a fanfic.
Before Beginning, I would like to thank for everyone for his or her kind review. Thanks! I will make sure I keep it
goin for ya!
The Good Ol Days: A Tale of the Hogwarts Marauders
Chapter Five: Summer Days part 2
Lily, James, Remus, Sirius, Peter, Sara, and Susan spent a lot of their time that summer break just trying to stay out of trouble. They played pranks on everyone around them and they were a menace to society. They had a blast.
One particular night when the breeze was blowing gently across the moonlight sky the group was playing dare, naturally this was just the game to make things interesting in the Potter household...
"Lily, I dare you to invite Severus Snape to your birthday party the day after tomorrow" said Sirius with a wicked grin.
Lily, while grimacing slightly, replied by saying " Well, alright, but I dare you to invite Katrina Hopkins as your DATE!" and she began giggling madly.
" Well, ok, I will make a deal, how about both of those dares are dropped eh?" Sirius asked.
"GOOD."
"GOOD."
"Okay, umm James, I am gonna dare you next. Umm. I dare you to... Kiss Lily! Not one of those little packs, I want a real French Kiss-at least 20 seconds" Susan laughed as she said this
"If you don't do it I get to make your hair bright pink all year next year!"
" Ok, OK, I will do it."
James moved closer to lily, he looked her straight in the eyes as he bent his head and closed his lips on hers. Slowly, both began to kiss freely, without even noticing it. Lily would always remember her first kiss, because it wasn't extravagant or wonderful-it was just a simple innocent kiss that was done on a dare, but oh how it would forever alter her perception of James.
He pulled away 20 seconds later and both he and Lily knew there was something different, not bad, just different.
" Someone has a C_R_U_S_H!" Sirius said while laughing madly
blushing crimson both said "Do NOT!" at the same time, which only proved to make them blush more furiously.
The rest of the summer passed without event. Lily and James were still the closest of friends and they could still tell each other everything and trust it not to get passed around. The rest of the group had forgotten that fateful dare and everyone was happy. The day they arrived back at kings cross was a wonderful day indeed, they were all very glad to be going back to what they had soon considered home. Hogwarts had never seen such a group of trouble makers in all its history.
Well, I am sorry it is so short. I will write more soon. I would like to give a special thanks to Lily Girl and all the other wonderful people who have added me to their fav authors list. It means so much to me. Thank you, all of my wonderful reviewers. I would never have kept it going this far had it not been for your reviews. I hope this chapter didn't suck. I tried my best. The next chapter will be better, I promise. I am experiencing writers block. ANY IDEAS? Feel free to give me some.
Love Ya,
Lilly_DEE