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Chapter 5 is finally here!!!! *Wai wai*!!!!! Isn't this great? I finally got around to writing this thing,
and since I promised it'd be out on by my birthday (August 10th, I'm 16!!!), here it is.

*IMPORTANT! MY NEXT DEADLINE!* Just wanted 2 say, I'm going 2 Las Vegas on the 25th (I
LUV LAS VEGAS!!! [even though I can't gamble]), so don't expect chapter 6 anytime soon. In fact,
don't expect it before the beginning of the school year. I'll try 2 get it out during Rosh Hashanah
or Yom Kippur or something. Maybe Columbus Day, maybe not. I'll promise it before Thanksgiving
though, and I'll aim for before Halloween, okay? If not, oh well. I've got a lot of summer homework,
so I don't have much time, and seeing as I won't have a laptop with me in Las Vegas, *sigh*.

oops, I've been rambling. anywayz, here's the first batch of thank-yous!! I told u I'd get 2 them.
You're listed alphabetically. Sorry if I didn't include everyone, but I can't read all of the reviews
anymore, only the last 50. *Gomen*. It's not my fault.

Allie: _ to you 2. I'm glad you liked it (I hope).
ayu: arigato arigato arigato. i'm on chapter five now, but i'll get to chapter 6. i hope u enjoy, and
thanks 4 the compliments!
CherryBlossomSakura: yes, i speak mandarin, but not exceedingly well. i only kno a little cuz i've
4gotten most of my lessons. duì bu qi. ^_^ anywayz, enjoy this chap, and i'll make sure 2
read ur fics.
~*Chibi Kawaii Tomoyo-Chan*~: i'm going on!! by *kami*, be patient! btw, i don't mind rudeness, it's
ok.
Cool Girl hellokitty112689@hotmail.com: *mou*. patience is a virtue u kno. i hope you've been
patient 4 this chap, but even if you haven't, thanks 4 the review and enjoy!
Death's True Angel: Well, you sound very civilized. Finally, a sane fan. I much appreciate it. Here's
your .
Empress Sarah-sama: I think i'm beginning to be sorry that I called you Sarah-sama. And I haven't
read your fics in a while, i'm so sorry!! i'll read them soon, i promise!! and btw, i enjoyed
those brownies you baked 4 me *smile*. but anywayz, here's the next chap, i hope you enjoy
it.
eriolmadison: yes, the chapters are short. gomen. I don't have the will for longer ones, and when
the perfect cliffhanger comes up, i just can't resist. You liked the bed scene too? Boy, if i'd
known that bed scenes would be so popular, I might've added more. But I might put another
one in, so stay tuned!
Fabi-chan: you obviously haven't read . Yoki's in there. Go and read it if you want 2 find
out who she is.
Fire Angel: *Arigato*. I'm glad you enjoy this fic so much.
gigi: well, i hope your curiosity is satisfied now. enjoy this chap!
Ice Angel: Sorry, she can't tell Tomoyo. Don't worry though, everything is gonna be all right in the
end, cuz I still got an ace up my sleeve.
jade: u didn't like it, then u luved it. ok. interesting. hmm...ok. thank you for complimenting my
writing! i think i suck, but obviously u don't!! arigato!!
Jenna: so many crazed fans. *sigh* anywayz, here's the next chap, enjoy!
kawaii_angel: i'm glad you enjoyed this so much, and i hope you enjoy the rest!
Kitty-san: more s+s? Not much in this chapter, but I'll try to fit some more in before the end.
luckydragoness: *laugh* crazed fans, crazed fans! just calm down!! here's the next chap, but don't
kill me when chap 6 doesn't go up 4 months!
Lullaby: oh yeah, about that chapter 2 and 3 thing, it wuz a mistake. i fixed it. thank you very much
for your compliments. I don't really think i'm that good a writer, but i'm glad others do.
MelingMizuno: beautiful, eh? Well, arigato!!
Nezu-chan^-^: yes, i kno i'm evil. rn't i great at it? he he he he he!! i luv being evil!! but anywayz,
here's the next chapter!! i really hope u like it!
obiwankatie: i think i'm gonna have a stalker soon. maybe i should hire a bodyguard. don't et
hysterical on me, here's the next chap!
Randi randi_ma@hotmail.com: i dunno if i'll e-mail u, but if i do, u'll kno. i kno i'm keeping u in
suspense. it's my goal. wut else r cliffhangers 4? enjoy!
Raven*Night: i do believe that ur review is the best one i've read so far. full of compliments and
emotion. ^_^ well, i hope you enjoy this chap, and if i ever make a CCS site, ur review is
going up as one of my favorites.
Re-chan refumi@juno.com: u knew it wuz gonna be yoki? how did u kno? please, tell me. well, i guess
u could deduct it. i made it kinda obvious, i guess, but not 2 obvious. smart girl.
Ryuuoojo: i kno, i kno, but it's not my fault!! i hate my internet service!!! i want a cable modem!!! oh
well. maybe i can get a laptop instead. but anywayz, enjoy this chap!
rynne: i'm continuing, i'm continuing!
sakurablaze: is dat the Japanese name or the nelvana name? it's reedington park 4 nelvana, isn't it?
my god, i can't believe i couldn't remember. i feel so ashamed. *hangs head* i enjoyed ur
reviews. it'll be another favorite on my list.
SAKURAnTOKYO: okay okay okay!! i'm going on!!! just calm down girl!!!! whew!
Silver: yes, they got sent back. ok, i'm writing more!
Silver Goddess setsuna_cardcaptors@usa.net (aka the person formally known as Setsuna but is now
Silver Goddess setsuna_cardcaptors@usa.net): *Onegai*, get a shorter pen name. i can't
type all dat again!! but anywayz, u wanna know who yoki is? go reread . i hope you
enjoy this chap.
Siu Saki: i kno i gotta continue. just be patient.
Siu Ying: you kno, i had a friend named su ying. she's in college now though. anywayz, I know I'm
mean. He he he. 15 reviews!!! It will always be 15 reviews!!!
Snoopy2000: someone with a brain!! u remember Yoki!! Wai wai!! i luv u! thank you for
remembering!!
~ Snowflake Angel ~: it's surprising, eh? bet u never thought it wuz gonna b yoki. i do have my
moments of genius, thank you. enjoy the chap!
SpinelMew: Ok ok!! Don't go haywire on me, here's the next chapter!
S+S: yeah yeah yeah, here's the next chapter, be patient (it's a virtue), now enjoy!
Ssfan: you can't stand suspense, huh? 2 bad, there's a lot in this fic, and the last chap wasn't the
end of it.
Syaoran: arigato! i kno my chapters are short, but I'm so lazy. ^_^' he he. S+S is the best!!
Van Fanel: oh yeah, winter vacation, i kno i said dat, but didn't you read my rambling in chapter 2?
my internet service sucks. more excuses in my profile. but i promise to get things out by
when i say now. again, read the profile for my deadlines. thank you for your compliments,
and i hope you enjoy this chapter.
Yaten-chan: Oi, you liked the bed scene, eh? I am so embarrassed over that scene. I don't kno how
I gathered the will to write it. But, since you liked it so much, I might add another. Hee
hee hee.

geezes, my thank-yous might be longer than the actual chapter! anywayz, enjoy!

Disclaimer: CCS doesn't belong to me. Do you really have to keep reminding me that I only own Yoki
and the idea behind this fic? You're so mean!! *SOB*

Betrayed
Chapter Five

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{...} means author's notes
*...* means Japanese words whose definitions will appear at the end

Yoki laughed a high, evil laugh, one that was filled with bitterness and made Sakura cringe. Yes,
Syaoran-kun, it's me, Yoki. Surprised to see me? Syaoran only gaped. Stunned speechless, I see.
Yoki then turned to Sakura, her black robes swirling. And you Kinomoto-san, simply dumbfounded.
You always were a *baka*.

At this, Sakura frowned. Yoki, what are you doing here? You're not...you're not the evil force we've
been researching...are you?

My my, how perceptive, Kinomoto-san! Yoki proclaimed sarcastically. She laughed again. Yes, I'm
the evil force. Why, you want to know? she asked, seeing the question coming. Well, truthfully,
it's all your fault, Syaoran-kun.

MY fault??

Yes, your fault, Yoki spat angrily. When you left me and killed yourself, you broke my heart. I
loved you!! I loved you, and you said you loved me back!! You said you loved me!!"

~Flashback~

Syaoran, what is it? Why did you need to see me so urgently? Yoki looked up into Syaoran's face,
her eyes full of love and confusion, as well as a hint of worry.

Yoki, I need to tell you something. And it's hard for my to say, because I've only said it to one
other person. wo...*wo ài ni*

~End Flashback~

But you lied. You lied straight to my face, and then divorced me when our marriage hadn't even
lasted a week. You left me for that whore! Yoki shouted, pointing to Sakura.

Syaoran was cut off when he was shoved to the ground by an invisible hand.

Don't interrupt. So, to sum it up, I'm back for revenge. With that, she built a black ball of energy
in her hand and shot it at the trio.

Sakura screamed.

Yoki scoffed. Your pathetic powers are no match against me. The ball of energy smashed against
the shield and struggled to get through. Finally, shield broke and the three were blown back against
the concrete ground.

someone shouted.

Sakura moaned. Her head was pounding. She opened her eyes and brought her hand up to
her forehead, then stared at the blood that was smeared on her fingers. She tried to get up, but
could only prop herself up on her elbows. She slowly looked around her. Yoki was floating above
them, savoring the moment. Eriol was a few feet away from her and had managed to stand. He
looked fine except for a gash on his cheek and his dazed eyes. Syaoran, on the other hand, was
bleeding from head to toe. There was a long cut on his arm and his shirt and pants were soaked. He
had called his sword forth and was trying to stand up with it's support. After a few tries, he finally
gave up and stayed kneeling.

Sakura mumbled, reaching for him. She pushed herself up to a sitting position.

How pitiful, Yoki said dispassionately. Weaklings, all of you. It's was so easy to destroy you.
She started building another ball of energy.

'By kami, I have to think of something!!' Sakura thought. We can't fight her, we're not ready! We
need to get away!' Then, the perfect solution came to her. Illusion! Display hundreds of images of
us!

Suddenly, countless copies of Sakura, Syaoran, and Eriol appeared and blocked Yoki's view. Damn it
Kinomoto-san! she shrieked. While she was trying to get around the images illusion had created,
Eriol then went to help Sakura and Syaoran, and they managed to slip away.

The three teenagers didn't stop until they reached Sakura and Syaoran's apartment. Sakura called
back illusion, then knocked on the door. Kero-chan, open up.

That was quick. Didn't you go to the restaura... Kero's mouth went dry at the site of the trio.
Sakura, what happened?? he cried.

We ran into the evil force. Quick, Eriol-kun, we have to help Syaoran.

The evil force? Who is it? Sakura, tell me! Kero flew around, trying to get an answer.

Let's lay him down on the sofa. Eriol half-led, half-dragged Syaoran there and lay him down.

By kami...I feel like I've just been tortured, Syaoran muttered.

Well, it was close enough. You're bleeding all over. Come on, we have to wrap up your wounds.

The doorbell rang. Kero stopped asking questions and went into stuffed toy mode. Who could that
be? Sakura wondered.

I'll get it, Sakura-chan. You get the bandages.

All right Eriol-kun. Sakura ran off to the bedroom and rummaged around. After a few moments,
she located the first aid kit and went back to the living room. Eriol-kun, I found the bandages...
She trailed off when she saw who was at the door.
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Definitions

Wai - Yeah!

Gomen - Sorry

Kami - God

Mou - Geez

Arigato - thank you

Onegai - please

Baka - idiot, stupid, etc.

wo ài ni - I love you in Chinese
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Oh my god. I do believe that this is my best cliff-hanger ever!!!! HA HA HA HA HA!!!!! I'm laughing
myself silly over this! *snicker snicker* I'm hoping you all know why Tomoyo's here. If you don't, go
back and read the fight scene more carefully. There's a one line clue. *waiting until you've found
the clue* Now you know, huh? I luv this!!! And now you all have to wait till i write and post the next
chapter!!!!!!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yours truly,
the exceptionally evil Sakura-chan

August 10, 2001
It's my birthday!! I'm 16!! I got a diamond necklace!! Wai wai!!!

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This is just telling you that I want 15 reviews. I forgot 2 mention that before.

September 09, 2001