Thanks for the reviews.
To the dickhead who left this review -
No offence, but this dumb. Nothing happens, it's boring, and the characters aren't the same as in the real books. You should add action and build a PLOT. (Um...in case you didn't know, it has a beginning with some action which builds up to a climax where the big action takes place and then it sort of cools off. As of now in this story, there is no action WHATSOEVER. IMPROVE!) Okay, not much else, but Ginny/Draco is used way to often and TOTALLY sucks. I'm not surprised you get C's in English.
Did I put this fic under action I think not. If you had bothered to read what I said this is just a small start and an introduction to the story. I think its a bit better then doing a 10-word prologue. Also who cares if you don't like g/d. It is my story. Also, did I claim to be J.K Rowling. No they're her characters and I don't know how to write them exactly like hers, besides they are older. I do agree with you on one thing I am surprised I don't get D's in English.
To the people that said there was no Ron. Well I forgot about him. For some reason I hate him at ff.net or any other sort of fan fiction. I will however give him a small part.
: )
Tap. Tap.
I like to get a good nights rest but it is extremely hard to when you can hear tap, tap pounding in your ear making sleep difficult. It is also cold. My bed is comfortable and warm whereas outside the bed is cold. I prefer to sleep with little on and this prevents me from climbing out of bed and answering the owl. Wizards really should get telephones.
Slippers. I need some comfortable, cosy slippers. Maybe I will ask mum to make me some when I visit her. Ah I see a robe on the chair now I have no excuse to stay in bed.
I fumble with the tie hoping to keep as much cool air our as possible. Oh it's Ceres, Ron's new owl. Poor little Pigwig died a short time ago. I think that's the reason Ron took off on a holiday. He has been gone for 2 weeks now. Hermione thinks he has found someone. It was around the same time as he and Justin broke up. They have an on and off relationship. It was quite a shock when Ron announced his love for Justin. Mum really likes him. Mum too George's death really hard, but it has brought Hermione and her closer to each other and she makes a great grandmother to Georgia.
I opened the window and quickly shut it almost taking a few feathers from poor Ceres. The letter looks long and Ron isn't much of a letter writer. Something big must be happening. My fingers are so cold they don't want to open the letter oh well.
Finally I got the tie undone and unrolled the parchment.
Dear Charlie,
Hi. Italy is great and so serene and beautiful. There is so much to do and I have hardly had time to sit down. How are things there? I got an owl from Hermione and Georgia a week ago but that is it. Can't you spend a few minutes writing to your brother? Nah just kidding man.
I know it may be hard to believe but guess whom I met yesterday. Can you guess? Justin. After that stupid breakup he asked mum where I went and came and visited me. Tell Hermione for me. She will love to hear the news. It's wonderful we went on a romantic cruise yesterday and then to dinner. It was so romantic. I keep on repeating the word romantic. Scary.
I got this ridiculous owl from Ginny the other day asking me for some names and numbers of handsome men. She wants them for some fashion show or something. Made me laugh for a good hour. She said you refused but Fred was quite happy to do a bit of modelling. I think he wants to sabotage her plans. Could you pass on a letter to him. It's about some business. Just a market for joke stores in Italy.
Otherwise there is no more news and Justin is calling me. He wants me to be his tour guide. Anyway give my love to the family and tell Georgia I got her this great present.
Love,
Ron
Well Ron and Justin are back on. Maybe I am doomed to spend the rest of my life on my own. I hate depressing thoughts like these. I have to do something to clear my mind. A shower will make me feel better. A hot shower helps soothe my nerves.
I am half way through washing my hair, it is getting quite long. I can hear someone knocking on the door. Oh well I had better answer the door. It is probably Ginny. Lucky I didn't slip in the puddle of water on the floor. I grabbed the only towel and wrapped it around my waist.
'Ok, ok I am coming,' I yelled running towards the door the knocks were becoming more and more impatient.
I flicked the lock off and opened the door to reveal a harassed looking Hermione and a sleepy Georgia.
'Charlie they have moved the mission closer you'll have to pack now. We need to meet Remus in his office in 20 minutes. Harry is going to meet us their in a few days,' Hermione explained.
'Why so early.'
'They have found the death eaters are taking muggle transportation and we have to follow them. Georgia and I are packed and ready to go.'
'Ok just let me get dressed. Maybe you could make some coffee,' I asked.
'Alright just hurry,'
I must pack out some muggle clothes. I have many, as it is rather inconvenient to look after dragons in a flimsy robe. Anyway it only takes me a few minutes to pack. Remus will provide us with muggle money anyway.
'Ok let's apparate,' I said to Hermione,
In a few seconds I was in front of Remus's office as was Hermione and Georgia. I knocked on his door but stumbled as he opened the door at the same time.
'Ok you guy's ready to go. Hermione please brief him on the mission. Mandy will be your babysitter and will meet you there. Otherwise everything is taken care of. Just use this portkey to the airport and there will be a person to guide you. Good luck and have a safe trip.'
'Ok,' was my answer, I am still half asleep.
I turned to Hermione who was carrying Georgia and had shrunk her suitcases. I did the same then touched the portkey, feeling it pull me to another place. I saw Hermione in front of me, standing in a small bare room.
'Hello. You'll need this for your suitcases. They need to be of muggle standards and I will direct you to your flight,' said a friendly witch.
'Off to another adventure, Hermione,'
'Yeah,'
She sounded a bit apprehensive. Probably worried about Georgia. I followed the guide who was helpfully pushing the trolley while I examined my surroundings. A huge building full of different looking muggles.
'Hermione are flights scary,' I asked.
'No not really, besides they have vomit bags,' she replied laughing.
Good thing I have a strong stomach.
: )
Where should they go? What should Ron's gift be? Romance will start happening soon and I will attempt to write in Ginny or Draco's pov to do their side of the story. Again thanks for the reviews.
To the dickhead who left this review -
No offence, but this dumb. Nothing happens, it's boring, and the characters aren't the same as in the real books. You should add action and build a PLOT. (Um...in case you didn't know, it has a beginning with some action which builds up to a climax where the big action takes place and then it sort of cools off. As of now in this story, there is no action WHATSOEVER. IMPROVE!) Okay, not much else, but Ginny/Draco is used way to often and TOTALLY sucks. I'm not surprised you get C's in English.
Did I put this fic under action I think not. If you had bothered to read what I said this is just a small start and an introduction to the story. I think its a bit better then doing a 10-word prologue. Also who cares if you don't like g/d. It is my story. Also, did I claim to be J.K Rowling. No they're her characters and I don't know how to write them exactly like hers, besides they are older. I do agree with you on one thing I am surprised I don't get D's in English.
To the people that said there was no Ron. Well I forgot about him. For some reason I hate him at ff.net or any other sort of fan fiction. I will however give him a small part.
: )
Tap. Tap.
I like to get a good nights rest but it is extremely hard to when you can hear tap, tap pounding in your ear making sleep difficult. It is also cold. My bed is comfortable and warm whereas outside the bed is cold. I prefer to sleep with little on and this prevents me from climbing out of bed and answering the owl. Wizards really should get telephones.
Slippers. I need some comfortable, cosy slippers. Maybe I will ask mum to make me some when I visit her. Ah I see a robe on the chair now I have no excuse to stay in bed.
I fumble with the tie hoping to keep as much cool air our as possible. Oh it's Ceres, Ron's new owl. Poor little Pigwig died a short time ago. I think that's the reason Ron took off on a holiday. He has been gone for 2 weeks now. Hermione thinks he has found someone. It was around the same time as he and Justin broke up. They have an on and off relationship. It was quite a shock when Ron announced his love for Justin. Mum really likes him. Mum too George's death really hard, but it has brought Hermione and her closer to each other and she makes a great grandmother to Georgia.
I opened the window and quickly shut it almost taking a few feathers from poor Ceres. The letter looks long and Ron isn't much of a letter writer. Something big must be happening. My fingers are so cold they don't want to open the letter oh well.
Finally I got the tie undone and unrolled the parchment.
Dear Charlie,
Hi. Italy is great and so serene and beautiful. There is so much to do and I have hardly had time to sit down. How are things there? I got an owl from Hermione and Georgia a week ago but that is it. Can't you spend a few minutes writing to your brother? Nah just kidding man.
I know it may be hard to believe but guess whom I met yesterday. Can you guess? Justin. After that stupid breakup he asked mum where I went and came and visited me. Tell Hermione for me. She will love to hear the news. It's wonderful we went on a romantic cruise yesterday and then to dinner. It was so romantic. I keep on repeating the word romantic. Scary.
I got this ridiculous owl from Ginny the other day asking me for some names and numbers of handsome men. She wants them for some fashion show or something. Made me laugh for a good hour. She said you refused but Fred was quite happy to do a bit of modelling. I think he wants to sabotage her plans. Could you pass on a letter to him. It's about some business. Just a market for joke stores in Italy.
Otherwise there is no more news and Justin is calling me. He wants me to be his tour guide. Anyway give my love to the family and tell Georgia I got her this great present.
Love,
Ron
Well Ron and Justin are back on. Maybe I am doomed to spend the rest of my life on my own. I hate depressing thoughts like these. I have to do something to clear my mind. A shower will make me feel better. A hot shower helps soothe my nerves.
I am half way through washing my hair, it is getting quite long. I can hear someone knocking on the door. Oh well I had better answer the door. It is probably Ginny. Lucky I didn't slip in the puddle of water on the floor. I grabbed the only towel and wrapped it around my waist.
'Ok, ok I am coming,' I yelled running towards the door the knocks were becoming more and more impatient.
I flicked the lock off and opened the door to reveal a harassed looking Hermione and a sleepy Georgia.
'Charlie they have moved the mission closer you'll have to pack now. We need to meet Remus in his office in 20 minutes. Harry is going to meet us their in a few days,' Hermione explained.
'Why so early.'
'They have found the death eaters are taking muggle transportation and we have to follow them. Georgia and I are packed and ready to go.'
'Ok just let me get dressed. Maybe you could make some coffee,' I asked.
'Alright just hurry,'
I must pack out some muggle clothes. I have many, as it is rather inconvenient to look after dragons in a flimsy robe. Anyway it only takes me a few minutes to pack. Remus will provide us with muggle money anyway.
'Ok let's apparate,' I said to Hermione,
In a few seconds I was in front of Remus's office as was Hermione and Georgia. I knocked on his door but stumbled as he opened the door at the same time.
'Ok you guy's ready to go. Hermione please brief him on the mission. Mandy will be your babysitter and will meet you there. Otherwise everything is taken care of. Just use this portkey to the airport and there will be a person to guide you. Good luck and have a safe trip.'
'Ok,' was my answer, I am still half asleep.
I turned to Hermione who was carrying Georgia and had shrunk her suitcases. I did the same then touched the portkey, feeling it pull me to another place. I saw Hermione in front of me, standing in a small bare room.
'Hello. You'll need this for your suitcases. They need to be of muggle standards and I will direct you to your flight,' said a friendly witch.
'Off to another adventure, Hermione,'
'Yeah,'
She sounded a bit apprehensive. Probably worried about Georgia. I followed the guide who was helpfully pushing the trolley while I examined my surroundings. A huge building full of different looking muggles.
'Hermione are flights scary,' I asked.
'No not really, besides they have vomit bags,' she replied laughing.
Good thing I have a strong stomach.
: )
Where should they go? What should Ron's gift be? Romance will start happening soon and I will attempt to write in Ginny or Draco's pov to do their side of the story. Again thanks for the reviews.