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Chapter 5
is finally here!!!! *Wai wai*!!!!! Isn't
this great? I finally got around to writing this thing,
and since I
promised it'd be out on by my birthday (August 10th,
I'm 16!!!), here it is.
*IMPORTANT!
MY NEXT DEADLINE!* Just wanted 2 say, I'm
going 2 Las Vegas on the 25th (I
LUV LAS
VEGAS!!! [even though I can't gamble]), so don't expect
chapter 6 anytime soon. In fact,
don't
expect it before the beginning of the school year.
I'll try 2 get it out during Rosh Hashanah
or Yom Kippur
or something. Maybe Columbus Day, maybe not.
I'll promise it before Thanksgiving
though, and
I'll aim for before Halloween, okay? If not, oh
well. I've got a lot of summer homework,
so I
don't have much time, and seeing as I won't have a
laptop with me in Las Vegas, *sigh*.
oops,
I've been rambling. anywayz, here's the first
batch of thank-yous!! I told u I'd get 2 them.
You're
listed alphabetically. Sorry if I didn't include
everyone, but I can't read all of the reviews
anymore, only
the last 50. *Gomen*. It's not my fault.
Allie:
_ to you 2. I'm glad you liked it (I hope).
ayu:
arigato arigato arigato. i'm on chapter five now, but
i'll get to chapter 6. i hope u enjoy, and
thanks 4 the compliments!
CherryBlossomSakura:
yes, i speak mandarin, but not exceedingly well. i only kno
a little cuz i've
4gotten most of my lessons. duì bu qi. ^_^
anywayz, enjoy this chap, and i'll make sure 2
read ur fics.
~*Chibi
Kawaii Tomoyo-Chan*~: i'm going on!! by *kami*,
be patient! btw, i don't mind rudeness, it's
ok.
Cool Girl
hellokitty112689@hotmail.com: *mou*. patience is
a virtue u kno. i hope you've been
patient 4 this chap, but even if you haven't, thanks 4 the
review and enjoy!
Death's
True Angel: Well, you sound very civilized. Finally, a
sane fan. I much appreciate it. Here's
your .
Empress
Sarah-sama: I think i'm beginning to be sorry that
I called you Sarah-sama. And I haven't
read your fics in a while, i'm so sorry!! i'll
read them soon, i promise!! and btw, i enjoyed
those brownies you baked 4 me *smile*. but anywayz,
here's the next chap, i hope you enjoy
it.
eriolmadison:
yes, the chapters are short. gomen. I don't have
the will for longer ones, and when
the perfect cliffhanger comes up, i just can't resist.
You liked the bed scene too? Boy, if i'd
known that bed scenes would be so popular, I might've added
more. But I might put another
one in, so stay tuned!
Fabi-chan:
you obviously haven't read .
Yoki's in there. Go and read it if you want 2 find
out who she is.
Fire Angel:
*Arigato*. I'm glad you enjoy this fic so much.
gigi:
well, i hope your curiosity is satisfied now. enjoy this
chap!
Ice Angel:
Sorry, she can't tell Tomoyo. Don't worry though,
everything is gonna be all right in the
end, cuz I still got an ace up my sleeve.
jade:
u didn't like it, then u luved it. ok.
interesting. hmm...ok. thank you for complimenting my
writing! i think i suck, but obviously u don't!!
arigato!!
Jenna:
so many crazed fans. *sigh* anywayz, here's the
next chap, enjoy!
kawaii_angel:
i'm glad you enjoyed this so much, and i hope you enjoy the
rest!
Kitty-san:
more s+s? Not much in this chapter, but I'll try to
fit some more in before the end.
luckydragoness:
*laugh* crazed fans, crazed fans! just calm down!!
here's the next chap, but don't
kill me when chap 6 doesn't go up 4 months!
Lullaby:
oh yeah, about that chapter 2 and 3 thing, it wuz a
mistake. i fixed it. thank you very much
for your compliments. I don't really think i'm
that good a writer, but i'm glad others do.
MelingMizuno:
beautiful, eh? Well, arigato!!
Nezu-chan^-^:
yes, i kno i'm evil. rn't i great at it? he
he he he he!! i luv being evil!! but anywayz,
here's the next chapter!! i really hope u like it!
obiwankatie:
i think i'm gonna have a stalker soon. maybe i should
hire a bodyguard. don't et
hysterical on me, here's the next chap!
Randi
randi_ma@hotmail.com: i dunno if i'll e-mail u,
but if i do, u'll kno. i kno i'm keeping u in
suspense. it's my goal. wut else r cliffhangers
4? enjoy!
Raven*Night:
i do believe that ur review is the best one i've read so
far. full of compliments and
emotion. ^_^ well, i hope you enjoy this chap, and if
i ever make a CCS site, ur review is
going up as one of my favorites.
Re-chan
refumi@juno.com: u knew it wuz gonna be yoki? how did u
kno? please, tell me. well, i guess
u could deduct it. i made it kinda obvious, i guess, but
not 2 obvious. smart girl.
Ryuuoojo:
i kno, i kno, but it's not my fault!! i hate my
internet service!!! i want a cable modem!!! oh
well. maybe i can get a laptop instead. but anywayz,
enjoy this chap!
rynne:
i'm continuing, i'm continuing!
sakurablaze:
is dat the Japanese name or the nelvana name? it's
reedington park 4 nelvana, isn't it?
my god, i can't believe i couldn't remember. i
feel so ashamed. *hangs head* i enjoyed ur
reviews. it'll be another favorite on my list.
SAKURAnTOKYO:
okay okay okay!! i'm going on!!! just calm down
girl!!!! whew!
Silver:
yes, they got sent back. ok, i'm writing more!
Silver
Goddess setsuna_cardcaptors@usa.net (aka the person formally
known as Setsuna but is now
Silver Goddess setsuna_cardcaptors@usa.net): *Onegai*,
get a shorter pen name. i can't
type all dat again!! but anywayz, u wanna know who yoki
is? go reread . i hope you
enjoy this chap.
Siu Saki:
i kno i gotta continue. just be patient.
Siu Ying:
you kno, i had a friend named su ying. she's in
college now though. anywayz, I know I'm
mean. He he he. 15 reviews!!! It will always be
15 reviews!!!
Snoopy2000:
someone with a brain!! u remember Yoki!! Wai
wai!! i luv u! thank you for
remembering!!
~
Snowflake Angel ~: it's surprising, eh? bet u
never thought it wuz gonna b yoki. i do have my
moments of genius, thank you. enjoy the chap!
SpinelMew:
Ok ok!! Don't go haywire on me, here's the next
chapter!
S+S:
yeah yeah yeah, here's the next chapter, be patient
(it's a virtue), now enjoy!
Ssfan:
you can't stand suspense, huh? 2 bad, there's a
lot in this fic, and the last chap wasn't the
end of it.
Syaoran:
arigato! i kno my chapters are short, but I'm so
lazy. ^_^' he he. S+S is the best!!
Van Fanel:
oh yeah, winter vacation, i kno i said dat, but didn't you
read my rambling in chapter 2?
my internet service sucks. more excuses in my
profile. but i promise to get things out by
when i say now. again, read the profile for my
deadlines. thank you for your compliments,
and i hope you enjoy this chapter.
Yaten-chan:
Oi, you liked the bed scene, eh? I am so embarrassed over
that scene. I don't kno how
I gathered the will to write it. But, since you liked it so
much, I might add another. Hee
hee hee.
geezes, my
thank-yous might be longer than the actual chapter!
anywayz, enjoy!
Disclaimer: CCS doesn't belong to
me. Do you really have to keep reminding me that I only own
Yoki
and the idea
behind this fic? You're so mean!! *SOB*
Betrayed
Chapter
Five
Key
means someone talking
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means thoughts
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means scene change
{...} means
author's notes
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means Japanese words whose definitions will appear at the end
Yoki
laughed a high, evil laugh, one that was filled with bitterness
and made Sakura cringe. Yes,
Syaoran-kun,
it's me, Yoki. Surprised to see me?
Syaoran only gaped. Stunned speechless, I see.
Yoki then
turned to Sakura, her black robes swirling. And you
Kinomoto-san, simply dumbfounded.
You always
were a *baka*.
At this,
Sakura frowned. Yoki, what are you doing here?
You're not...you're not the evil force we've
been
researching...are you?
My
my, how perceptive, Kinomoto-san! Yoki proclaimed
sarcastically. She laughed again. Yes, I'm
the evil
force. Why, you want to know? she asked, seeing the
question coming. Well, truthfully,
it's all
your fault, Syaoran-kun.
MY
fault??
Yes,
your fault, Yoki spat angrily. When you left me
and killed yourself, you broke my heart. I
loved
you!! I loved you, and you said you loved me back!!
You said you loved me!!"
~Flashback~
Syaoran,
what is it? Why did you need to see me so
urgently? Yoki looked up into Syaoran's face,
her eyes full
of love and confusion, as well as a hint of worry.
Yoki,
I need to tell you something. And it's hard for my to
say, because I've only said it to one
other
person. wo...*wo ài ni*
~End
Flashback~
But
you lied. You lied straight to my face, and then divorced
me when our marriage hadn't even
lasted a
week. You left me for that whore! Yoki shouted,
pointing to Sakura.
Syaoran was cut off when he was shoved to the ground by an
invisible hand.
Don't
interrupt. So, to sum it up, I'm back for
revenge. With that, she built a black ball of energy
in her hand
and shot it at the trio.
Sakura screamed.
Yoki
scoffed. Your pathetic powers are no match against
me. The ball of energy smashed against
the shield
and struggled to get through. Finally, shield broke and the
three were blown back against
the concrete
ground.
someone shouted.
Sakura moaned. Her head was pounding. She opened her
eyes and brought her hand up to
her forehead,
then stared at the blood that was smeared on her fingers.
She tried to get up, but
could only
prop herself up on her elbows. She slowly looked around
her. Yoki was floating above
them,
savoring the moment. Eriol was a few feet away from her and
had managed to stand. He
looked fine
except for a gash on his cheek and his dazed eyes. Syaoran,
on the other hand, was
bleeding from
head to toe. There was a long cut on his arm and his shirt
and pants were soaked. He
had called
his sword forth and was trying to stand up with it's
support. After a few tries, he finally
gave up and
stayed kneeling.
Sakura mumbled, reaching for him. She pushed herself up to
a sitting position.
How
pitiful, Yoki said dispassionately. Weaklings,
all of you. It's was so easy to destroy you.
She started
building another ball of energy.
'By kami,
I have to think of something!!' Sakura thought.
We can't fight her, we're not ready! We
need to get
away!' Then, the perfect solution came to her.
Illusion! Display hundreds of images of
us!
Suddenly,
countless copies of Sakura, Syaoran, and Eriol appeared and
blocked Yoki's view. Damn it
Kinomoto-san!
she shrieked. While she was trying to get around the images
illusion had created,
Eriol then
went to help Sakura and Syaoran, and they managed to slip away.
The three
teenagers didn't stop until they reached Sakura and
Syaoran's apartment. Sakura called
back
illusion, then knocked on the door. Kero-chan, open
up.
That
was quick. Didn't you go to the restaura...
Kero's mouth went dry at the site of the trio.
Sakura,
what happened?? he cried.
We
ran into the evil force. Quick, Eriol-kun, we have to help
Syaoran.
The
evil force? Who is it? Sakura, tell me!
Kero flew around, trying to get an answer.
Let's
lay him down on the sofa. Eriol half-led,
half-dragged Syaoran there and lay him down.
By
kami...I feel like I've just been tortured, Syaoran
muttered.
Well,
it was close enough. You're bleeding all over.
Come on, we have to wrap up your wounds.
The
doorbell rang. Kero stopped asking questions and went into
stuffed toy mode. Who could that
be?
Sakura wondered.
I'll
get it, Sakura-chan. You get the bandages.
All
right Eriol-kun. Sakura ran off to the bedroom and
rummaged around. After a few moments,
she located
the first aid kit and went back to the living room.
Eriol-kun, I found the bandages...
She trailed
off when she saw who was at the door.
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{wanna know
who it is?}
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{you really
wanna kno?}
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{you really
Really wanna kno?}
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{you really
Really REALLY wanna kno?}
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{well, okay}
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Definitions
Wai -
Yeah!
Gomen -
Sorry
Kami - God
Mou - Geez
Arigato -
thank you
Onegai -
please
Baka -
idiot, stupid, etc.
wo ài ni
- I love you in Chinese
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Oh my
god. I do believe that this is my best cliff-hanger
ever!!!! HA HA HA HA HA!!!!! I'm laughing
myself silly
over this! *snicker snicker* I'm hoping you all
know why Tomoyo's here. If you don't, go
back and read
the fight scene more carefully. There's a one line
clue. *waiting until you've found
the
clue* Now you know, huh? I luv this!!! And now
you all have to wait till i write and post the next
chapter!!!!!!!!
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yours
truly,
the
exceptionally evil Sakura-chan
August 10,
2001
It's my
birthday!! I'm 16!! I got a diamond
necklace!! Wai wai!!!
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This is
just telling you that I want 15 reviews. I forgot 2 mention that
before.
September
09, 2001